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c. 2000 B.C.

"The Beginning" ("Speculations" short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
General Notes: Year not stated in story. Placed presumably based on comments made in certain episodes or movies regarding the Borg's backstory.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
     "The Beginning", by Annie Reed, is a "Speculations" type story giving us one possible portrayal of the "origin" of the Borg and the Borg Queen (on some unnamed alien planet).

c. 1600

"If I Lose Thee..." (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
See Also: 2269 - [Framing story] Set at some point after "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
General Notes: Uhura in Earth’s past due to Guardian of Forever.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2269 stories (which is when the frame story of "If I Lose Thee..." occurs).]

1776

"Veil at Valcour" (Revolutionary War short story, Enterprise Logs, 2000)
General Notes: Date of story is October 11, 1776.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 2/26/01):
     Without spoiling anything, "Veil" (by Diane Carey) takes place on the Sloop-of-War Enterprise under Captain Israel Daniel Dickenson in 1776 (the American War of Independence or Revolutionary War). I found the story enjoyable, with Carey's fondness for naval jargon appropriate since the story actually did take place on a sailing vessel. Of course, the only real connection between this story and Star Trek is the name of the ship.

1864

"A Q to Swear By" (Civil War/TNG-related short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
See Also: 2370 - William Riker portion, set after "Parallels" (TNG) but before "All Good Things..." (TNG)
General Notes: Primary characters are Thaddius Riker, William Riker, and Quinn (a "Q").
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 2/26/01):
     After having finished "A Q to Swear By" by Shane Zeranski (Strange New Worlds III), I have to say that I was a bit disappointed with the second part of the story.
     The first part focusing on Thaddius Riker's crisis on the Civil War battlefield was so intense and well done, that I was looking forward to reading the William Riker portion. I found that part however talky and uneventful, and even repetitive in some ways. It was simply another "Come on Riker, get with the program" story, with Q (the Philosopher) criticizing him on his off-again relationship with Deanna Troi and his reluctance to secure a command of his own.
     I was hoping the second portion of the story would show us this Q (which is a different one from the de Lancie character) in as detailed a light (personality-wise) as Thaddius Riker is seen in the beginning. I was also hoping the writer would go into WHY Q had saved Thaddius (which is completely glossed over in the story).
     I'm even wondering about a nitpicky continuity issue. The latter part of the story starts with William Riker's birthday party. A piece of dialogue later in the story says that Worf and Deanna have already been dating by this point.
     Now, in an earlier season, Riker had another birthday. It was shown on "Future Imperfect" (TNG), an episode only eight shows into the fourth season. The birthday in "A Q to Swear By" supposedly takes place after "Parallels" (TNG), the eleventh show of the seventh season.
     If the story happened very soon after "Parallels", there wouldn't be any problem with Riker's birthday since there were a couple of two-parters in the first half of the 7th season (including the cliffhanger from the year before) to tighten up the timeline there.
     However, in "Parallels", Worf had just had Deanna over for dinner for the first time. I don't believe we really see more of the Worf-Troi thing after this until "Eye of the Beholder" (TNG) (I could be wrong), which is many episodes later in the season.
     My point is that I don't believe Q would have spoken of Worf and Deanna dating just after "Parallels", but I also do not believe the story could occur much later in the season or it would be too late for William Riker's birthday.
     I know, nitpicky, but I thought I'd bring it up anyway.
     The main problem I guess I have with the story is that the second half does not live up to the much superior first half.

1930

"Triptych" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
See Also: 2267 - [Framing story] Set during "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS)
General Notes: Is set during the 1930 scenes of "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2267 stories (which is when the frame story of both "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS) and "Triptych" occur).]

"Disappearance on 21st Street" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Is set during the 1930 scenes of "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
     "Disappearance on 21st Street", by Mary Scott-Wiecek, presents the brief, tragic, story of "Rodent", the homeless man who accidentally picks up McCoy's phaser and disintigrates himself in the television episode.

1938

"Captain Proton and the Orb of Bajor" (DS9 short story, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001)
General Notes: October 28, 1938, is the supposed date of this Captain Proton radio drama script written by Benny Russell.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
     "Captain Proton and the Orb of Bajor" by Jonathan Bridge (Strange New Worlds IV, 2001). The release of a new SNW book has added a few more stories to the pre-TOS timeframe, so I find myself dropping back a bit again on the timeline to read this story. It is in the form of an old-style radio script.
     It is an amusing little story (more of a novelty, like the other Captain Proton stuff, than a real short story). I especially liked the authentic commercials interspersed with the story hawking "Alta-Schweitzer" tablets.
     This radioplay is supposedly written by Benny Russell. However, this seems to contradict earlier evidence about Russell's life. A note on my timeline concerning the novelization of "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9) states that Russell was a child in 1940 and that most of the episode takes place in 1953. Well, this radioplay has a date of October 28, 1938. It would seem that Russell would have been way too young to have written this story for this date. (In the 1999
Star Trek: Voyager Presents Captain Proton: Defender of the Earth book (see below) there is a mock letter from Russell as a child, which seems more accurate.)
     The nicest thing about this story is that the writer has found a different way of presenting a Captain Proton story. After reading the earlier short story in
Amazing Stories and then the entire 1999 Captain Proton book, I was just about Captain Protoned out. Also, the author managed to flesh out Russell's view of DS9 a bit as well.

1939

"The Adventures of Captain Proton: Chapter 1: The Space Vortex of Doom" (VGR short story, Amazing Stories #598, 1999)
Star Trek: Voyager Presents: Captain Proton! Defender of the Earth (VGR special, 1999)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/2/01):
     First off (in my chronological reading after "A Q to Swear By", circa 1864, Strange New Worlds III), comes the various "Captain Proton" stories. These are stories told completely in the 1940s movie series/pulp magazine style and do NOT feature the standard Star Trek characters (outside of pictures of Parris and Kim as Captain Proton and his "Ace Reporter" sidekick Buster Kincaid.
     This first story was released in
Amazing Stories (magazine) #598 (Fall, 1999). It is part one of a serial storyline.
     The rest of the stories were released in a special novelty book titled
Star Trek: Voyager Presents Captain Proton! Defender of the Earth (Pocket Books, 1999).
     The book contains several stories. Starting out the book is a full length Captain Proton novella titled "Children of the Glass." Second up is part two of the storyline started in
Amazing Stories #598 (sorry, another cliffhanger at the end of part two here and no further chapters anywhere else so far). Finishing off the volume are short stories featuring the ever-screaming Constance Goodheart and sidekick Kincaid, plus period features one would expect to find in a 1940s pulp magazine (corny looks at the future, letters to the editor [including one from "Benny Russell"]).
     The writing is deliciously bad. It can be a little hard to take. At times I found myself forcing myself to read on. Yet in small doses it's a guilty pleasure.
     Where else can you find wonderfully terrible lines such as these?
     "His job was to protect the Galaxy from the Scum of the Universe. He knew it was a full-time job, twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week. The Scum of the Universe never rested" ("Children of the Glass",
Captain Proton, 11).
     Or, "The ray of light came in through the window like a river of warmth, flowing over Constance Goodheart and her perfectly clean desk like high clouds over distant mountain peaks, like the laugh over a lover's lips, like the water of her bath around her body the night before" ("Scream and Scream Again",
Captain Proton, 91).
     Dean Wesley Smith is the perpetrator--um, I mean author of all of these stories, writing under pseudonyms such as D.W. "Prof" Smith, Lester Lee, etc.

"The Difficulties of Being Evil" (VOY short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
     "The Difficulties of Being Evil", by Craig Gibb, is a "Captain Proton" story, this time from the perspective of the villainous "Dr. Chaotica".

1942

"World of Strangers" (World War II short story, Enterprise Logs, 2000)
General Notes: Story is set on October 26, 1942.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/2/02):
     I don't have a lot to say about "World of Strangers" (Diane Carey, Enterprise Logs).
     As many recall, this story was widely criticized by some for perceived racist views.
     The story falls here in the chronology because it focuses on Captain Osborne B. Hardison of the United States Aircraft Carrier
Enterprise during the fighting in the Pacific of World War II. It is dated October 26, 1942.
     In the story,
Enterprise's sister carrier, the Hornet is sinking, and Enterprise has to find room for all of the Hornet's already launched aircraft while dodging enemy fire.
     The entire story is told in bits of dialogue spoken by Hardison and those around him. We do not really see much of the action, we hear about it instead. This makes for some interesting dialogue, but I'd also have liked to have seen more of the action on top deck.
     The focus of the story shifts to a Japanese American who has managed to get himself dropped off aboard the
Enterprise just before the action begins. He is an old acquaintance of Hardison's whom Hardison had talked into becoming a double agent for the U.S.
     When the Japanese American discovered that his family had been tossed into an internment camp, he had switched sides. Now he was confronting Hardison, demanding that the captain use his influence to get his family out of the camp.
     I won't give away the rest of the story. It is actually a pretty quick read.
     As for the controversy...Well, the way I read it the statements which incited discussion here were definitely what the captain would understandably feel at the time. I felt that the theme was that, yes the camps were wrong but betraying your country (and your principles) to make a stand wasn't the right thing to do either. In another setting, Hardison probably would have acted differently. But in the middle of a horrific war, his priorities had to be to the sailors serving under him.
     However, while I could agree with his ultimate decision as to whether or not to give in to his old friend's demands, I do have a problem with how he dealt with the friend himself in the end. It seemed like a cold-hearted decision to me and one that would most likely get the person killed. (Granted, the boy would have probably been executed if sent home for court-martial/trial.)

1953

Star Trek Special, "When the Stars Come a-Calling" (DS9, comic book story, Wildstorm, 2001)
General Notes: Takes place not long prior to the 1953 scenes in "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 1/30/07):
     "When the Stars Come a-Calling" (written by Ben Raab, art by John Lucas) shows how Benny Russell (the 1930s science fiction writer character who Captain Benjamin Sisko ("Star Trek: Deep Space Nine") apparently "becomes" while undergoing certain visions, first seen in "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9)) first got his job writing science fiction stories at Incredible Tales magazine.

"Isolation Ward 4" (DS9 short story, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001)
See Also: 1953, December 14 to 1954, April 2 - Dr. Wykoff’s notes on Benny Russell.
     1968, April 4 - Dr. Wykoff’s final entry on Benny Russell.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
     "Isolation Ward 4" (Kevin G. Summers, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001) is a Benny Russell-related DS9 story. It is composed entirely of log entries of the psychiatrist who is trying to treat Russell. It falls on the timeline between 1953 and 1954 mostly, with one last entry in 1968.
     The author skillfully shows us Russell through the eyes of another person. He also inflicts the narrator with the prejudices of the period so well that at times it is disconcerting. However, it comes across as very authentic for the period.
     [By the way, "Isolation Ward 4" won third place in the
Strange New Worlds IV contest.]

1955

"The Mind-Sifter" (TOS story, Star Trek: New Voyages, 1976)
See Also: 2267 - TOS portion of story.
General Notes: Kirk transported through time by the Guardian of Forever.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2267 stories (which is when the frame story of "The Mind Sifter" occurs).]

1957

"Carbon Creek" (ENT episode) - October 1957-January 1958 (?)
See Also: 2152 - [frame story]
General Notes: Story of T’Pol’s great-grandmother T’Mir and three other Vulcans crash landing on Earth in Carbon Creek, Pennsylvania in late 1957 while on a survey mission to study the launch of Earth’s first artificial satellite, Sputnik. Vulcans spent "three months" on Earth before being rescued. One Vulcan, Mestral, stayed on Earth. These events (Vulcans secretly living among humans) occur over one hundred years earlier than the supposed first contact between the two races in 2063 (Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [See main entry under 2152.]

1968

"Visit to a Weird Planet Revisited" (TOS story, Star Trek: New Voyages, 1976)
See Also: 2268 - Trek actors on Enterprise in "Star Trek" universe.
General Notes: "Real world" portions of story occur just after the filming of "The Enterprise Incident" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
     "Visit to a Weird Planet Revisited" by Ruth Berman in Bantam's Star Trek: The New Voyages (1976). This story was originally published in the fanzine Spockanalia #5 (1970), and is a sequel to the earlier "Visit to a Weird Planet" fan story by Jean Lorrah and Willard F. Hunt.
     The first story (by Lorrah & Hunt) showed us how Kirk, Spock, and McCoy would react to appearing on the "Star Trek" set in Hollywood.
     This story ("Revisited") shows us how William Shatner, Leonard Nimoy, and DeForest Kelley handled themselves on the "real"
Enterprise.
     I date this story on my chronology as 1968 (the real world portions, just after the filming of "The
Enterprise Incident") and 2268 (the TOS/Trek universe portions, just after said episode).
     I recalled enjoying this story years ago when I first read it. It seemed like such an unusual concept. Reading it again now, I still enjoy it (although I have since discovered that this "actors switching places with their characters" idea has been repeated in MANY fan fiction stories...there's even a "Revisiting a Visit to a Weird Planet Revisited" starring Patrick Stewart and Brent Spiner on the
Enterprise-D).
     One interesting detail is that the events discussed in the "Trek" universe segment don't seem to match any that I can recall. It is a Klingon standoff and concerns a moon being hidden with a cloaking device. Is this from some story I'm not familiar with?

1969

"The Aliens Are Coming!" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
General Notes: Story occurs immediately after the 1969 portions of "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS). Refers to events in "Little Green Men" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
     "The Aliens Are Coming!" (Dayton Ward, Strange New Worlds III, 2000) takes place in 1969 immediately after the events of "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS).
     What's really neat about this story is the creative way the author brings several separate Trek threads together. Present are Captain John Christopher (from "Tomorrow Is Yesterday"), Gary Seven et al. (from TOS's "Assignment Earth"), and Wainwright (from DS9's "Little Green Men"). I would have never thought to have tried to bring these events together, although it makes perfect sense.
     Of the stories I have read so far (in this chronological reading), this is my favorite so far.

1974

The Eugenics Wars: The Rise and Fall of Khan Noonien Singh (TOS hardcover duology, 2001/2002)
See Also: 2269 -- [Book One, Prologue, various chapters] Stardate 7004.1.
Other Dates: November 1, 1984; December 2-3, 1984; July 5, 1986; October 10, 1986; November 9, 1989 -- [various dates in Book One].
     1996 -- [Book Two] Khan as an adult.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet.]

1986

"Whales Weep Not" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
General Notes: Is set immediately following the 1986 scenes of Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home (TOS) movie/novelization.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
     "Whales Weep Not", by Juanita Nolte, is an original series based story following up on Gillian Taylor's abrupt disappearance from her home in San Francisco in 1986 (taken to the future with Kirk and company in Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home).

1991

"The Man Who Sold the Sky" (Short story, Strange New Worlds, 1998)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/11/01):
     "The Man Who Sold the Sky" (John J. Ordover, Strange New Worlds, 1998). Falls on 1991 on the timeline. A nice little send up to the Great Bird himself, Gene Roddenberry. A man on his deathbed is greeted by his creations, who "beam him up" in the end.

1994

"The Rules of War" ("Speculations" short story, Strange New Worlds 9, 2006)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 1/30/07):
     "The Rules of War", by Kevin Lauderdale, focuses on Captain Jonathan Archer's ("Star Trek: Enterprise") great-grandfather while a soldier fighting in the Eugenics Wars in 1994.

1998

"Research" (DS9 short story, Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/11/01):
     "Research" (J.R. Rasmussen, Strange New Worlds II, 1999). Timeline date: 1998. Okay, this is the first story in my read-through which made me say, "Huh?"
     I don't know if it was because it was late at night when I read it and I was tired or if I'm just slow, but I didn't really get this story. Yes, I recognized most of the references to episodes, but who exactly is this "time traveling researcher" who is writing to the producers of "Star Trek: Deep Space Nine" to tell them he's quitting?
     One line makes him sound like some early ancestor of Berlinghoff Rasmussen, the con artist Picard met in "A Matter of Time").
     As I look it over now to write this, it seems a BIT clearer, but I still don't understand the "No way to use being assimilated by the Borg at Wolf 359" line (
SNW II, 201).
     Anyway, obviously, I didn't care for this story as much as the others I've read.

1999

Spock vs. Q: Armageddon Tonight (TOS/TNG audio, 1999)
Spock vs. Q: The Sequel (TOS/TNG audio, 2000)
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None at this time.]

2001

"Assignment: One" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds 8, 2005) - September 10
General Notes: Is set immediately prior to the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
     "Assignment: One", by Kevin Lauderdale, is a Gary Seven story (the character first seen in "Assignment: Earth" (TOS)) taking place in September 2001. (Also touches on plot elements from "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS).) An excellent story, showing us a very conflicted Gary Seven, who's mission is not to prevent the attack on the World Trade Center Towers but to prevent a particular man from boarding one of those planes, a man vital to future events.

2052

Forgiveness (TNG comic book graphic novel, Wildstorm, 2001)
See Also: 2375 - "Present day" TNG scenes (majority of story); takes place during the Dominion War.
General Notes: Opening scenes of Colin Blakeney, 21st century creator of the transporter, beaming himself into space (see entries for "Vanishing Point" (ENT) (2152) and "Dead Man's Hand" (DS9 short story) (2159) for other early transporter related activities). 2052 setting is also recreated in 2375 aboard the Enterprise-E holodeck from Blakeley’s memories.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None at this time. I've read it, but I plan on making my main entry among the other 2375 TNG-era time frame stories.]

2063

Star Trek: First Contact (TNG movie)/Star Trek: First Contact (novelization, 1996)
See Also: 2373 - Borg attacks Earth, Enterprise-E enter the fray, then both travel back in time to 2063.
General Notes: Segments taking place in Earth’s past, surrounding the launch of Cochrane’s warp ship. It is revealed in "Regeneration" (ENT) that two Borg drones survived their sphere ship's crash landing in the arctic. Frozen, they are recovered nearly two hundred years later in 2153 by a Starfleet arctic research team.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None at this time.]

"A Private Victory" (TNG short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
General Notes: Story occurs simultaneously with 2063 events of Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) movie/novelization.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2373 stories (which is when the TNG-era portions of Star Trek: First Contact occur).]

"Almost... But Not Quite" (VGR short story, Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
See Also: 1996 - Major part of the story takes place at this time (scenes simultaneous with "Future’s End" (VOY)).
     2373 - Scenes taking place shortly after Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) movie/novelization.
General Notes: Features characters Dulmer, Lucsly (Temporal Investigations) from "Trials and Tribble-ations" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2373 stories (which is when the TNG-era portions of Star Trek: First Contact occur).]

2065

Federation (TOS/TNG hardcover, 1994)
Other Dates: 2062-2117 [Cochrane pre-TOS era portion of story].
     2267 - [TOS portion of story] Stardate 3849.8 to 3858.7, immediately follows "Journey to Babel" (TOS).
     2270 - Kirk and McCoy visit Cochrane monument on Titan.
     2293 - [Prologue, epilogue] Stardate 9910.1, Kirk visits Guardian of Forever.
     2366 - [TNG portion of story] Stardate 43920.6 to 43924.1, immediately after "Sarek" (TNG).
     2371 - Picard and Riker visit the Cochrane monument, a few weeks after the 24th century events of Star Trek: Generations (TNG) movie/novelization.
     "And Beyond..." - [Epilogue] New Stardate 2143.21.3.
Chronological reading notes/summary (originally written as two parts on 5/23/01 and 5/31/01):
     [part 1 of review] Well, the next item on my chronological reading of the Trek stories turns out to be Federation (Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens, 1994).
     I have just gotten to exactly halfway through the book, and thought it would be a good time to post something.
     Although this book focuses on several different time periods, I decided to use Zephram Cochrane's time frame as my point of reference as to when to read this book (as opposed to placing it among TOS or TNG books).
     The three main time periods are pre-TOS (2061-2117), TOS (2267), and TNG (2366).
     The pre-TOS time frame focuses on Zephram Cochrane and his confrontations with villain Adrik Thorsen of Earth's "Optimum Movement".
     (Note: For those who have not read this book, it came out two years prior to the release of
Star Trek: First Contact, and therefore does not recognize the events of Earth's history or Zephram Cochrane's first warp flight as seen in the film. One can only look at Federation as an alternate look at how things might have happened. By the by, the TOS and TNG portions hold up very nicely.)
     The purpose of the Cochrane scenes is to 1) set up the conflict between Cochrane and Thorsen, 2) to flesh out pre-Starfleet history a bit, and 3) to lead to Kirk and company's discovery of Cochrane with the Companion in the TOS TV episode "Metamorphosis".
     These pre-TOS portions are very intriguing, and I can't help sometimes trying to fit them in with post-
First Contact continuity. Alas, some things just don't work out, such as the role of the Vulcans, when the world wars were, and Cochrane's first warp trips. (By the way, I do like how the Reeves-Stevenses integrate the early name for Vulcans from the TOS TV show, "Vulcanians", into the story, explaining it and putting it into context.)
     Just one example of an inconsistency: In
Federation, there is a scene where Cochrane is attending a party at a colony at the moon. In First Contact, Riker tells a skeptical Cochrane that in "his (Riker's) time" x-number of people live on the moon, insinuating that this is not the case in Cochrane's time. (I have to admit that I find myself visualizing Cochrane as James Cromwell from First Contact now.)
     The TOS portions take place immediately after the "Journey to Babel" episode. There is a cute scene of Kirk, Spock, and Sarek playing poker in sickbay. Soon after, Sarek is dropped off, and a bossy admiral comes aboard. She has some very serious questions for Kirk concerning someone Kirk and company had reported as dying on an earlier mission (Commissioner Hedford in "Metamorphosis"). A recent transmission has revealed otherwise, and soon Kirk et al. are embroiled in a conspiracy involving the kidnapping of Cochrane, a missing passenger liner, and the compromising of secret Starfleet log records.
     Finally, the TNG-era portion comes just after the episode "Sarek". Picard is still feeling the effects of his mind meld with Sarek. He has to put it behind him because he and his crew are confronted by a very strange occurrence: a Romulan warbird with an all Ferengi crew. This leads them to another warbird (with actual Romulans) with a Borg artifact onboard. (One thing that is interesting about this story is that it occurs prior to Picard's assimilation in "Best of Both Worlds". Picard knows the danger of the Borg threat, but not on the very personal level he later would.) Of even more interest than the Borg technology is an even older artifact within it.
     I am now at the point where 1) Cochrane leaves Alpha Centuri B by himself to protect his loved ones from Thorsen again with thoughts of "seeing the stars and then dying", 2) Kirk has reached a standoff in retrieving Cochrane from his kidnappers and discovers that Klingons are involved, and 3) Picard's
Enterprise is under attack by a third Romulan warbird while still attempting to bring the Borg artifact aboard.
    
Federation is an excellent book that I would recommend to anyone who can overlook the discrepancies with First Contact, and particularly to those fans who like the whole overall "history" of Trek from TOS to TNG.
     The first time I "read" this story was listening to the audio version read by Mark Lenard. It is very enjoyable, but as with all audio abridgements, leaves a good deal out. There is a humorous bit of dialogue between Picard, Riker, Data, etc. concerning snipe hunting. I can't recall if it was in the audio version. I know for a fact that a lot of the historical and technical details were trimmed.
     [part two of review] I've finished reading (possibly re-reading, I'm not sure)
Federation (Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens, 1994).
     I really like this book, particularly for the unusual format the authors chose. As I mentioned in the first part of my review (of sorts), the first half of the book is mainly divided between three time periods: Cochrane's life from 2061-2117, TOS just after "Journey to Babel" (2267), and TNG just after "Sarek" (2366). There is also a prelude with Captain Kirk visiting the Guardian of Forever less then two months prior to the launch of
Enterprise-B in Star Trek Generations (2295).
     Well, in the second half we lose the pre-23rd century stuff (because near the end of the first half of the book Cochrane settles on the planetoid with the Companion...skip ahead to "Metamorphosis" (TOS) and we are pretty much caught up with the TOS portions of this book). Things start to speed up now between the TOS and TNG portions.
     Kirk and crew recover Cochrane but discover that he is still being pursued by Colonel Adrik Thorsen, who has used illegal alien medical technology to keep him alive. Soon after, Kirk and crew find themselves fleeing from Thorsen towards a singularity (black hole).
     Nearly one hundred years later, Picard and crew find themselves in combat with a third Romulan Warbird (see my earlier review if you can find it somewhere...I'll have to post these somewhere in the future I guess). They destroy it using an interesting technique (involving "ramming speed"). However, once they interface with the ancient relic they received earlier, a program within it takes over their ship. After a really cool scene where several main characters are in danger of being blown out of a decompressed shuttlebay, Picard et al. discover that the ship is completely out of their control and heading towards a certain singularity (black hole). When Data tries to learn more about the program, it takes over his body, and (lo and behold) it turns out to be Thorsen (or what's left of him).
     From there the two crews converge on the same black hole, both ending up INSIDE it and fighting to get out again (the time dilation effect allowing them both to be there at the same "time"). They are both at a disadvantage because they can't communicate with each other yet they must depend on each other if both ships are to get out. Kirk and Picard also have the option to try to save only their own ship which will doom the other one.
     The book ends with several epilogues: Cochrane back on Titan in 2061, Admiral Kirk and McCoy visiting the Cochrane monument on Titan in 2270 (just prior to
Star Trek: The Motion Picture), Captain Picard and Riker again on Titan in 2371 (just after Star Trek Generations), a look at a far future Enterprise ("new stardate 2143.21.3"), and finally Captain Kirk at the Guardian again in 2295. Seemingly the entire book is a flash of events downloaded from the Guardian to Kirk.
     Interesting tidbits in
Federation:
     The events of the destruction of the original
Enterprise (and the Genesis Planet/technology) are still classified in the TNG era (2366).
     There are rules about how Starfleet officers are supposed to communicate with others from another time period: Only the future officer/crew can initiate contact because they have the benefit of history to draw from. The crew from the earlier time period must avoid all contact or travel back with the future crew to avoid information from the future that might alter their natural development. (Seeds of a future "temporal prime directive" possibly? See quote near the bottom of this review for more info on this.)
     In the epilogues, Admiral Kirk (2075) leaves a letter for Picard to later receive (2371). Kirk does not know anything about the person he is writing to other than he/she is the captain of the
Enterprise. Picard, however, has just met Kirk in the "nexus" and witnessed Kirk's "death" on Veridian III.
     A couple of passages I really liked brought home the advantages the Trek novels have. These are things you can't "show" on screen effectively (the character's thoughts):
    
1) "Coming back at us!"
     "Photon torpedoes--two, four, six! Make him break off."
     Kirk clenched his teeth as he waited. He heard only two torpedoes fire and knew there must be damage in fire control (340).
     2) Already Picard felt his lungs demanding that he breathe. Wesley's mouth gaped open, trailing tendrils of sublimated vapor. Picard could see him beginning to struggle like a drowning swimmer. Starfleet trained its members to remain conscious for a minimum of ninety seconds after explosive decompression events, but Wesley hadn't had that training yet. Picard realized with chagrin that for himself, it had been too long since his last refresher course (345-346).
     Again, an excellent book which I think every Trek fiction fan should have read. And for those who can't get over the inconsistencies with Star Trek: First Contact, two points:
    
1) Kirk shook his head. He knew Starfleet's standing orders. Time travel to the past was possible. The Enterprise had done it herself. Now all Starfleet vessels had been given procedures to follow in the event they encountered a ship from the future and those procedures forbade communication. The reason was that the Prime Directive worked both ways. Just as Starfleet did not want to interfere in the normal development of other cultures, neither did it want anyone else to interfere in the normal development of the Federation. If information from the future were to be inadvertently transmitted to the past, new timelines might develop, ones that diverged from the Federation's natural evolution (401).
     2) Though we have drawn on established Star Trek lore for many of the events in this book, we must add that much of the early history of the Federation, and Cochrane's adventures prior to and after inventing the warp drive, are extrapolations solely of our own creation and thus could be superseded by official adventures in the years to come. Until then, we hope the audience will enjoy reading this one possible Star Trek adventure as much as we enjoyed writing it (467) -- Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens.

2075

"First Steps" (DS9 short story, Legends of Dax, 1999)
General Notes: Story indicates that the Vulcans met and established relations with the Trill prior to doing so with Humans (Terrans).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/16/01):
     "First Steps" (Kristine Kathryn Rusch, based on a concept by Jill Sherwin). 2075 on the Star Trek calendar. An interesting story of the first Dax host, Lela Dax. Lela is a junior member of Trill's leading council and is therefore not given very much respect by the Trills with more experience (that is, higher generation hosts). An unknown alien race appears in orbit around Trill (at this time, the only race the Trill have made regular contact with are the Vulcans), and won't leave. Lela tries to spur the council on to deal with the situation.
     An early Odan host is featured in this story as well. So is T'Pau. She speaks a bit with Lela of the Vulcans' recent encounter with humans (
Star Trek: First Contact).

2121

"A Girl for Every Star" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Takes place prior to the flashback portions of "Broken Bow" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
     In "A Girl for Every Star" (John Takis), young Jonathan Archer meets an alien for the first time in the person of a Vulcan girl named T’Rama. They meet at a space exploration museum, the resting place of Zefram Cochrane’s famous first warp ship, the Phoenix. Sharp-eyed Jonathan notices some details (bullet holes, thermal warping) which can’t be explained (without knowledge of the events of Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)). It is heavily insinuated that T’Rama is the mother to be of Sarek (father of Spock). T’Rama: "Someday I will have a son." Archer: "You’re sure? How do you know?" T’Rama: "I will name him Sarek" (342).
     I enjoyed this story, and probably enjoyed it the most of the three ENT stories in the fifth
Strange New Worlds collection (the first to feature ENT stories, the other two stories being "Remnant" and "Hoshi's Gift").

2135

"Preconceptions" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
     Read this one back on September 1, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Preconceptions" (by Penny A. Proctor)], "young "Trip" Tucker is the only high school sophomore applicant accepted to the prestigious Roykirk School summer honors program. Tucker (and his classmates) meet a Vulcan in person for the first time when a Vulcan instructor named Velik unexpectedly replaces their normal instructor. The class enters a very competitive college-level contest, and in the end, one can see how Tucker's feelings towards Vulcans are set in place by the events of this story."

2143

"First Flight" (ENT episode)
See Also: 2150 - Archer is chosen as captain of the Enterprise
    2153 - [frame story]
General Notes: Flashback scenes to Archer's time in the NX program, one of several Starfleet pilots attempting to be the first to break the "warp two barrier". Date is not stated in episode, but can be figured from statement in the episode, "Unexpected" (ENT) that Archer and Trip had first met eight years prior to that episode. In these scenes, "Commander" Archer's chief rival is Commander A.J. Robinson. Archer also meets "Lieutenant" Charles "Trip" Tucker, who is assigned to "Captain Jeffries'" engineering team (a nod to original "Star Trek" visual artist, Matt Jeffries; the "Jeffries tubes", access tunnels criss-crossing Starfleet starships, are also named after Matt Jeffries). A.G. Robinson is the first (human?) to deploy an escape pod while at warp. New Berlin, a lunar station, is referred to. (People living on the moon was mentioned by Riker in Star Trek: First Contact as something which has occured between Zefram Cochrane's time in 2063 and Riker's 24th century era.)
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [See main entry under 2153.]

2150

"First Flight" (ENT episode)
See Also: 2143 - flashbacks to Archer's time in NX program
    2153 - [frame story]
General Notes: Brief scene just after Archer learned that he had been selected as the captain of the Enterprise, capping off flashback portions of episode.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [See main entry under 2153.]

2151

"Shockwave, Pt. I" (ENT episode)/Shockwave (novelization, 2002)
See Also: 2152 - Main portion of story.
General Notes: Portion of story in which Captain Jonathan Archer is taken back in time by "Daniels" to just before launch of Enterprise in "Broken Bow" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
     [See main entry under 2152.]

"Broken Bow" (ENT episode)/Broken Bow (novelization, 2001) - April 16 (Starlog date)
Other Dates: 2119 - [Cochrane flashback].
     2121 - [Archer flashback].
General Notes: This is the pilot episode of the "Enterprise" television series, a prequel series covering an until then relatively unknown period in Star Trek history. "Enterprise" begins with the launch of the Enterprise NX-01, the first Starfleet ship with that name (until this series fans assumed Kirk's NCC 1701 was the first). The series establishes that there was an Earth-based Starfleet in place ten years prior to the founding of the Federation in 2161. (See 2161 entry for Starfleet: Year One for an alternate take on early Federation/Starfleet history..."Enterprise" began two years after Year One was released and contradicts many elements of that "non-canon" novel.) The state of affairs between humans and Vulcans presented in "Enterprise" is a supposed outgrowth of their first official meeting in Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) (earlier meetings actually took place, as seen in "Carbon Creek" (ENT) and the non-canon Strangers from the Sky (TOS)), more so than anything documented in "Star Trek" (the original television series) or any of its spin-offs. The "temporal cold war" sub-plot introduced here is seen next in "Cold Front" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 3/11/02):
     Broken Bow (novelization, Diane Carey, 2001) adapts the pilot episode of the television series written by Rick Berman and Brannon Braga. Although I am focusing on the novelization here, obviously some of what I say also goes for the television episode as well.
     Carey does an adequate job of adapting the script of the pilot episode. While she does not really add much in the way of new scenes not seen in the final cut of the episode, she is able to explore the characters a bit more than the show can even in two-hours. Characters like Captain Jonathan Archer and Engineer "Trip" Tucker seem a bit more fleshed out. Of course, this is always the advantage of an author writing a book over those making a television show or movie.
     I would probably rank
Broken Bow as at right about the middle of the Carey scale. It is no where near as interesting as her early classics such as Final Frontier (TOS) and Best Destiny (TOS). It, however, also does not approach the vileness of some of her later work as according to other reviewers (note: I will review each Carey book as they come along on my timeline and will present my opinions as they come...at this time I personally have not read a Carey book which I haven't enjoyed on some level and I certainly haven't had the problems which some of her most vocal critics have had with her works as of yet).
     That said, there are times when Carey seems to be forcing a sense of sentimentality on the reader, most notably when Archer and Trip do their inspection of the Enterprise (yeah, I know they're doing another riff on
Star Trek: The Motion Picture (TOS) here, but ST:TMP did it first and did it better in my opinion) and when Reed and Mayweather are watching Trip in engineering preening the warp core early in the book ("The two stood together, in their ship, among shipmates, and embraced this moment of charm," p. 37). Luckily, outside of a few awkward word choices here and there, Carey soon gets over this as she works her way into the main plot of the episode (which I will not go overly into detail here...suffice it to say they are taking a injured Klingon warrior back home when they are attacked by another alien species, the Suliban, who are working for strange beings from the future in a "temporal cold war"). Carey seems to do well when focusing on very personal matters (such as Archer's grudge with the Vulcans) and on the plot (carrying the action along, no pun intended).
     Now, for what I consider to be the most interesting thing in looking at a novelization/adaptation--comparing it with the original. Here are just a few stray insights from having rewatched the pilot right after reading the novelization. What I found most interesting while watching the pilot was thinking that in some cases the actors played certain scenes differently from how they were presented in the book. For instance, after T'Pol manages to conquer her breadstick in the book, Archer had to "manage not to groan (p. 71)". Bakula (playing Archer on the show) however simply shrugs, accepting her point with amusement. In that instance I preferred Bakula's interpretation. However, there were also instances when I preferred the novel's approach. Going back to the bread stick incident, for example, Carey speculates that maybe T'Pol's aversion to touching her food might be regional custom. Carey seems to have the same reaction that some fans had when they later saw the episode. "Where had she [or they, the writers] made up that one?" Carey actually managed to turn it into a somewhat useful observation of the Vulcans when Archer concluded "Vulcans always talked in generalizations, he was beginning to realize."
     The "shut up" joke (Archer: "Do you know how to tell him to shut up?", Hoshi: "Shut up!") works a bit better in the book (where the reader can imagine it working at least a bit better I suppose) than on the show where it fell flat.
     I like Hoshi in both, but I think the book did a better job portraying her edginess around space travel and its dangers. The scene where she is so jumpy on the bridge while they are accelerating to warp 4.4 is better in the book because it is a bit longer (before T'Pol berates her) than on the episode.
     By the way, did anyone else notice at least these two things which are different between the book, assumedly based on the original script, and the final episode? First, Hoshi's class is indoors in the book. When Archer shows up, they take a walk outdoors. On the episode, the class is already outdoors. Second, the entire "achieving warp 4.5" thing is almost completely dropped in the episode. In the book, everyone is disappointed (including Archer himself) that Archer can't be on the bridge when T'Pol orders the ship to go to warp 4.5 (Archer was still recovering from his injury). On the show that scene isn't there at all. Oh, and there are a couple scenes on the show which are not in the book. When Trip meets Archer and T'Pol for dinner in the book he just walks in. On the show we get to see him enter through the mess hall and say something about eating with the "big boys" or something like that. Also, we get a scene of Reed and Mayweather inside the shuttlepod (while the others are fighting the Suliban outside in the snowstorm) which is not included in the book.
     Well, that's enough I suppose. What's interesting to me about having read Carey's novelization is that, while I rate the book at only average, I think it made me enjoy watching the episode a bit more having read it since it helps me understand the various characters and their backgrounds a bit better.
     Oh, and two other things: 1) I definitely get the impression from both the book and the episode that "Hoshi" is her given name and not "Sato", despite however Asian names might traditionally be given (this was an earlier discussion on the board). For an example from the show, see Archer's order to "Get Hoshi to the shuttle!" I can't see Archer, just because of his particular style and personality, to have been in "formal" mode in that instance. Instead, he called her by her "first name", as he would say Trip, Travis, or ... well Reed, I suppose (but Reed is quicker to say than "Malcolm").* And 2) did anyone else notice that the words "Broken Bow" are nowhere to be found in the novelization? It simply identifies the location of Klaang's altercation with the Suliban and the human farmer as Oklahoma. To someone reading the book who hasn't seen the television episode, would he or she have any idea why the book was titled
Broken Bow? [* Note added 7/16/03: Hoshi has been referred to as "Ensign Sato" at least once ("Dead Stop" (ENT)) since I first wrote this summary, pretty much confirming her name.]

"Remnant" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Placed here on a preliminary basis (may be moved at a future time.). It is said that Reed prepares the ship’s "laser guns" at one point in this story. I don’t believe such laser guns were ever seen or referred to on the series. Indeed, it seems as if the ship only has torpedoes until adding phase cannons in "Silent Enemy" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
     In "Remnant" (James J. & Louisa M. Swann), the Enterprise crew comes upon an old Earth colony ship bound back for Earth. On board is an elderly woman and her four grandchildren. Kendra (the grandmother) lives just long enough to see her grandchildren to safety aboard the Enterprise. Boarding her ship is a tricky maneuver for Reed and Tucker however as her ship consists of wildly rotating pods. At times Reed's character seems a bit off from as seen on the show. For one thing, he is averse to leaving the ship. It’s almost as if he has a fear of deep space (which as far as I am aware we haven’t seen on the television series), enough to dread a mission aboard a shuttlepod (referred to as a "shuttle" throughout this story) or EVA in a space suit. Of course, any slight inconsistencies in character in this story and the other ENT short stories in this volume ("A Girl for Every Star" and "Hoshi's Gift") are understandable as the writers couldn't have seen much more than the pilot episode of the series ("Broken Bow" (ENT)) before having to send their entries in on time to meet the deadline.
     The biggest problem with this story is the addition of children passengers to the
Enterprise at the end of the story. This makes it a problem placing this story chronologically because Archer promises to Kendra that he will "see to it" that the children make it back home to Earth safely. Later episodes in the first season state that the ship hasn't been back to Earth though, making one wonder what happened to the children.
     (Ironically, I happened to read this story the same evening I watched "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) for the first time, another Reed-and-Trip-on-a-shuttlepod-mission story.)

"Hoshi's Gift" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Placed here on a preliminary basis (may be moved at a future time.).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
     In "Hoshi's Gift" (Kelle Vozka), Hoshi is having trouble eating and sleeping (imagining to hear the ship’s engines sounding incorrectly). This adds to her anxiety and uneasiness about being aboard the ship on its mission and affects her ability to carry out her duties. Dr. Phlox believes it is just lack of sleep and food. The real reason for her inability to sleep however reveals itself when a small orb of Hoshi’s (given to her grandmother by a Vulcan and handed down to Hoshi) turns out to be the egg of a Vulcan Firebird. The Firebird hatches, living its life out in but a few glorious moments. The experience reassures Hoshi that she is where she is meant to be.
     A nice little story if not particularly memorable. On the plus side the author speaks a bit about Hoshi's "gift" of being especially attuned to subtle nuances of sound which enables her to excel at translating different languages. On the negative side, this author also (see entry for "Remnant", another ENT story in this volume) has some trouble characterizing Reed, from his showing very protective feelings for Hoshi (not seen on the series so far) to the especially disturbing instance of the staunch Brit using the word "ain't"!

"Fight or Flight" (ENT episode) - May 6 (Starlog date)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/17/02):
     Watched episode again as part of chronological reading/viewing. In short, I like this episode. It has a nice blend of character bits, humor, and action. The two things I like the most about it are 1) Hoshi's character develops from the beginning of the episode to the end, and 2) it presents early on in the series a situation where the crew is not able to shoot their way out of danger. If Hoshi had not been able to communicate with the Axanar in the end, the Enterprise would have been invaded (and the crew most likely killed) by the hostile aliens who had earlier killed the first ship full of Axanar. The only thing I don't really care for is that I think they tried to make T'Pol a bit too annoying in this episode. She interjects something after nearly every line Archer makes on the bridge when they encounter the first ship. While she's right (and it's her duty to recommend actions to the captain) it's a bit too much and it ends up making her look a bit too smug. Archer on the other hand is portrayed well. Once he decides the proper course of action, he pursues it to the end. (Of course, it almost got them all killed this time, but who wants to nitpick?)

"Strange New World" (ENT episode) - Early May
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/19/02):
     Three weeks into mission, crew comes upon idyllic-seeming planet. Crew members who stay on the surface overnight, however, are effected by spores which make their hallucinate and act irrationally. Interesting episode and I think it was a good idea for them to explore the supporting characters early on like this (instead of focusing entirely on Archer as the lead character). However, in my opinion the episode suffers some from 1) poor decisions which put the characters into jeopardy to start with, and 2) a lack of knowledge of the characters to early in the first season. Yes, the point of the episode is to learn more about them. However, it's difficult to really appreciate how erratically some characters are acting (thanks to the pollen) when you haven't really seen them very much yet. Hindsight helps this episode (and some of the other early episodes) seem better on repeat viewing.

"Unexpected" (ENT episode) - Mid-May
General Notes: It is stated in this episode that Archer and Trip met for the first time eight years prior to the time of this episode. This would place the first meeting in the year 2143. This first meeting is later shown in "First Flight" (ENT). (The line in this episode aids in pinpointing the timeframe of the flashback scenes in "First Flight".)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/30/02):
     An interesting episode in some ways although I didn't really find the Trip-is-pregnant portion to be all that interesting. I found the sequences where Enterprise discovered the Xyrillians shadowing them and the sequences with the Klingons to be more interesting (just gotta love that old style Klingon battle cruiser. I especially enjoyed how the Klingons turned and started firing the moment Archer started talking to them! I think Archer will learn how to handle himself with Klingons very quickly (or he won't survive very long).

By the Book (ENT novel, 2002) - Late May to Early June
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/30/02):
     The first original novel based on the "Enterprise" television series is an interesting one. The story apparently fits in between the episodes "Unexpected" (ENT) and "Terra Nova" (ENT), however no specific references are made to events in "Unexpected". There are numerous references to the events of "Strange New World" (ENT) however, as two supporting characters from the episode make return appearances in this novel, Ensign Elizabeth Cutler and Crewman Alex Novakovich.
    
By the Book (by Dean Wesley Smith and Kristine Kathryn Rusch) has a pretty standard set-up for Star Trek episodes, featuring both "a" and "b" stories.
     The "a" story deals with the
Enterprise crew seeking to make first contact with two separate sentient alien species living on a planet they've come across. One race, the Fazi, is humanoid and has a culture so extremely structured that Archer has trouble communicating with them without insulting them. The other race, the Hipon, are spider-like crustacean aliens who live underwater (although they are amphibious, able to live both underwater and in the air). The Hipon communicate telepathically on so powerful a level that their first attempts to communicate with Archer's officers are seen as attacks, putting three men in sickbay. Archer is determined to forge more successful first contacts with these two races than the Vulcans did one hundred years earlier with his species.
     The "b" story deals with a role-playing game being played during off hours by Cutler, Navokovich, Mayweather, and another officer named James Anderson.
     While a bit irritating at first, jumping back and forth between the "a" and "b" stories, after awhile one adjusts and they seem to flow together better. Also, as the "a" (Fazi/Hipon) story grows more important, the "b" (role-playing) story recedes a bit.
     My favorite part of
By the Book I think is a scene between Archer and T'Pol in his ready room where they discuss the proper method for officers aboard his ship to challenge their superiors (in this case, T'Pol challenging Archer himself). It starts blustery like most of their arguments on the TV series, but gives the characters a better chance to interact and grow a bit when they actually get to discussing their opinions on the matter than the series usually provides.

"Terra Nova" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
     Crew investigates decades old mystery of old Earth colony, Terra Nova. They find the descendents of the colonists sick and living in tunnels under a surface made poisonous by radioactivity caused by an asteroid strike. The descendents, however, believe the humans to be their enemies. After rewatching this episode, I have decided that it holds up pretty well, and is a sign that the show was starting to hit all of its marks. The story (while hardly original) is well paced and well conceived, and the characters are finally starting to really work well together.

"The Andorian Incident" (ENT episode) - June 16-17
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
     Archer decides to pay a visit to a Vulcan sanctuary. There he, Trip, and T’Pol are taken captive by Andorians who had earlier taken the Vulcans hostage (at the beginning of the episode). It is explained that the Vulcans and Andorians have had hostilities for each other for quite awhile and that the Andorians believe the Vulcans have a secret listening post at the sanctuary to spy on the Andorians. While trying to overcome the Andorians and rescue the Vulcan monks, Archer discovers that what the Andorians have been saying is true. In "The Andorian Incident" we reach the first really top rate "Enterprise" episode in my opinion. Starting off, we have the "return" of one of the classic TOS alien races, the Andorians (first seen in "Journey to Babel" (TOS)). Almost entirely omitted from the later Star Trek series (TNG, DS9, VOY) outside of the occasional mention, this automatically made many fans anticipate this episode. (Furthermore, since "Enterprise" is a prequel series to TOS, I would assume this marks the earliest chronological appearance of the Andorians anywhere on my chronological reading project with the possible exception of flashback appearances in "earlier" stories.) Adding to the interest in the Andorians is the discovery that there have been hostilities between them and the Vulcans, to the extent that the Vulcans have been hiding an observation post. Big stuff (and not entirely popular with all of the die-hard Vulcan fans watching the show I might add). Finally, Trip delivers some of the best dialogue of the first season (so far) with lines such as, "You call that agitated?" (after T'Pol referred to a seemingly sedate Vulcan monk as such). Later, after being taken captive and watching his captain being banged up by their Andorian captives, Tripp remarks, "Now these people are agitated!" Also, after a Vulcan monk reveals a secret passageway Trip quips, "For people without emotions you sure have a gift for the dramatic!" The solitary downside of this episode in my opinion is the unnecessary comments made by Vulcans (including T'Pol) concerning humans smelling bad to Vulcans. (Why didn't we ever hear anything about this from Spock in TOS?) The scene where T'Pol reacts to the presence of Porthos (Archer's dog) in "Broken Bow" (ENT) due to her heightened sense of smell is one thing. The comments in this episode only serve to put the Vulcans in a bad light. Nonetheless, even with this the episode is one o the gems of the first season. (See also "Shadows of P'Jem" (ENT) which follows up on this episode.)

"Breaking the Ice" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Earliest chronological appearance of a Vulcan starship (not including the one seen in the 2063 portions of Star Trek: First Contact (TNG). Also the earliest chronological references to the practice of arranged Vulcan marriages (although the practice of combat by suitors as seen in "Amok Time" (TOS) was mentioned briefly in the previous ENT episode, "The Andorian Incident". Archer mentions that a Vulcan ship was seen nearby "three weeks ago" as the Enterprise explored a nebula. They did not respond to hails and left when approached. This would have been prior to "The Andorian Incident" (perhaps around the time of By the Book (ENT)?)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
     Enterprise comes upon a massive comet which Archer decides to explore. Discovering a rare mineral there, Reed and Mayweather are sent down to extract samples. Meanwhile, it is discovered that T’Pol has received a secret encrypted message from a Vulcan ship which has also arrived. Suspicious, Archer has Trip investigate. What Trip finds is that the message is personal and deals with an arranged marriage between T’Pol and another Vulcan, a marriage that she is endangering by staying on Enterprise. Although upset that Trip has invaded her privacy, T’Pol later asks for his advice in the matter at the urging of Dr. Phlox who observes her stress over the situation. Meanwhile, Reed and Mayweather become trapped on the surface of the comet, requiring Archer to ask for the Vulcans’ assistance. In the end, T’Pol stays on Enterprise, assumedly breaking her marriage agreement. Another solid episode. While playing upon the tension between the humans and the Vulcans, it avoids the pettiness of comments such as the ones about human "odor" in "The Andorian Incident" (ENT) (which, while not mentioned, is certainly on the mind of the viewer as he or she watches this episode since it deals with Archer's growing distrust of the Vulcans). There are a lot of really good bits in this episode. The sense of awe is finally captured well with the crew's reaction (aside from T'Pol) to the huge comet. The disappointment apparent on Archer's and Trip's faces when faced with the idea that T'Pol might be spying on them (you can tell that they are finally getting to like and trust her). Trip's discomfort at having read T'Pol's message and his trouble coming to grips with Vulcan customs (yet trying to aid T'Pol nonetheless). The message home (to a class of Earth children) is very good (although it really has nothing to do with the rest of the episode and could have gone in anywhere outside of Archer's mentioning the comet they are studying). Hoshi and Phlox are fun to watch as they answer questions posed by the kids, but Trip steals the scene with his reluctance to answer the "poop" question. Another really good scene is the dinner between Archer, Trip, T'Pol, and the Vulcan captain. Shades of the dinner scene in Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS). You can see from this scene that, despite trying, Archer's strengths are in exploration (he even takes the helm at one point in this episode) and not diplomacy. Oh, and before I'm done I should mention three other things. One, the musical score of this episode is excellent. Movie quality. The transitional cue right before Trip visits T'Pol in her quarters is wonderful. Two, Reed is obviously very excited at the prospect of walking around on the surface of a comet. No anxiety about extravehicular movement here (as seen in "The Remnant" (ENT) SNW V short story). And three, again crewmembers are endangered when their shuttlepod falls beneath the surface. It happened in "Terra Nova" (ENT) in much the same way. When you add to it Trip and Reed's plight in "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) you can come to two conclusions: 1) they need to start using Shuttlepod Two and 2) the shuttlepod might soon be the "transporter accident" (TOS, TNG) and "holodeck malfunction" (TNG, DS9, VOY) of the ENT series!

"Civilization" (ENT episode) - July 27-31 (July 31, Starlog date)
General Notes: Archer and company become first Starfleet officers in history (not including time-traveling officers from the future) to disguise themselves as another species of aliens to observe a more primitive society.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/27/02):
     Enterprise crew encounters a pre-industrial world on their way. Archer and an away team (Hoshi, Trip, and T’Pol) visit the surface disguised as natives to learn more about them and to discover the source of an anomalous energy signature. They discover that another group of aliens has a secret strip-mining operation in place which has been having the side effect of polluting the local water supply, causing many natives to die. Archer and company confront the other aliens, driving them away (although their technology appears greater than that of the Starfleet crew). Meanwhile, Archer develops feelings for a native woman named Riann. A good episode, although by this time the crew-disguises-themselves-to-observe-a-primitive-species has gotten pretty predictable. The story picks up a bit once it is revealed that another warp-capable species is involved behind the wings. One thing worthy of noting is that T'Pol's place in the chain of command is still under question as of this episode (according to T'Pol she outranks Trip, while Trip insists that her rank is not in Starfleet and therefore is not part of the chain of command). Trip questions her order to leave orbit (seemingly abandoning Archer), even threatening to "vent plasma" (immobilizing the ship) in the middle of a battle with a more powerful ship! The question is tabled, however, when T'Pol states that she has no intention of abandoning the captain.

"Fortunate Son" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Earliest chronological appearance of Nausicaans (first seen in "Tapestry" (TNG)). It is said in this episode that three more NX-class starships are "on the drawing board." Also, Admiral Forrest refers to pictures sent back by Archer of a comet, most likely a reference to the one in "Breaking the Ice" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/27/02):
     Archer is ordered to turn the ship around and help out a deep space merchant ship that is under attack. Once there, they find the Fortunate recovering from a battle with the Nausicaans (alien space "pirates" according to Mayweather). Travis connects with the Fortunate’s first officer (who is in command while the captain is unconscious in their sickbay) due to their common background as "boomers". However, once it is discovered that the first officer is holding a Nausicaan prisoner things soon come to a head. Before long Archer and company are trying to head off the Fortunate as they attempt to take the fight back to the Nausicaans. An enjoyable episode. I particularly like the special effects in this episode, some subtle (like the passing of a football in low gravity) to the spectacular (the cargo ship disengaging a module with Archer and company inside of it to float away and the same cargo ship warping away just seconds before an Enterprise torpedo can hit it). This is Mayweather's first big episode and it's all right. Nothing spectacular, but it does help flesh out his background some, and at this point in the series any focus for the helmsman is good (he hasn't had a lot to do so far this season). More interesting to me is the underlying theme of the episode. That change is coming to deep space travel, both for exploration and cargo purposes. The up until now autonomous "boomers" will have to adjust to faster engines and more ships invading their personal territory. Favorite line: "Any faster than that (warp 1.8) and there's no time to enjoy the trip."

"Silent Enemy" (ENT episode) - August 30-September 1 (September 1, Starlog date)
General Notes: Based on dates given in this episode and the time frame given in "Cold Front" (ENT), this episode takes place prior to "Cold Front", although it aired after that episode. As of this episode the ship's arsenal now includes phase cannons ("phase modulated energy weapons" according to Reed). (See comments on "laser guns" mentioned in "Remnant" (ENT) short story entry.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
     The episode has one of those traditional a-b type structures. The main story deals with a mysterious alien race who shows up and starts dogging Enterprise without responding to hails. On a repeat visit, they reveal their hostile intentions by attacking the ship and injuring a couple of crewmen (while temporarily boarding Enterprise). This (being just the latest of several hostile species they’ve run into with much better technology and weapons) leads Archer to reevaluate their ability to continue on their mission as currently equipped. He decides to head back to Earth to have phase cannons installed. This drives Trip and Malcolm to prove that they can construct and install the cannons themselves first. Meanwhile, the b-story deals with it being Reed’s birthday. Archer wants to surprise Reed with his favorite food and appoints Hoshi to find out what it is. It is a difficult assignment to say the least ("breaking a Vulcan encryption code would be easier").

"Cold Front" (ENT episode) - September 9-10
General Notes: First revisiting of the "temporal cold war" sub-plot first seen in "Broken Bow" (ENT). Due to amount of time given by T'Pol as to how long they've been on their mission ("four months, three weeks, six days"), although it aired first, this episode takes place following "Silent Enemy" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/28/02):
     The Enterprise becomes the staging ground for the next skirmish in the "temporal cold war" Archer first learned about months earlier ("Broken Bow" (ENT)). The Suliban, Silik, returns, this time saving the ship from a massive "anti-matter cascade" explosion. Archer is confronted by the fact that one of his crewman, a man named Daniels, has really been an agent of the forces opposing Selik’s superiors. Archer then has to decide who to trust, Daniels or Silik. Finally, the series creators give us more on the "temporal cold war," this time adding to the mystery by presenting the other side. Daniels could be lying to Archer just as much as Silik, and Silik's actions present the somewhat uncomfortable notion that perhaps Enterprise was supposed to be destroyed in that accident. His action could have either preserved the future (although how is hard to see since no one manipulated the Enterprise crew into that stellar nursery) or altered it. Doubtless, more info on this war and Archer and his crew's place in it will follow. Favorite line: Trip--"It's good to know that the Earth will still be around in nine hundred years." Daniels--"That depends on how you define the term 'Earth'." Trip--"I beg your pardon??" Another good scene is one where Mayweather is briefly in command of the bridge and at Hoshi's urging tries on the "big chair" to see how it fits.

"Dear Doctor" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
     When the ship comes across a planet suffering from an epidemic, Dr. Phlox tries to discover a cure for the species’ illness. At the same time, he wrestles with the greater issues of interfering with the natural evolution of the two species indigenous there. When Phlox does discover a cure, he and Archer disagree on principle as to what the correct thing to do is. On a side note, Phlox believes that Ensign Cutler ("Strange New World" (ENT), By the Book (ENT), etc.) is developing romantic feelings for him. My feelings are a bit mixed about this episode. The pacing is a bit slow. True, the pace of the series should be well balanced between quick action shows and slower personal stories, but this one had me at times thinking about something else (perhaps it doesn't stand up to repeat viewing as well). Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the episode, and I especially like the parts with Dr. Phlox and Ensign Cutler and with Phlox and Hoshi. The greater issue of whether or not to heal the aliens is a difficult one. While this situation foreshadows the Prime Directive in Starfleet's future (Archer even speaks of how one may one day be necessary), this particular situation is clouded by the fact that these people are aware of more advanced species like the humans and of warp drive (which would not make it a Prime Directive matter, right?). I guess what it comes down to is that Archer can no more give them a cure (advanced medical technology) than he can give them warp drive. I'm sure it is a decision many fans may disagree with. The voiceover element (Dr. Phlox narrating a letter to a colleague) is very similar to that of Data's letter in "Data's Day" (TNG).

"Sleeping Dogs" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Klingons make their third appearance on "Enterprise". The ship seen here for the first time is a Raptor-class scout ship. At one point while on the ship, Hoshi and Reed see schematics of (or at least references to) photon torpedoes. Reed says he’s never seen or heard of anything like that before (unlike the Vulcan tractor beams in "Breaking the Ice" (ENT) which apparently humans are at least aware of). Also, the Klingon woman refers to "our Birds of Prey" arriving to destroy Enterprise (as opposed to the "Warbirds" mentioned in "Broken Bow" (ENT) (however T’Pol does say that there are many different classes of Klingon ships).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
     While investigating a class nine gas giant, Enterprise comes a cross a damaged vessel deep in the atmosphere. An away team (T’Pol, Reed, and Hoshi) travels to the ship to render aid. There they discover that the ship is Klingon. Soon, they find themselves trapped on the vessel as it drops closer and closer to being crushed by the atmospheric pressures. Meanwhile, Archer tries to get information out of a Klingon woman who has escaped the Klingon ship by stealing the away team’s shuttlepod. Some nice effects in this episode. The situation here is very reminiscent of a submarine drama (done earlier in Trek in "Starship Down" (DS9)). It is an interesting mix, focusing on T'Pol, Reed, and Hoshi. Without Archer or Trip present, there is no overwhelming personality present, allowing for a more equal focus. Archer finally begins to learn Klingon ways. (Why has he waited this long to study up on them? Surely he knows they will be a constant presence. Maybe there just isn't time to study various species until a specific situation arises.) Hoshi once again benefits from the spotlight. Her anxiety is diminishing and she is very strong in the scene where they are attempting to use photon torpedoes to keep the Klingon ship from sinking.

"Shadows of P’Jem" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
     Following up on the events of "The Andorian Incident" (ENT), T’Pol is ordered to leave her position aboard Enterprise. Archer believes it is to punish her involvement in the loss of the Vulcan’s secret base observing the Andorians at the sanctuary at P'Jem. On one last mission together, Archer and T’Pol once again become entangled in Vulcan-Andorian politics as they are captured on a planet undergoing civil unrest. In the end, the Andorian from the previous episode returns to rescue them to clear his feelings of debt owed to Archer, and T’Pol regains her status in the eyes of her superiors and remains aboard the Enterprise. A good followed up to "The Andorian Incident" and further developing of the relationship between Archer and T'Pol, and in a larger sense between the humans and the Vulcans.

"Shuttlepod One" (ENT episode) - November 9-11 (November 9, Starlog date)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
     Trip and Reed are on a mission in a shuttlepod when they come across debris from the Enterprise. Believing their ship destroyed, they attempt to make it to a nearby star at impulse power despite knowing that they do not have enough air to get there. The two find themselves increasingly getting on each other’s nerves as they get progressively weaker and colder. Meanwhile, Archer and his crew (who only lost a docking bay door during an accident with another ship that was trying to dock) are unaware of Trip and Reed’s distress. This is another good character-based episode playing up the differences between Malcolm and Trip's characters. It really does more to develop Malcolm more than Trip which is good because up until now he's been pretty undeveloped (a mystery to both the characters and the fans). This episode also does a pretty good job of demonstrating the real dangers of traveling in space if anything goes wrong. While not a personal favorite, this episode has been acclaimed by many and should not be missed.

"Fusion" (ENT episode)
General Notes: T’Pol has been on Enterprise seven months, placing this episode about mid-November 2151. A major distinction created here (retroactively affecting Trek history) is that the mind meld as late as 2151 was still an obscure Vulcan ritual known only to a very few. By the time of TOS and Spock (2266 and after) it seems something just about every Vulcan seems to know how to do (although at first it is considered a very intimate and therefore rare practice). It is revealed over one year later in "Stigma" (ENT) that T'Pol has contracted "Pa'nar Syndrome" from her forced mind meld in this episode.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/29/02):
     Enterprise crew comes into contact with a ship of very unusual Vulcans. This radical sect has decided to embrace their emotions just as much as the logic of Surak. Their ship in need of repairs, Archer’s crew volunteers to aid them. One particular Vulcan named Tolaris takes special interest in showing T’Pol the value of accepting her own emotions. This leads T’Pol to chaotic dreams and a dangerous mind meld experience with Tolaris. Meanwhile, another Vulcan named Kov must decide whether or not to break a self-imposed silence with his father (who rejected Kov because of his radical beliefs) because his father is now dying. An interesting episode. I really liked Kov, especially at the beginning when he had all kinds of misconceptions about humans. "Do you really eat six or seven meals a day?" (paraphrased). Tripp: "More like three." Kov's questions are both humorous and serve to show that many of the initial beliefs the human crewmembers have about the Vulcans might also be misconceptions. What I did not care for is the decision that the mind meld is not widely known by the average Vulcan just a century or so before the TOS era, making it a relative new thing to most Vulcans by Spock's time.

"Rogue Planet" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/29/02):
     Enterprise comes upon a "rogue planet", a planet which has long ago broken away from its solar system and now floats solitarily in the emptiness of space. Investigating, Archer and company discover a group of aliens on the surface hunting prey (the planet’s geothermal vents allow for lush forests and other Earth-like environments in some places). At first befriending the hunting party, Archer is confronted by a mysterious humanoid woman. The woman appears only to him and tells him that she needs his help. Initially confused, Archer finally realizes that she is one of the shapeshifting native beings whom the hunters have been slaughtering from centuries in their traditional hunts. Not able to stop the hunters directly, Dr. Phlox creates a masking agent which again levels the field between the hunters and the hunted. Okay. They finally did it. For some reason, "Rogue Planet" was the first real "yawn" ENT episode for me. I just couldn't bring myself to care too much about what was happening. Archer and crew walk around in dark forests most of the episode. It's pretty obvious early on that the woman is plucked from Archer's head telepathically (from a poem he learned as a child it would turn out). I think my main problem with this episode is its woeful lack of imagination in terms of exploring a science-fiction element as rich in storytelling potential as a rogue planet. This story really could have been told just about anywhere.

"Acquisition" (ENT episode)
General Notes: First chronological appearance of Ferengi (not including the time traveling ones from the 24th century visiting Earth of 1947 in "Little Green Men" (DS9)) (Ferengi first seen in "The Last Outpost" (TNG)). It is presumed that either 1) Starfleet does not learn the true identity of the pirates, or 2) the records are later lost because as of the "The Last Outpost" (which takes place 253 years after this story in 2364) the Ferengi are still a mysterious race Starfleet has only heard rumors about and not actually met yet.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/7/02):
     A group of Ferengi pirates drugs the Enterprise crew in order to rob the ship of valuables. They miss Trip however who is in a decontamination chamber at the time. Before long, Archer (a prisoner of the pirates), Trip, and T’Pol are working to trick the Ferengi so they can take back control of the ship. An enjoyable enough episode (although pretty predictable). It's fun watching the Ferengi taking everything they can find, including Travis's chair, unbolting from the bulkhead. It's also fun watching a Ferengi trying to communicate with Porthos via universal translator, as is the "fight" between Archer and Trip put on for their captors' benefit.

"Oasis" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Refers to the crew’s earlier encounter with holographic technology in "Unexpected" (ENT). Also makes side remark to the possibility of a holographic doctor (as ultimately seen over two hundred years later in the "Star Trek: Voyager" series).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/7/02):
     Enterprise crew investigates a crashed ship purported to being haunted in order to procure spare parts. They discover survivors of the crash living aboard and agree to aid them in repairing their systems. The mystery deepens however when they discover that there are holes in the survivors’ story. Ultimately it is revealed that there are only two real survivors and the rest at holographic recreations of the original crew. An average enough episode, although the holodeck/holograms disguised as reality story has been done many times before, making this one seem very been there, done that.

"Detained" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
     Archer and Mayweather are taken prisoner by a race of aliens at war with the Suliban because word of the Enterprise crew’s encounters with the Suliban have become well known in the area. While detained, Archer and Mayweather meet Suliban wrongfully imprisoned by the aliens and decide to engineer their release as well as their own escape. Another decent enough episode, particularly in how it continues to gradually progress the Suliban back story.

"Vox Sola" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Kreetassans return in "A Night in Sickbay" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
     After a disastrous first contact meal with an alien race named the Kreetassans, the ship is boarded by a strange web-like symbiotic creature. Soon, crewmembers (including Archer and Trip) are trapped in the alien’s cocoon like web, and Hoshi must find a way to communicate with the alien before the life is drained out them. I liked the way a simple thing like eating in public turned out to be a major breach of etiquette with the Kreestassans. The story of the alien symbiote (aside from spotlighting Hoshi's skills again) turned out to be less interesting (until the ending, when they showed the alien's homeworld and natural state).

What Price Honor? (ENT novel, 2002) - December 31, 2151-January 18, 2152
General Notes: First off, the dates given in the chapter headings, beginning with January 15, 2151, in chapter one, and as far back as December 31, 2150, in the flashbacks, are generally considered to be incorrect by most fans. The reason for this is that the Enterprise crew set out from Earth on their first mission in April 2151 ("Broken Bow" (ENT)). Therefore, most if not all dates given in What Price Honor? must be considered to be incorrect.
     Ensign Alana Hart's service record states that she was first assigned to the Enterprise on January 30, 2151. Since it is stated that she was serving aboard ship during the "Broken Bow" mission (Archer supposedly first met Hart just three days after leaving Kronos in that episode, which, again, happened in April 2151), this January 2151 date must be disregarded. However, Hart's service record gives the date of her death as January 14, 2152. This date is one year after the 2151 dates given in all of the "present day" chapter headings, so it might just be the date the author had intended all along. (Either way, I've decided to use December 2151-January 2152 for this entry based on this particular reference.)
     Further time notes: The fact that the author places this story around New Year's Day limits when this novel can possibly take place. Reed and Hart have served together on Enterprise for "a year now" as of the New Year's Eve flashbacks shown here (marked December 31, 2150). Correcting the date to 2151 would lessen that time spent serving together to about nine months.
     And to cause further timeline headaches, references are made to the following episodes: "Silent Enemy" (ENT) (Trip and Reed are still working on refining the phase cannons which it is said that "the last time" overloaded the ship's systems in that episode; it will take a review of the episodes between "Silent Enemy" and What Price Honor? to see if this is a correct statement or if it should be disregarded; there are many episodes between the two, however, so I suspect that the comment will end up being incorrect.); "Detained" (ENT) (the Suliban refugees); and "Vox Sola" (ENT) (Archer and Trip's being "half-absorbed" by the alien creature). These references are all fine as they would have taken place prior to What Price Honor? on the timeline (assuming that those episodes, which contain no dates, actually took place in December 2151). A reference is also made, however, to Zobral in "Desert Crossing" (ENT). That episode takes place in mid-February (while this novel supposedly ends in mid-January). (I see one of two options: 1) ignoring the references to "Detained" and "Desert Crossing", or 2) pushing the events dated from January 13-18 in What Price Honor? [the mission down to the planet, Alana's death, the conflict with the Sarkassians, etc.] to late February, between "Two Days and Two Nights" and "Shockwave, Pt. I". This would require even further disregarding of the dates provided in What Price Honor?, however.)
     Other notes: According to Reed, there are Starfleet regulations already in place preventing relationships between officers and their subordinates. It is stated that the ship was soon scheduled to rendezvous with a Vulcan ship, the Shi'ar (a nod to the alien race Shi'ar in Marvel's X-Men comics?), and that this rendezvous would mark the point where Enterprise would be passing beyond the farthest Vulcan exploration surveys in this region of space (an idea contradicted by following episodes?). Lt. Donna "D.O." O'Neil later appears in Stern's two "Enterprise" novels, Daedalus and Daedalus's Children. Hoshi Sato is referred to as "Ensign Hoshi" (instead of Ensign Sato). The Enterprise is mentioned as having photon torpedoes (incorrect for this time frame: Reed is unfamiliar with them in "Sleeping Dogs" (ENT), which takes places circa September-October 2151 [prior to What Price Honor?], and tells the Vissian Chief Armory Officer in "Cogenitor" (ENT) that they do not have "photonic warheads" [i.e., photon torpedoes] as late as that episode, which takes place in early 2153 [a year or more after the events of What Price Honor?]). This is perhaps chronologically the earliest case of an empty (photon) torpedo casing beings used as a casket? (First seen in Star Trek III: The Search for Spock (TOS).) Brief mention at end of novel of the discovery of parallel Minshara-class planets in a synchronous orbit, a pair of "mirror image planets". Enterprise sets out to investigate. (Never actually seen in an episode or novel?)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/28/05):
     I first read What Price Honor? (Dave Stern, 2002) back in January 2004, so I've been quite derelict in adding to my entries here. It took basically rereading the book--skimming it, actually--for me to even attempt to make a legitimate entry about it here now. As you can see, the timeline "General Notes" are plentiful, so I think I'll be brief here. In this novel (only the second original "Enterprise" novel released, after By the Book), Reed briefly becomes involved with a young ensign in his department named Alana. Alana, however, is affected by a mission to the surface of a strange planet and subsequently dies. (The novel is actually broken down into "present day" and flashback segments, jumping back and forth. So, in the "present", Alana's already been dead for several days and Reed keeps remembering back to their time together and the events of her death.) Archer, Reed, and company discover that they have gotten themselves into the middle of a conflict over sacred grounds and monuments on this planet between the two alien races that reside there. While Archer tries to settle the conflict, Reed is concerned firstmost with discovering what exactly caused Alana's death.
     My feelings about the book? While it has some problems--largely continuity ones and occasional confusion caused by the jumping back and forth between time frames--I enjoyed it more than
By the Book. Stern seems the writer most capable of writing the "Enterprise" characters so far (see also Daedalus and Daedalus's Children).

2152

"Fallen Hero" (ENT episode) - February 9 (Starlog date)
General Notes: The shore leave on Risa first mentioned here won’t actually happen until two episodes later in "Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT). The Enterprise NX-01 reaches warp five velocity (its theoretical top speed) for the first time in this episode. The events of this episode are mentioned several months later briefly in a captain's log entry in "Catwalk" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
     On their way to a much needed shore leave, Archer receives orders from Admiral Forrest to pick up a Vulcan ambassador and transport her to awaiting Vulcan ships. The ambassador turns out to be nothing like the Vulcans the crewmembers have seen before: friendly and cordial. However, she will not speak of her real mission. Soon, the ship is attacked by aliens seeking to capture her, aliens with a faster and better armed ship. (I liked the big build up to the crew reaching warp five only to discover that it still wasn't fast enough to outrun their attackers.)

"Desert Crossing" (ENT episode) - February 12-13 (February 12, Starlog date)
General Notes: The crew is again sidetracked from their trip to Risa ("Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
     Archer and Trip visit a desert planet upon the urgings of a man named Zobral. Soon, they discover that Zobral’s people are terrorists at war with their neighbors, and Archer and Trip are forced to trek across the blistering desert in hopes of escaping their captives. Meanwhile, any efforts made by T’Pol aboard Enterprise to rescue them are to be considered an act of war by the participants. [No personal critique on this episode at this time.]

"Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT episode) - February 18-20 (February 18, Starlog date)
General Notes: First appearance chronologically of Risa (which was first seen in "Captain's Holiday" (TNG)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
     Finally arriving at Risa, Archer and his crewmates separate for shore leave. Archer encounters a mysterious woman seeking revenge on the Suliban. Hoshi has a romantic encounter of her own. Mayweather goes rock climbing, and Trip and Malcolm visit the local night clubs. Meanwhile, aboard ship Dr. Phlox undergoes his annual 48-hour hibernation while Ensign Cutler stands in for him. Pretty much an average episode. Again, the Suliban and the "temporal cold war" are addressed.

"Cabin E-14" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
Other Dates: 2151 (late April)
     unknown future time period
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
     Read this one back September 5, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Cabin E-14" (by Shane Zeranski), we have] "A follow-up to the episode "Cold Front" (ENT). Dr. Phlox has the assignment of "decontaminating" the time-traveling agent Daniels' quarters. Upon finding a method of moving back and forth through time, Phlox must then fight the temptation to go back in time to save his beloved Xesophia."

"Shockwave, Pts. I & II" (ENT episodes)/Shockwave (novelization, 2002)
See Also: 2151 - Archer is taken by Daniels back through time to just before events in "Broken Bow" (ENT).
     "31st Century" - [alternate future] Archer is taken, again by Daniels, into future, causing change in timeline.
General Notes: Daniels makes cryptic comments concerning the Federation (not yet founded in 2152) and Archer sees a book in the future library titled The Romulan Star Empire (who Starfleet has not met yet at this time...they will finally meet for the first time in "Minefield" (ENT)). Novelization gives extensive flashbacks to previous episodes involving the "temporal cold war", "Cold Front" (ENT) and "Detained" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary: (written on 4/14/03):
     While visiting an alien colony, a terrible accident occurs and it appears that the crew is responsible for the deaths of thirty-six hundred colonists. They are recalled home to Earth, their mission cancelled. However, on the way back, Archer is visited by Daniels, his supposed ally from the future. Daniels explains that this is all another part of the "temporal cold war". Learning that he and his crew were not actually the cause of the accident, Archer becomes determined to clear their names. Things become complicated however, when Daniels takes Archer into his future (the 31st Century) in hopes of preventing further damage to the timeline. Instead, he discovers that by taking Archer out of the 22nd Century, he has wiped out his own present, replacing it with a devastated, post-apocalyptic wasteland. To put things back the way they were, the two have to find a way to send Archer back (although none of the time portals function any longer). Meanwhile, back in the "present", the Enterprise crew is held hostage by Silik, who finds that his own connection with his allies in the future has been cut off.
     Novelization includes more in depth look at various supporting characters, such as Admiral Forrest and Ensign Cutler, as well as extended flashbacks to previous episodes. I enjoyed these insights into secondary characters, particularly Admiral Forrest, who has to keep things from unraveling at home on Earth while Archer and company seek to clear their names. With little communication with Archer, Forrest has to stand up to increasing pressure from the Vulcans when
Enterprise does not return as ordered. I also enjoyed how the author brought together the various episodes involving the "temporal cold war" through flashbacks, giving the reader an overall understanding of what has come before, and how he presented the anger and grief the characters felt while believing that they had unintentionally caused so many deaths in a much more personal way (through their thoughts as well as actions) than the television show actors could. In conclusion, an enjoyable enough novelization, with just enough additional detail and "extra" material (not seen in the TV episodes) to keep readers interested.

"Carbon Creek" (ENT episode) - April 2152
See Also: 1957 - [October 1957-January 1958?) Story of T'Pol's great-grandmother crash landing on Earth
General Notes: Frame story takes place one year after T'Pol became an official member of the Enterprise crew, presumably meaning at the end of the first mission in April 2151 ("Broken Bow" (ENT)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 04/15/03):
     At a dinner celebrating the anniversary of T’Pol’s arrival on the Enterprise, T’Pol tells Archer and Trip the story of her great-grandmother, T’Mir, and how she and three other Vulcans crash landed on Earth in late 1957, living for three months among humans long before Zefram Cochrane’s history-making first contact with the Vulcans in 2063 (Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)). An enjoyable enough episode but one with quite a few plot holes and not particularly original. T'Mir is much like her great-granddaughter, constantly reigning in Mestral's curiosity about the humans. The choice of time (1957) is an interesting one, leading to some humorous lines ("'I Love Lucy' is on tonight"). T'Mir's giving the invention of velcro to 1957 humanity (in order to procure money to pay for a boy's college tuition, is both far fetched and out of character (not to mention historically incorrect).

"Minefield" (ENT episode)
General Notes: First encounter (chronologically) between humans and Romulans. Enterprise crew learns very little about the Romulans and does not see them, preserving the continuity established in "Balance of Terror" (TOS). T’Pol gives no indication of the relationship between the Vulcans and the Romulans, reporting that they have not yet had actual contact between the two. She is either lying or this contradicts information given in "Death Wish" (VOY) concerning a century-long Romulan-Vulcan war that would have occurred prior to 2072.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 04/15/03):
     Enterprise accidentally enters a minefield surrounding a planet they have come across. One mine seriously damages the ship, while another latches onto its hull. Reed attempts to disarm the mine, but becomes injured. This requires Archer to do the disarming with Reed’s assistance. Meanwhile, two Romulan ships decloak and warn the ship to withdraw. Another enjoyable enough episode. In some ways similar to "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) in that again two crewmembers (this time Archer with Reed instead of Trip) learn about each other while isolated together in a very precarious dilemma. Also, an interesting way of introducing the Romulans to series without breaking established continuity (although now I'm curious exactly how much T'Pol knows about the Romulans and what she's keeping from them...it sure looks like interferes with the ship's universal translator, perhaps to keep the crew from learning too much about the Romulans). Also, there are at least two huge plot holes that I saw. One, Trip is right. It should be the chief engineer going out to assist Reed with disarming the mine, not the captain. Archer says he needs Trip onboard, but it makes more sense that Trip would be more capable of working with Reed in disarming the mine, and Archer would be the better person to deal with the hostile Romulans from the bridge. Two, no mention was given to the idea of beaming Reed inside the ship. True, the transporters of this time are not very accurate and might have taken part of the mine's "leg" with it (triggering the mine in the process), but c'mon, it should have been at least suggested and rejected!

"Dead Stop" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Picks up four days after the events in "Minefield" (ENT). The ship is in need of repairs and Reed is recovering from his leg wound. The Tellarites make their "Enterprise" debut (voice only). The Tellarites first appeared in "Journey to Babel" (TOS). (The Tellarites make their first "Enterprise" appearance in "Bounty".) Oh, and Trip has still not repainted that section of the hull he knocked a shuttlepod into in "Broken Bow" (ENT) as of this episode (one year later).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/16/03):
     Still heavily damaged from the incident in the Romulan minefield, the Enterprise crew receives from passing Tellarites the coordinates of an automated repair station. Archer agrees to trade 2000 liters of warp plasma in return for the necessary repairs. Besides the advanced technology aboard the station used to repair the damage to the ship, other advances include high tech medical technology (healing Trip's leg much faster) and "molecular synthesizers", like the food replicators later used in later series (T'Pol is familiar with such "protein resequencers", having seen one on a Tarkelian vessel). The station even repairs the squeek that has been plaguing Archer in his ready room, however the station hides a sinister secret. Archer discovers that the station exacts an additional cost for its services, kidnapping Mayweather and replacing him with a corpse that is a nearly exact replica of him. Investigating, they find a room full of kidnapped unconscious aliens hooked up to machines. It is only after rescuing Mayweather that the crew deduces that the station was secretly kidnapping people from each ship it repaired and reconfiguring their brains to enhance the stations computing power. I really liked this episode. While it was obvious that there was something wrong with this station, the episode really held my interest. (Furthermore, I think pairing "Minefield" and "Dead Stop" together would make a really good "Enterprise" two hour special.)

"A Night in Sickbay" (ENT episode)
General Notes: This episode gives the time every so often (beginning with 8:47 p.m. and ending at 9:15 a.m., ship time). The Kreetassans first appeared in "Vox Sola" (ENT). Porthos was named after one of the Three Musketeers (one of "four musketeers" in this case). Humorous lines: Dr. Phlox refers to Porthos as a "bugle" (beagle), and T'Pol tells Archer that she "obviously can't keep up with you" (after clearly beating Archer in a little contest involving treadmills in the gym). Also, Archer makes two "Pillarian" (Freudian) slips within thirty seconds while talking with T'Pol ("doing the breast I can" and "send me you lips--lisp--list"). Details of Phlox's "extended family": Phlox has three wives, each of them two other husbands ("a total of 720 relationships, 42 which have romantic possibilities"). He has five children (31 in the total extended family), two daughters (one a surgeon, the other a biochemist) and three sons. The eldest son is a potter, while his estranged younger two sons Phlox "never saw eye to eye with" and hasn't seen for sometime.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
     Enterprise is in need of a replacement plasma injector (the ship routinely carries five, needing four to operate...Trip comments to Archer that he is not comfortable running with three. The turn to the Kreetassans, the alien race Archer and company had offended in by eating in front of "Vox Sola" (ENT). However, after waiting five days in orbit and then another twelve hours planetside, the landing party is sent back to the ship not knowing what they have done to offend the Kreetassans this time. Ultimately, they discover that their offense this time was committed by Porthos who urinated on a sacred set of trees. To make up for this offense, Archer is required to perform a bizarre ritual of contrition (involving a chain saw). Archer has little interest in the Kreetassan situation (who he sees as picky and overly sensitive), however, due to the fact that Porthos has contracted a pathogen while on the surface that causes his autoimmune system to collapse. Archer spends a restless night in sickbay not knowing whether his beloved pet will live or die. Dr. Phlox, recognizing Archer's unusually irritated behavior, especially with T'Pol, deduces that adding to Archer's dismay over Porthos are unresolved issues of "sexual tension" between himself and T'Pol. At first, Archer rejects this. He realizes though (especially after having a strange dream involving a funeral for Porthos and an extended "decon" session between him and T'Pol) that Phlox is correct. In the end, all is well: Archer performs the ritual for the Kreetassans (earning the needed plasma injector plus a couple spares), Porthos has a complete recovery (surprise, surprise), and Archer and T'Pol discuss issues of sexual tension, agreeing that it would be "problematic" for officers in their positions to act on such feelings. Long summary, but as you can see there are really three different related issues going on in this story: the Kreetassans, Porthos's illness, and Archer's feelings for T'Pol. This episode has drawn critical acclaim (and it is a very well acted episode), however I have to admit that I have problems with it. I think my main objections are that I don't buy two important elements, both dealing with Archer's character. One, while it has been obvious from the beginning of the series that Archer has a very close bond with his pet, I had trouble seeing him become so distraught over Porthos that he would pretty much abandon his duties as captain (he acts very similar here to how he does four episodes later in "Singularity" (ENT), however in that case the entire crew is being influenced by the spatial anomaly). T'Pol questions his priorities, and so did I. (I love Porthos as much as anybody, but there comes a point where Archer has to leave Porthos to the doctor so he can perform his duties as ship captain.) And Archer's distaste for the Kreetassans is no excuse. Trip says that Archer is a "trained diplomat" early in the episode. Can't tell that from Archer's behavior here. (It takes Dr. Phlox to show Archer that he has let his pride get the better of him. Otherwise, he probably wouldn't have ever performed the Kreetassan ritual. Second, this "sexual tension" between Archer and T'Pol seemed to come out of nowhere to me. Sure, in early episodes (particularly "Broken Bow" (ENT)) there was tension between then, however that tension was due to Archer's problems with Vulcans in general, not just T'Pol. Over time, relations actually started getting better between the two of them (Phlox observes that things have been particularly tense between the two of them lately, but there is little evidence of this in previous episodes such as "Mindfield" (ENT) and "Dead Stop" (ENT)). So I just don't buy that the sexual tension has built up so high all of sudden as to impair Archer's judgment. (Besides, anyone who watched the early "Enterprise" episodes could see that the sexual tension was between Trip and T'Pol, not Archer.)

"Marauders" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Enterprise crew learned of this deuterium mining colony from the Kreestassans (presumably at the end of the previous episode, "A Night in Sickbay" (ENT)). The shuttlepods are designed to travel up to one quarter impulse (although Trip says he has been able to get a bit more out of her). Hoshi has gotten much better are target practice than she was way back in "Fight or Flight&