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c. 2000 B.C.
"The Beginning" ("Speculations" short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
General Notes: Year not stated in story. Placed presumably based on comments made in certain episodes or movies regarding the Borg's backstory.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
"The Beginning", by Annie Reed, is a "Speculations" type story giving us one possible portrayal of the "origin" of the Borg and the Borg Queen (on some unnamed alien planet).
c. 1600
"If I Lose Thee..." (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
See Also: 2269 - [Framing story] Set at some point after "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
General Notes: Uhura in Earth’s past due to Guardian of Forever.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2269 stories (which is when the frame story of "If I Lose Thee..." occurs).]
1776
"Veil at Valcour" (Revolutionary War short story, Enterprise Logs, 2000)
General Notes: Date of story is October 11, 1776.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 2/26/01):
Without spoiling anything, "Veil" (by Diane Carey) takes place on the Sloop-of-War Enterprise under Captain Israel Daniel Dickenson in 1776 (the American War of Independence or Revolutionary War). I found the story enjoyable, with Carey's fondness for naval jargon appropriate since the story actually did take place on a sailing vessel. Of course, the only real connection between this story and Star Trek is the name of the ship.
1864
"A Q to Swear By" (Civil War/TNG-related short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
See Also: 2370 - William Riker portion, set after "Parallels" (TNG) but before "All Good Things..." (TNG)
General Notes: Primary characters are Thaddius Riker, William Riker, and Quinn (a "Q").
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 2/26/01):
After having finished "A Q to Swear By" by Shane Zeranski (Strange New Worlds III), I have to say that I was a bit disappointed with the second part of the story.
The first part focusing on Thaddius Riker's crisis on
the Civil War battlefield was so intense and well done, that I was looking
forward to reading the William Riker portion. I found that part however talky
and uneventful, and even repetitive in some ways. It was simply another
"Come on Riker, get with the program" story, with Q (the Philosopher)
criticizing him on his off-again relationship with Deanna Troi and his
reluctance to secure a command of his own.
I was hoping the second portion of the story would show us this Q (which is a different one from the de Lancie character) in as detailed a light (personality-wise) as Thaddius Riker is seen in the beginning. I was also hoping the writer would go into WHY Q had saved Thaddius (which is completely glossed over in the story).
I'm even wondering about a nitpicky continuity issue.
The latter part of the story starts with William Riker's birthday party. A piece of dialogue later in the story says that Worf and Deanna have already been dating by this point.
Now, in an earlier season, Riker had another birthday.
It was shown on "Future Imperfect" (TNG), an episode only eight shows into the fourth season. The birthday in "A Q to Swear By" supposedly takes place after "Parallels" (TNG), the eleventh show of the seventh season.
If the story happened very soon after "Parallels", there wouldn't be any problem with Riker's birthday since there were a couple of two-parters in the first half of the 7th season (including the cliffhanger from the year before) to tighten up the timeline there.
However, in "Parallels", Worf had just had Deanna over for dinner for the first time. I don't believe we really see more of the Worf-Troi thing after this until "Eye of the Beholder" (TNG) (I could be wrong), which is many episodes later in the season.
My point is that I don't believe Q would have spoken of Worf and Deanna dating just after "Parallels", but I also do not believe the story could occur much later in the season or it would be too late for William Riker's birthday.
I know, nitpicky, but I thought I'd bring it up anyway.
The main problem I guess I have with the story is that
the second half does not live up to the much superior first half.
1930
"Triptych" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
See Also: 2267 - [Framing story] Set during "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS)
General Notes: Is set during the 1930 scenes of "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2267 stories (which is when the frame story of both "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS) and "Triptych" occur).]
"Disappearance on 21st Street" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Is set during the 1930 scenes of "The City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
"Disappearance on 21st Street", by Mary Scott-Wiecek, presents the brief, tragic, story of "Rodent", the homeless man who accidentally picks up McCoy's phaser and disintigrates himself in the television episode.
1938
"Captain Proton and the Orb of Bajor" (DS9 short story, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001)
General Notes: October 28, 1938, is the supposed date of this Captain Proton
radio drama script written by Benny Russell.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
"Captain Proton and the Orb of Bajor" by Jonathan Bridge (Strange New Worlds IV, 2001). The release of a new SNW book has added a few more stories to the pre-TOS timeframe, so I find myself dropping back a bit again on the timeline to read this story. It is in the form of an old-style radio script.
It is an amusing little story (more of a novelty, like
the other Captain Proton stuff, than a real short story). I especially liked the authentic commercials interspersed with the story hawking "Alta-Schweitzer" tablets.
This radioplay is supposedly written by Benny Russell.
However, this seems to contradict earlier evidence about Russell's life. A note
on my timeline concerning the novelization of "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9) states that Russell was a child in 1940 and that most of the episode takes place in 1953. Well, this radioplay has a date of October 28, 1938. It would seem that Russell would have been way too young to have written this story for this date. (In the 1999 Star Trek: Voyager Presents Captain Proton: Defender of the Earth book (see below) there is a mock letter from Russell as a child, which seems more accurate.)
The nicest thing about this story is that the writer
has found a different way of presenting a Captain Proton story. After reading
the earlier short story in Amazing Stories and then the entire 1999 Captain Proton book, I was just about Captain Protoned out. Also, the author managed to flesh out Russell's view of DS9 a bit as well.
1939
"The Adventures of Captain Proton: Chapter 1: The Space Vortex of Doom" (VGR short story, Amazing Stories #598, 1999)
Star Trek: Voyager Presents: Captain Proton! Defender of the Earth (VGR special, 1999)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/2/01):
First off (in my chronological reading after "A Q to Swear By", circa 1864, Strange New Worlds III), comes the various "Captain Proton" stories. These are stories told completely in the 1940s movie series/pulp magazine style
and do NOT feature the standard Star Trek characters (outside of pictures of
Parris and Kim as Captain Proton and his "Ace Reporter" sidekick
Buster Kincaid.
This first story was released in Amazing Stories (magazine) #598 (Fall, 1999). It is part one of a serial storyline.
The rest of the stories were released in a special
novelty book titled Star Trek: Voyager Presents Captain Proton! Defender
of the Earth (Pocket Books, 1999).
The book contains several stories. Starting out the book is a full length Captain Proton novella titled "Children of the Glass." Second up is part two of the storyline started in Amazing Stories #598 (sorry, another cliffhanger at the end of part two here and
no further chapters anywhere else so far). Finishing off the volume are short
stories featuring the ever-screaming Constance Goodheart and sidekick Kincaid,
plus period features one would expect to find in a 1940s pulp magazine (corny
looks at the future, letters to the editor [including one from "Benny
Russell"]).
The writing is deliciously bad. It can be a little hard to take. At times I found myself forcing myself to read on. Yet in
small doses it's a guilty pleasure.
Where else can you find wonderfully terrible lines such as these?
"His job was to protect the Galaxy from the Scum
of the Universe. He knew it was a full-time job, twenty-four hours a day, seven
days a week. The Scum of the Universe never rested" ("Children of the
Glass", Captain Proton, 11).
Or, "The ray of light came in through the window
like a river of warmth, flowing over Constance Goodheart and her perfectly clean desk like high clouds over distant mountain peaks, like the laugh over a lover's lips, like the water of her bath around her body the night before"
("Scream and Scream Again", Captain Proton, 91).
Dean Wesley Smith is the perpetrator--um, I mean author of all of these stories, writing under pseudonyms such as D.W. "Prof" Smith, Lester Lee, etc.
"The Difficulties of Being Evil" (VOY short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
"The Difficulties of Being Evil", by Craig Gibb, is a "Captain Proton" story, this time from the perspective of the villainous "Dr. Chaotica".
1942
"World of Strangers" (World War II short story, Enterprise Logs, 2000)
General Notes: Story is set on October 26, 1942.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/2/02):
I don't have a lot to say about "World of
Strangers" (Diane Carey, Enterprise Logs).
As many recall, this story was widely criticized by
some for perceived racist views.
The story falls here in the chronology because it
focuses on Captain Osborne B. Hardison of the United States Aircraft Carrier
Enterprise during the fighting in the Pacific of World War II. It is dated October 26, 1942.
In the story, Enterprise's sister carrier, the Hornet is sinking, and Enterprise has to find room for all of the Hornet's already launched aircraft while dodging enemy fire.
The entire story is told in bits of dialogue spoken by
Hardison and those around him. We do not really see much of the action, we hear
about it instead. This makes for some interesting dialogue, but I'd also have
liked to have seen more of the action on top deck.
The focus of the story shifts to a Japanese American
who has managed to get himself dropped off aboard the Enterprise just before the action begins. He is an old acquaintance of Hardison's whom Hardison had talked into becoming a double agent for the U.S.
When the Japanese American discovered that his family
had been tossed into an internment camp, he had switched sides. Now he was
confronting Hardison, demanding that the captain use his influence to get his
family out of the camp.
I won't give away the rest of the story. It is actually
a pretty quick read.
As for the controversy...Well, the way I read it the
statements which incited discussion here were definitely what the captain would
understandably feel at the time. I felt that the theme was that, yes the camps
were wrong but betraying your country (and your principles) to make a stand
wasn't the right thing to do either. In another setting, Hardison probably would
have acted differently. But in the middle of a horrific war, his priorities had
to be to the sailors serving under him.
However, while I could agree with his ultimate decision
as to whether or not to give in to his old friend's demands, I do have a problem
with how he dealt with the friend himself in the end. It seemed like a
cold-hearted decision to me and one that would most likely get the person killed. (Granted, the boy would have probably been executed if sent home for
court-martial/trial.)
1953
Star Trek Special, "When the Stars Come a-Calling" (DS9, comic book story, Wildstorm, 2001)
General Notes: Takes place not long prior to the 1953 scenes in "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 1/30/07):
"When the Stars Come a-Calling" (written by Ben Raab, art by John Lucas) shows how Benny Russell (the 1930s science fiction writer character who Captain Benjamin Sisko ("Star Trek: Deep Space Nine") apparently "becomes" while undergoing certain visions, first seen in "Far Beyond the Stars" (DS9)) first got his job writing science fiction stories at Incredible Tales magazine.
"Isolation Ward 4" (DS9 short story, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001)
See Also: 1953, December 14 to 1954, April 2 - Dr. Wykoff’s notes on Benny Russell.
1968, April 4 - Dr. Wykoff’s final entry on Benny Russell.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
"Isolation Ward 4" (Kevin G. Summers, Strange New Worlds IV, 2001) is a Benny Russell-related DS9 story. It is composed entirely of log entries of the psychiatrist who is trying to treat Russell. It falls on the timeline between 1953 and 1954 mostly, with one last entry in 1968.
The author skillfully shows us Russell through the eyes
of another person. He also inflicts the narrator with the prejudices of the
period so well that at times it is disconcerting. However, it comes across as
very authentic for the period.
[By the way, "Isolation Ward 4" won third place in the Strange New Worlds IV contest.]
1955
"The Mind-Sifter" (TOS story, Star Trek: New Voyages, 1976)
See Also: 2267 - TOS portion of story.
General Notes: Kirk transported through time by the Guardian of Forever.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2267 stories (which is when the frame story of "The Mind Sifter" occurs).]
1957
"Carbon Creek" (ENT episode) - October 1957-January 1958 (?)
See Also: 2152 - [frame story]
General Notes: Story of T’Pol’s great-grandmother T’Mir and three
other Vulcans crash landing on Earth in Carbon Creek, Pennsylvania in late 1957
while on a survey mission to study the launch of Earth’s first artificial
satellite, Sputnik. Vulcans spent "three months" on Earth
before being rescued. One Vulcan, Mestral, stayed on Earth. These events (Vulcans secretly living among humans) occur over one hundred years earlier than the supposed first contact between the two races in 2063 (Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[See main entry under 2152.]
1968
"Visit to a Weird Planet
Revisited" (TOS story, Star Trek: New Voyages, 1976)
See Also: 2268 - Trek actors on Enterprise in "Star Trek" universe.
General Notes: "Real world" portions of story occur just after the filming of "The Enterprise Incident" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
"Visit to a Weird Planet Revisited" by Ruth Berman in Bantam's Star Trek: The New Voyages (1976). This story was originally published in the fanzine
Spockanalia #5 (1970), and is a sequel to the earlier "Visit to a Weird Planet" fan story by Jean Lorrah and Willard F. Hunt.
The first story (by Lorrah & Hunt) showed us how
Kirk, Spock, and McCoy would react to appearing on the "Star Trek" set in
Hollywood.
This story ("Revisited") shows us how
William Shatner, Leonard Nimoy, and DeForest Kelley handled themselves on the "real" Enterprise.
I date this story on my chronology as 1968 (the real
world portions, just after the filming of "The Enterprise Incident") and 2268 (the TOS/Trek universe portions, just after said episode).
I recalled enjoying this story years ago when I first
read it. It seemed like such an unusual concept. Reading it again now, I still
enjoy it (although I have since discovered that this "actors switching
places with their characters" idea has been repeated in MANY fan fiction
stories...there's even a "Revisiting a Visit to a Weird Planet Revisited" starring Patrick Stewart and Brent Spiner on the Enterprise-D).
One interesting detail is that the events discussed in
the "Trek" universe segment don't seem to match any that I can recall. It is a Klingon standoff and concerns a moon being hidden with a cloaking device. Is this from some story I'm not familiar with?
1969
"The Aliens Are Coming!" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
General Notes: Story occurs immediately after the 1969 portions of "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS). Refers to events in "Little Green Men" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/10/01):
"The Aliens Are Coming!" (Dayton Ward, Strange New Worlds III, 2000) takes place in 1969 immediately after the events of "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS).
What's really neat about this story is the creative way the author brings several separate Trek threads together. Present are Captain John Christopher (from "Tomorrow Is Yesterday"), Gary Seven et al. (from TOS's "Assignment Earth"), and Wainwright (from DS9's "Little Green Men"). I would have never thought to have tried to bring these events together, although it makes perfect sense.
Of the stories I have read so far (in this
chronological reading), this is my favorite so far.
1974
The Eugenics Wars: The Rise and
Fall of Khan Noonien Singh (TOS hardcover duology, 2001/2002)
See Also: 2269 -- [Book One, Prologue, various chapters] Stardate 7004.1.
Other Dates: November 1, 1984; December 2-3, 1984; July 5, 1986; October 10, 1986; November 9, 1989 -- [various dates in Book One].
1996 -- [Book Two] Khan as an adult.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet.]
1986
"Whales Weep Not" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
General Notes: Is set immediately following the 1986 scenes of Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home (TOS) movie/novelization.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
"Whales Weep Not", by Juanita Nolte, is an original series based story following up on Gillian Taylor's abrupt disappearance from her home in San Francisco in 1986 (taken to the future with Kirk and company in Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home).
1991
"The Man Who Sold the Sky" (Short story, Strange New Worlds, 1998)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/11/01):
"The Man Who Sold the Sky" (John J. Ordover, Strange New Worlds, 1998). Falls on 1991 on the timeline. A nice little send up to the Great Bird himself, Gene Roddenberry. A man on his deathbed is greeted by his creations, who "beam him up" in the end.
1994
"The Rules of War" ("Speculations" short story, Strange New Worlds 9, 2006)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 1/30/07):
"The Rules of War", by Kevin Lauderdale, focuses on Captain Jonathan Archer's ("Star Trek: Enterprise") great-grandfather while a soldier fighting in the Eugenics Wars in 1994.
1998
"Research" (DS9 short story,
Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/11/01):
"Research" (J.R. Rasmussen,
Strange New Worlds II, 1999). Timeline date: 1998. Okay, this is the first story in my read-through which made me say, "Huh?"
I don't know if it was because it was late at night when I read it and I was tired or if I'm just slow, but I didn't really get this story. Yes, I recognized most of the references to episodes, but who exactly is this "time traveling researcher" who is writing to the producers of "Star Trek: Deep Space Nine" to tell them he's quitting?
One line makes him sound like some early ancestor of
Berlinghoff Rasmussen, the con artist Picard met in "A Matter of
Time").
As I look it over now to write this, it seems a BIT
clearer, but I still don't understand the "No way to use being assimilated
by the Borg at Wolf 359" line (SNW II, 201).
Anyway, obviously, I didn't care for this story as much as the others I've read.
1999
Spock vs. Q: Armageddon Tonight (TOS/TNG audio, 1999)
Spock vs. Q: The Sequel (TOS/TNG audio, 2000)
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None at this time.]
2001
"Assignment: One" (TOS short story, Strange New Worlds 8, 2005) - September 10
General Notes: Is set immediately prior to the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written 1/30/07):
"Assignment: One", by Kevin Lauderdale, is a Gary Seven story (the character first seen in "Assignment: Earth" (TOS)) taking place in September 2001. (Also touches on plot elements from "Tomorrow Is Yesterday" (TOS).) An excellent story, showing us a very conflicted Gary Seven, who's mission is not to prevent the attack on the World Trade Center Towers but to prevent a particular man from boarding one of those planes, a man vital to future events.
2052
Forgiveness (TNG comic book graphic novel, Wildstorm, 2001)
See Also: 2375 - "Present day" TNG scenes (majority of story); takes place during the Dominion War.
General Notes: Opening scenes of Colin Blakeney, 21st century creator of the transporter, beaming himself into space (see entries for "Vanishing Point" (ENT) (2152) and "Dead Man's Hand" (DS9 short story) (2159) for other early transporter related activities). 2052 setting is also recreated in 2375 aboard the Enterprise-E holodeck from Blakeley’s memories.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None at this time. I've read it, but I plan on
making my main entry among the other 2375 TNG-era time frame stories.]
2063
Star Trek: First Contact (TNG movie)/Star Trek: First Contact (novelization, 1996)
See Also: 2373 - Borg attacks Earth, Enterprise-E enter the fray, then both travel back in time to 2063.
General Notes: Segments taking place in Earths past, surrounding the launch of
Cochranes warp ship. It is revealed in "Regeneration" (ENT) that
two Borg drones survived their sphere ship's crash landing in the arctic. Frozen, they are
recovered nearly two hundred years later in 2153 by a Starfleet arctic research team.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None at this time.]
"A Private Victory" (TNG short story, Strange New Worlds III, 2000)
General Notes: Story occurs simultaneously with 2063 events of Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) movie/novelization.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2373 stories (which is when the TNG-era portions of Star Trek: First Contact occur).]
"Almost... But Not Quite" (VGR short story,
Strange New Worlds II, 1999)
See Also: 1996 - Major part of the story takes place at this time (scenes simultaneous with "Future’s End" (VOY)).
2373 - Scenes taking place shortly after Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) movie/novelization.
General Notes: Features characters Dulmer, Lucsly (Temporal Investigations) from "Trials and Tribble-ations" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not read yet. Currently positioned with other 2373 stories (which is when the TNG-era portions of Star Trek: First Contact occur).]
2065
Federation (TOS/TNG hardcover, 1994)
Other Dates: 2062-2117 [Cochrane pre-TOS era portion of story].
2267 - [TOS portion of story] Stardate 3849.8 to 3858.7, immediately follows "Journey to Babel" (TOS).
2270 - Kirk and McCoy visit Cochrane monument on Titan.
2293 - [Prologue, epilogue] Stardate 9910.1, Kirk visits Guardian of Forever.
2366 - [TNG portion of story] Stardate 43920.6 to 43924.1, immediately after "Sarek" (TNG).
2371 - Picard and Riker visit the Cochrane monument, a few weeks after the 24th century events of Star Trek: Generations (TNG) movie/novelization.
"And Beyond..." - [Epilogue] New Stardate 2143.21.3.
Chronological reading notes/summary (originally written as two parts on 5/23/01 and 5/31/01):
[part 1 of review] Well, the next item on my chronological reading of the Trek stories turns out to be Federation (Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens, 1994).
I have just gotten to exactly halfway through the book, and thought it would be a good time to post something.
Although this book focuses on several different time
periods, I decided to use Zephram Cochrane's time frame as my point of reference as to when to read this book (as opposed to placing it among TOS or TNG books).
The three main time periods are pre-TOS (2061-2117),
TOS (2267), and TNG (2366).
The pre-TOS time frame focuses on Zephram Cochrane and
his confrontations with villain Adrik Thorsen of Earth's "Optimum
Movement".
(Note: For those who have not read this book, it came
out two years prior to the release of Star Trek: First Contact, and therefore does not recognize the events of Earth's history or Zephram Cochrane's first warp flight as seen in the film. One can only look at Federation as an alternate look at how things might have happened. By the by, the TOS and TNG portions hold up very nicely.)
The purpose of the Cochrane scenes is to 1) set up the
conflict between Cochrane and Thorsen, 2) to flesh out pre-Starfleet history a
bit, and 3) to lead to Kirk and company's discovery of Cochrane with the
Companion in the TOS TV episode "Metamorphosis".
These pre-TOS portions are very intriguing, and I can't help sometimes trying to fit them in with post-First Contact continuity. Alas, some things just don't work out, such as the role of the Vulcans, when the world wars were, and Cochrane's first warp trips. (By the way, I do like how the Reeves-Stevenses integrate the early name for Vulcans from the TOS TV show, "Vulcanians", into the story, explaining it and putting it into context.)
Just one example of an inconsistency: In Federation, there is a scene where Cochrane is attending a party at a colony at the moon. In First Contact, Riker tells a skeptical Cochrane that in "his (Riker's) time" x-number of people live on the moon, insinuating that this is not the case in Cochrane's
time. (I have to admit that I find myself visualizing Cochrane as James Cromwell from First Contact now.)
The TOS portions take place immediately after the
"Journey to Babel" episode. There is a cute scene of Kirk, Spock, and Sarek playing poker in sickbay. Soon after, Sarek is dropped off, and a bossy admiral comes aboard. She has some very serious questions for Kirk concerning someone Kirk and company had reported as dying on an earlier mission (Commissioner Hedford in "Metamorphosis"). A recent transmission has revealed otherwise, and soon Kirk et al. are embroiled in a conspiracy involving the kidnapping of Cochrane, a missing passenger liner, and the compromising of secret Starfleet log records.
Finally, the TNG-era portion comes just after the
episode "Sarek". Picard is still feeling the effects of his mind meld with Sarek. He has to put it behind him because he and his crew are confronted by a very strange occurrence: a Romulan warbird with an all Ferengi crew. This leads them to another warbird (with actual Romulans) with a Borg artifact onboard. (One thing that is interesting about this story is that it occurs prior to Picard's assimilation in "Best of Both Worlds". Picard knows the danger of the Borg threat, but not on the very personal level he later would.) Of even more interest than the Borg technology is an even older artifact within it.
I am now at the point where 1) Cochrane leaves Alpha
Centuri B by himself to protect his loved ones from Thorsen again with thoughts
of "seeing the stars and then dying", 2) Kirk has reached a standoff
in retrieving Cochrane from his kidnappers and discovers that Klingons are
involved, and 3) Picard's Enterprise is under attack by a third Romulan warbird while still attempting to bring the Borg artifact aboard.
Federation is an excellent book that I would recommend to anyone who can overlook the discrepancies with First Contact, and particularly to those fans who like the whole overall "history" of Trek from TOS to TNG.
The first time I "read" this story was
listening to the audio version read by Mark Lenard. It is very enjoyable, but as with all audio abridgements, leaves a good deal out. There is a humorous bit of dialogue between Picard, Riker, Data, etc. concerning snipe hunting. I can't recall if it was in the audio version. I know for a fact that a lot of the historical and technical details were trimmed.
[part two of review] I've finished reading (possibly
re-reading, I'm not sure) Federation (Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens, 1994).
I really like this book, particularly for the unusual format the authors chose. As I mentioned in the first part of my review (of sorts), the first half of the book is mainly divided between three time periods: Cochrane's life from 2061-2117, TOS just after "Journey to Babel" (2267), and TNG just after "Sarek" (2366). There is also a prelude with Captain Kirk visiting the Guardian of
Forever less then two months prior to the launch of Enterprise-B in Star Trek Generations (2295).
Well, in the second half we lose the pre-23rd century stuff (because near the end of the first half of the book Cochrane settles on the planetoid with the Companion...skip ahead to "Metamorphosis" (TOS) and we are pretty much caught up with the TOS portions of this book). Things start to speed up now between the TOS and TNG portions.
Kirk and crew recover Cochrane but discover that he is still being pursued by Colonel Adrik Thorsen, who has used illegal alien medical technology to keep him alive. Soon after, Kirk and crew find themselves fleeing from Thorsen towards a singularity (black hole).
Nearly one hundred years later, Picard and crew find themselves in combat with a third Romulan Warbird (see my earlier review if you can find it somewhere...I'll have to post these somewhere in the future I guess). They destroy it using an interesting technique (involving "ramming speed"). However, once they interface with the ancient relic they received earlier, a program within it takes over their ship. After a really cool scene where several main characters are in danger of being blown out of a decompressed shuttlebay, Picard et al. discover that the ship is completely out of their control and heading towards a certain singularity (black hole). When Data tries to learn more about the program, it takes over his body, and (lo and behold) it turns out to be Thorsen (or what's left of him).
From there the two crews converge on the same black
hole, both ending up INSIDE it and fighting to get out again (the time dilation
effect allowing them both to be there at the same "time"). They are
both at a disadvantage because they can't communicate with each other yet they
must depend on each other if both ships are to get out. Kirk and Picard also
have the option to try to save only their own ship which will doom the other
one.
The book ends with several epilogues: Cochrane back on
Titan in 2061, Admiral Kirk and McCoy visiting the Cochrane monument on
Titan in 2270 (just prior to Star Trek: The Motion Picture), Captain Picard and Riker again on Titan in 2371 (just after Star Trek Generations), a look at a far future Enterprise ("new stardate 2143.21.3"), and finally Captain Kirk at the Guardian again in 2295. Seemingly the entire book is a flash of events downloaded from the Guardian to Kirk.
Interesting tidbits in Federation:
The events of the destruction of the original
Enterprise (and the Genesis Planet/technology) are still classified in the TNG era (2366).
There are rules about how Starfleet officers are supposed to communicate with others from another time period: Only the future officer/crew can initiate contact because they have the benefit of history to draw from. The crew from the earlier time period must avoid all contact or travel back with the future crew to avoid information from the future that might alter their natural development. (Seeds of a future "temporal prime directive" possibly? See quote near the bottom of this review for more info on this.)
In the epilogues, Admiral Kirk (2075) leaves a letter
for Picard to later receive (2371). Kirk does not know anything about the person he is writing to other than he/she is the captain of the Enterprise. Picard, however, has just met Kirk in the "nexus" and witnessed Kirk's "death" on Veridian III.
A couple of passages I really liked brought home the
advantages the Trek novels have. These are things you can't "show" on
screen effectively (the character's thoughts):
1) "Coming back at us!"
"Photon torpedoes--two, four, six! Make him break
off."
Kirk clenched his teeth as he waited. He heard only two torpedoes fire and knew there must be damage in fire control (340).
2) Already Picard felt his lungs demanding that he
breathe. Wesley's mouth gaped open, trailing tendrils of sublimated vapor.
Picard could see him beginning to struggle like a drowning swimmer. Starfleet
trained its members to remain conscious for a minimum of ninety seconds after
explosive decompression events, but Wesley hadn't had that training yet. Picard
realized with chagrin that for himself, it had been too long since his last
refresher course (345-346).
Again, an excellent book which I think every Trek fiction fan should have read. And for those who can't get over the inconsistencies with Star Trek: First Contact, two points:
1) Kirk shook his head. He knew Starfleet's
standing orders. Time travel to the past was possible. The Enterprise had done
it herself. Now all Starfleet vessels had been given procedures to follow in the event they encountered a ship from the future and those procedures forbade
communication. The reason was that the Prime Directive worked both ways. Just as Starfleet did not want to interfere in the normal development of other cultures, neither did it want anyone else to interfere in the normal development of the Federation. If information from the future were to be inadvertently transmitted to the past, new timelines might develop, ones that
diverged from the Federation's natural evolution (401).
2) Though we have drawn on established Star Trek
lore for many of the events in this book, we must add that much of the early
history of the Federation, and Cochrane's adventures prior to and after
inventing the warp drive, are extrapolations solely of our own creation and thus could be superseded by official adventures in the years to come. Until then, we hope the audience will enjoy reading this one possible Star Trek adventure as much as we enjoyed writing it (467) -- Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens.
2075
"First Steps" (DS9
short story, Legends of Dax, 1999)
General Notes: Story indicates that the Vulcans met and established relations with the Trill prior to doing so with Humans (Terrans).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/16/01):
"First Steps" (Kristine Kathryn Rusch, based on a concept by Jill Sherwin). 2075 on the Star Trek calendar. An interesting story of the first Dax host, Lela Dax. Lela is a junior member of Trill's leading council and is therefore not given very much respect by the Trills with more experience (that is, higher generation hosts). An unknown alien race appears in orbit around Trill (at this time, the only race the Trill have made regular contact with are the Vulcans), and won't leave. Lela tries to spur the council on to deal with the situation.
An early Odan host is featured in this story as well.
So is T'Pau. She speaks a bit with Lela of the Vulcans' recent encounter with
humans (Star Trek: First Contact).
2121
"A Girl for Every Star" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Takes place prior to the flashback portions of "Broken Bow" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
In "A Girl for Every Star" (John Takis), young Jonathan Archer meets an alien for the first time in the person of a Vulcan girl named T’Rama. They meet at a space exploration museum, the resting place of Zefram Cochrane’s famous first warp ship, the Phoenix. Sharp-eyed Jonathan notices some details (bullet holes, thermal warping) which can’t be explained (without knowledge of the events of Star Trek:
First Contact (TNG)). It is heavily insinuated that T’Rama is the mother
to be of Sarek (father of Spock). T’Rama: "Someday I will have a son." Archer: "You’re sure? How do you know?" T’Rama: "I will name him Sarek" (342).
I enjoyed this story, and probably enjoyed it the most of the three ENT stories in the fifth Strange New Worlds collection (the first to feature ENT stories, the other two stories being "Remnant" and "Hoshi's Gift").
2135
"Preconceptions" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Read this one back on September 1, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Preconceptions" (by Penny A. Proctor)], "young "Trip" Tucker is the only high school sophomore applicant accepted to the prestigious Roykirk School summer honors program. Tucker (and his classmates) meet a Vulcan in person for the first time when a Vulcan instructor named Velik unexpectedly replaces their normal instructor. The class enters a very competitive college-level contest, and in the end, one can see how Tucker's feelings towards Vulcans are set in place by the events of this story."
2143
"First Flight" (ENT episode)
See Also: 2150 - Archer is chosen as captain of the Enterprise
2153 - [frame story]
General Notes: Flashback scenes to Archer's time in the NX program, one of several Starfleet pilots attempting to be the first to break the "warp two barrier". Date is not stated in episode, but can be figured from statement in the episode, "Unexpected" (ENT) that Archer and Trip had first met eight years prior to that episode. In these scenes, "Commander" Archer's chief rival is Commander A.J. Robinson. Archer also meets "Lieutenant" Charles "Trip" Tucker, who is assigned to "Captain Jeffries'" engineering team (a nod to original "Star Trek" visual artist, Matt Jeffries; the "Jeffries tubes", access tunnels criss-crossing Starfleet starships, are also named after Matt Jeffries). A.G. Robinson is the first (human?) to deploy an escape pod while at warp. New Berlin, a lunar station, is referred to. (People living on the moon was mentioned by Riker in Star Trek: First Contact as something which has occured between Zefram Cochrane's time in 2063 and Riker's 24th century era.)
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[See main entry under 2153.]
2150
"First Flight" (ENT episode)
See Also: 2143 - flashbacks to Archer's time in NX program
2153 - [frame story]
General Notes: Brief scene just after Archer learned that he had been selected as the captain of the Enterprise, capping off flashback portions of episode.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[See main entry under 2153.]
2151
"Shockwave, Pt. I" (ENT episode)/Shockwave
(novelization, 2002)
See Also: 2152 - Main portion of story.
General Notes: Portion of story in which Captain Jonathan Archer is taken back in time by "Daniels" to just before launch of Enterprise in "Broken Bow" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[See main entry under 2152.]
"Broken Bow" (ENT episode)/Broken Bow (novelization, 2001) - April 16 (Starlog date)
Other Dates: 2119 - [Cochrane flashback].
2121 - [Archer flashback].
General Notes: This is the pilot episode of the "Enterprise" television series, a prequel series covering an until then relatively unknown period in Star Trek history. "Enterprise" begins with the launch of the Enterprise NX-01, the first Starfleet ship with that name (until this series fans assumed Kirk's NCC 1701 was the first). The series establishes that there was an Earth-based Starfleet in place ten years prior to the founding of the Federation in 2161. (See 2161 entry for Starfleet: Year One for an alternate take on early Federation/Starfleet history..."Enterprise" began two years after Year One was released and contradicts many elements of that "non-canon" novel.) The state of affairs between humans and Vulcans presented in "Enterprise" is a supposed outgrowth of their first official meeting in Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) (earlier meetings actually
took place, as seen in "Carbon Creek" (ENT) and the non-canon Strangers from the Sky (TOS)), more so than anything documented in "Star Trek" (the original television series) or any of its spin-offs. The "temporal cold war" sub-plot introduced here is seen next in "Cold Front" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 3/11/02):
Broken Bow (novelization, Diane Carey, 2001) adapts the pilot episode of the television series written by Rick Berman and Brannon Braga. Although I am focusing on the novelization here, obviously some of what I say also goes for the television episode as well.
Carey does an adequate job of adapting the script of the pilot episode. While she does not really add much in the way of new scenes not seen in the final cut of the episode, she is able to explore the characters a bit more than the show can even in two-hours. Characters like Captain Jonathan Archer and Engineer "Trip" Tucker seem a bit more fleshed out. Of course, this is always the advantage of an author writing a book over those making a television show or movie.
I would probably rank Broken Bow as at right about the middle of the Carey scale. It is no where near as interesting as her early classics such as Final Frontier (TOS) and Best Destiny (TOS). It, however, also does not approach the vileness of some of her later work as according to other reviewers (note: I will
review each Carey book as they come along on my timeline and will present my opinions as they come...at this time I personally have not read a Carey book which I haven't enjoyed on some level and I certainly haven't had the problems which some of her most vocal critics have had with her works as of yet).
That said, there are times when Carey seems to be forcing a sense of sentimentality on the reader, most notably when Archer and Trip do their inspection of the Enterprise (yeah, I know they're doing another riff on Star Trek: The Motion Picture (TOS) here, but ST:TMP did it first and did it better in my opinion) and when Reed and Mayweather are watching Trip in engineering preening the warp core early in the book ("The two stood together, in their ship, among
shipmates, and embraced this moment of charm," p. 37). Luckily,
outside of a few awkward word choices here and there, Carey soon gets over this
as she works her way into the main plot of the episode (which I will not go
overly into detail here...suffice it to say they are taking a injured Klingon
warrior back home when they are attacked by another alien species, the Suliban,
who are working for strange beings from the future in a "temporal cold
war"). Carey seems to do well when focusing on very personal matters
(such as Archer's grudge with the Vulcans) and on the plot (carrying the action
along, no pun intended).
Now, for what I consider to be the most interesting thing in looking at a novelization/adaptation--comparing it with the original. Here are just a few stray insights from having rewatched the pilot right after reading the novelization. What I found most interesting while watching the pilot was thinking that in some cases the actors played certain scenes differently from how they were presented in the book. For instance, after T'Pol manages to conquer her breadstick in the book, Archer had to "manage not to groan (p. 71)". Bakula (playing Archer on the show) however simply shrugs, accepting her point with amusement. In that instance I preferred Bakula's interpretation. However, there were also instances when I preferred the novel's approach. Going back to the bread stick incident, for example, Carey speculates that maybe T'Pol's aversion to touching her food might be regional custom. Carey seems to have the same reaction that some fans had when they later saw the episode. "Where had she [or they, the
writers] made up that one?" Carey actually managed to turn it
into a somewhat useful observation of the Vulcans when Archer concluded
"Vulcans always talked in generalizations, he was beginning to
realize."
The "shut up" joke (Archer: "Do you know how to tell him to shut up?", Hoshi: "Shut up!") works a bit better in the book (where the reader can imagine it working at least a bit better I suppose) than on the show where it fell flat.
I like Hoshi in both, but I think the book did a better job portraying her edginess around space travel and its dangers. The scene where she is so jumpy on the bridge while they are accelerating to warp 4.4 is better in the book because it is a bit longer (before T'Pol berates her) than on the episode.
By the way, did anyone else notice at least these two things which are different between the book, assumedly based on the original script, and the final episode? First, Hoshi's class is indoors in the book. When Archer shows up, they take a walk outdoors. On the episode, the class is already outdoors. Second, the entire "achieving warp 4.5" thing is
almost completely dropped in the episode. In the book, everyone is
disappointed (including Archer himself) that Archer can't be on the bridge when
T'Pol orders the ship to go to warp 4.5 (Archer was still recovering from his
injury). On the show that scene isn't there at all. Oh, and there are a couple scenes on the show which are not in the book. When Trip meets Archer and T'Pol for dinner in the book he just walks in. On the show we get to see him enter through the mess hall and say something about eating with the "big boys" or something like that. Also, we get a scene of Reed and Mayweather inside the shuttlepod (while the others are fighting the Suliban outside in the snowstorm) which is not included in the book.
Well, that's enough I suppose. What's interesting to me about having read Carey's novelization is that, while I rate the book at only average, I think it made me enjoy watching the episode a bit more having read it since it helps me understand the various characters and their backgrounds a bit better.
Oh, and two other things: 1) I definitely get the impression from both the book and the episode that "Hoshi" is her given name and not "Sato", despite however Asian names might traditionally be given (this was an earlier discussion on the board). For an example from the show, see Archer's order to "Get Hoshi to the shuttle!" I can't see Archer, just because of his particular style and personality, to have been in "formal" mode in that instance. Instead, he called her by her "first name", as he would say Trip, Travis, or ... well Reed, I suppose (but Reed is quicker to say than "Malcolm").* And 2) did anyone else notice that the words "Broken Bow" are nowhere to be found in the novelization? It
simply identifies the location of Klaang's altercation with the Suliban and the
human farmer as Oklahoma. To someone reading the book who hasn't seen the
television episode, would he or she have any idea why the book was titled Broken Bow? [* Note added 7/16/03: Hoshi has been referred to as "Ensign Sato" at least once ("Dead Stop" (ENT)) since I first wrote this summary, pretty much confirming her name.]
"Remnant" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Placed here on a preliminary basis (may be moved at a future time.). It is said that Reed prepares the ship’s "laser guns" at one point in this story. I don’t believe such laser guns were ever seen or referred to on the series. Indeed, it seems as if the ship only has torpedoes until adding phase cannons in "Silent Enemy" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
In "Remnant" (James J. & Louisa M. Swann), the Enterprise crew comes upon an old Earth colony ship bound back for Earth. On board is an elderly woman and her four grandchildren. Kendra (the grandmother) lives just long enough to see her grandchildren to safety aboard the Enterprise. Boarding her ship is a tricky maneuver for Reed and Tucker however as her ship consists of wildly rotating pods. At times Reed's character seems a bit off from as seen on the show. For one thing, he is averse to leaving the ship. It’s almost as if he has a fear of deep space (which as far as I am aware we haven’t seen on the television series), enough to dread a mission aboard a shuttlepod (referred to as a "shuttle" throughout this story) or EVA in a space suit. Of course, any slight inconsistencies in character in this story and the other ENT short stories in this volume ("A Girl for Every Star" and "Hoshi's Gift") are understandable as the writers couldn't have seen much more than the pilot episode of the series ("Broken
Bow" (ENT)) before having to send their entries in on time to meet the
deadline.
The biggest problem with this story is the addition of children passengers to the Enterprise at the end of the story. This makes it a problem placing this story chronologically because Archer promises to Kendra that he will "see to it" that the children make it back home to Earth safely. Later episodes in the first season state that the ship hasn't been back to Earth though, making one wonder what happened to the children.
(Ironically, I happened to read this story the same evening I watched "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) for the first time, another Reed-and-Trip-on-a-shuttlepod-mission story.)
"Hoshi's Gift" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds V, 2002)
General Notes: Placed here on a preliminary basis (may be moved at a future time.).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/02):
In "Hoshi's Gift" (Kelle Vozka), Hoshi is having trouble eating and sleeping (imagining to hear the ship’s
engines sounding incorrectly). This adds to her anxiety and uneasiness about
being aboard the ship on its mission and affects her ability to carry out her
duties. Dr. Phlox believes it is just lack of sleep and food. The real reason for her inability to sleep however reveals itself when a small orb of Hoshi’s (given to her grandmother by a Vulcan and handed down to Hoshi) turns out to be the egg of a Vulcan Firebird. The Firebird hatches, living its life out in but a few glorious moments. The experience reassures Hoshi that she is where
she is meant to be.
A nice little story if not particularly memorable. On the plus side the author speaks a bit about Hoshi's "gift" of being especially attuned to subtle nuances of sound which enables her to excel at translating different languages. On the negative side, this author also (see entry for "Remnant", another ENT story in this volume) has some trouble characterizing Reed, from his showing very protective feelings for Hoshi (not seen on the series so far) to the especially disturbing instance of the staunch Brit using the word "ain't"!
"Fight or Flight" (ENT episode) - May 6 (Starlog date)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/17/02):
Watched episode again as part of chronological reading/viewing. In short, I like this episode. It has a nice blend of character bits, humor, and action. The two things I like the most about it are 1) Hoshi's character develops from the beginning of the episode to the end, and 2) it presents early on in the series a situation where the crew is not able to shoot their way out of danger. If Hoshi had not been able to communicate with the Axanar in the end, the Enterprise would have been invaded (and the crew most likely killed) by the hostile aliens who had earlier killed the first ship full of Axanar. The only thing I don't really care for is that I think they tried to make T'Pol a bit too annoying in this episode. She interjects something after nearly every line Archer makes on the bridge when they encounter the first ship. While she's right (and it's her duty to recommend actions to the captain) it's a bit too much and it ends up making her look a bit too smug. Archer on the other hand is portrayed well. Once he decides the proper course of action, he pursues it to the end. (Of course, it almost got them all killed this time, but who wants to nitpick?)
"Strange New World" (ENT episode) - Early May
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/19/02):
Three weeks into mission, crew comes upon idyllic-seeming planet. Crew members who stay on the surface overnight, however, are effected by spores which make their hallucinate and act irrationally. Interesting episode and I think it was a good idea for them to explore the supporting characters early on like this (instead of focusing entirely on Archer as the lead character). However, in my opinion the episode suffers some from 1) poor decisions which put the characters into jeopardy to start with, and 2) a lack of knowledge of the characters to early in the first season. Yes, the point of the episode is to learn more about them. However, it's difficult to really appreciate how erratically some characters are acting (thanks to the pollen) when you haven't really seen them very much yet. Hindsight helps this episode (and some of the other early episodes) seem better on repeat viewing.
"Unexpected" (ENT episode) - Mid-May
General Notes: It is stated in this episode that Archer and Trip met for the first time eight years prior to the time of this episode. This would place the first meeting in the year 2143. This first meeting is later shown in "First Flight" (ENT). (The line in this episode aids in pinpointing the timeframe of the flashback scenes in "First Flight".)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/30/02):
An interesting episode in some ways although I didn't really find the Trip-is-pregnant portion to be all that interesting. I found the sequences where Enterprise discovered the Xyrillians shadowing them and the sequences with the Klingons to be more interesting (just gotta love that old style Klingon battle cruiser. I especially enjoyed how the Klingons turned and started firing the moment Archer started talking to them! I think Archer will learn how to handle himself with Klingons very quickly (or he won't survive very long).
By the Book (ENT novel, 2002) - Late May to Early June
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 4/30/02):
The first original novel based on the "Enterprise" television series is an interesting one. The story apparently fits in between the episodes "Unexpected" (ENT) and "Terra Nova" (ENT), however no specific references are made to events in "Unexpected". There are numerous references to the events of "Strange New World" (ENT) however, as two supporting characters from the episode make return appearances in this novel, Ensign Elizabeth Cutler and Crewman Alex Novakovich.
By the Book (by Dean Wesley Smith and Kristine Kathryn Rusch) has a pretty standard set-up for Star Trek episodes, featuring both "a" and "b" stories.
The "a" story deals with the Enterprise crew seeking to make first contact with two separate sentient alien species living on a planet they've come across. One race, the Fazi, is humanoid and has a culture so extremely structured that Archer has trouble communicating with them without insulting them. The other race, the Hipon, are spider-like crustacean aliens who live underwater (although they are amphibious, able to live both underwater and in the air). The Hipon communicate telepathically on so powerful a level that their first attempts to communicate with Archer's officers are seen as attacks, putting three men in sickbay. Archer is determined to forge more successful first contacts with these two races than the Vulcans did one hundred years earlier with his species.
The "b" story deals with a role-playing game being played during off hours by Cutler, Navokovich, Mayweather, and another officer named James Anderson.
While a bit irritating at first, jumping back and forth between the "a" and "b" stories, after awhile one adjusts and they seem to flow together better. Also, as the "a" (Fazi/Hipon) story grows more important, the "b" (role-playing) story recedes a bit.
My favorite part of By the Book I think is a scene between Archer and T'Pol in his ready room where they discuss the proper method for officers aboard his ship to challenge their superiors (in this case, T'Pol challenging Archer himself). It starts blustery like most of their arguments on the TV series, but gives the characters a better chance to interact and grow a bit when they actually get to discussing their opinions on the matter than the series usually provides.
"Terra
Nova" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
Crew investigates decades old mystery of old Earth colony, Terra Nova. They find the descendents of the colonists sick and living in tunnels under a surface made poisonous by radioactivity caused by an asteroid strike. The descendents, however, believe the humans to be their enemies. After rewatching this episode, I have decided that it holds up pretty well, and is a sign that the show was starting to hit all of its marks. The story (while hardly original) is well paced and well conceived, and the characters are finally starting to really work well together.
"The Andorian Incident" (ENT episode) - June 16-17
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
Archer decides to pay a visit to a Vulcan sanctuary. There he, Trip, and T’Pol are taken captive by Andorians who had earlier taken the Vulcans hostage (at the beginning of the episode). It is explained that the Vulcans and Andorians have had hostilities for each other for quite awhile and that the Andorians believe the Vulcans have a secret listening post at the sanctuary to spy on the Andorians. While trying to overcome the Andorians and rescue the Vulcan monks, Archer discovers that what the Andorians have been saying is true. In "The Andorian Incident" we reach the first really top rate "Enterprise" episode in my opinion. Starting off, we have the "return" of one of the classic TOS alien races, the Andorians (first seen in "Journey to Babel" (TOS)). Almost entirely omitted from the later Star Trek series (TNG, DS9, VOY) outside of the occasional mention, this automatically made many fans anticipate this episode. (Furthermore, since "Enterprise" is a prequel series to TOS, I would assume this marks the earliest chronological appearance of the Andorians anywhere on my chronological reading project with the possible exception of flashback appearances in "earlier" stories.) Adding to the interest in the Andorians is the discovery that there have been hostilities between them and the Vulcans, to the extent that the Vulcans have been hiding an observation post. Big stuff (and not entirely popular with all of the die-hard Vulcan fans watching the show I might add). Finally, Trip delivers some of the best dialogue of the first season (so far) with lines such as, "You call that agitated?" (after T'Pol referred to a seemingly sedate Vulcan monk as such). Later, after being taken captive and watching his captain being banged up by their Andorian captives, Tripp remarks, "Now these people are agitated!" Also, after a Vulcan monk reveals a secret passageway Trip quips, "For people without emotions you sure have a gift for the dramatic!" The solitary downside of this episode in my opinion is the unnecessary comments made by Vulcans (including T'Pol) concerning humans smelling bad to Vulcans. (Why didn't we ever hear anything about this from Spock in TOS?) The scene where T'Pol reacts to the presence of Porthos (Archer's dog) in "Broken Bow" (ENT) due to her heightened sense of smell is one thing. The comments in this episode only serve to put the Vulcans in a bad light. Nonetheless, even with this the episode is one o the gems of the first season. (See also "Shadows of P'Jem" (ENT) which follows up on this episode.)
"Breaking the Ice" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Earliest chronological appearance of a Vulcan starship (not including the one seen in the 2063 portions of Star Trek: First
Contact (TNG). Also the earliest chronological references to the practice of arranged Vulcan marriages (although the practice of combat by suitors as seen in "Amok Time" (TOS) was mentioned briefly in the previous ENT episode, "The Andorian Incident". Archer mentions that a Vulcan ship was seen nearby "three weeks ago" as the Enterprise explored a nebula. They did not respond to hails and left when approached. This would have been prior to "The Andorian Incident" (perhaps around the time of By the Book (ENT)?)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
Enterprise comes upon a massive comet which Archer decides to explore. Discovering a rare mineral there, Reed and Mayweather are sent down to extract samples. Meanwhile, it is discovered that T’Pol has received a secret encrypted message from a Vulcan ship which has also arrived.
Suspicious, Archer has Trip investigate. What Trip finds is that the message is personal and deals with an arranged marriage between T’Pol and another Vulcan, a marriage that she is endangering by staying on Enterprise.
Although upset that Trip has invaded her privacy, T’Pol later asks for his advice in the matter at the urging of Dr. Phlox who observes her stress over the situation. Meanwhile, Reed and Mayweather become trapped on the surface of the comet, requiring Archer to ask for the Vulcans’ assistance. In the end, T’Pol stays on Enterprise, assumedly breaking her marriage agreement. Another solid episode. While playing upon the tension between the humans and the Vulcans, it avoids the pettiness of comments such as the ones about human "odor" in "The Andorian Incident" (ENT) (which, while not mentioned, is certainly on the mind of the viewer as he or she watches this episode since it deals with Archer's growing distrust of the Vulcans). There are a lot of really good bits in this episode. The sense of awe is finally captured well with the crew's reaction (aside from T'Pol) to the huge comet. The disappointment apparent on Archer's and Trip's faces when faced with the idea that T'Pol might be spying on them (you can tell that they are finally getting to like and trust her). Trip's discomfort at having read T'Pol's message and his trouble coming to grips with Vulcan customs (yet trying to aid T'Pol nonetheless). The message home (to a class of Earth children) is very good (although it really has nothing to do with the rest of the episode and could have gone in anywhere outside of Archer's mentioning the comet they are studying). Hoshi and Phlox are fun to watch as they answer questions posed by the kids, but Trip steals the scene with his reluctance to answer the "poop" question. Another really good scene is the dinner between Archer, Trip, T'Pol, and the Vulcan captain. Shades of the dinner scene in Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS). You can see from this scene that, despite trying, Archer's strengths are in exploration (he even takes the helm at one point in this episode) and not diplomacy. Oh, and before I'm done I should mention three other things. One, the musical score of this episode is excellent. Movie quality. The transitional cue right before Trip visits T'Pol in her quarters is wonderful. Two, Reed is obviously very excited at the prospect of walking around on the surface of a comet. No anxiety about extravehicular movement here (as seen in "The Remnant" (ENT) SNW V short story). And three, again crewmembers are endangered when their shuttlepod falls beneath the surface. It happened in "Terra Nova" (ENT) in much the same way. When you add to it Trip and Reed's plight in "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) you can come to two conclusions: 1) they need to start using Shuttlepod Two and 2) the shuttlepod might soon be the "transporter accident" (TOS, TNG) and "holodeck malfunction" (TNG, DS9, VOY) of the ENT series!
"Civilization" (ENT episode) - July 27-31 (July 31, Starlog date)
General Notes: Archer and company become first Starfleet officers in history (not including time-traveling officers from the future) to disguise themselves as another species of aliens to observe a more primitive society.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/27/02):
Enterprise crew encounters a pre-industrial world on their way. Archer and an away team (Hoshi, Trip, and T’Pol) visit the surface disguised as natives to learn more about them and to discover the source of an anomalous energy signature. They discover that another group of aliens has a secret strip-mining operation in place which has been having the side effect of polluting the local water supply, causing many natives to die. Archer and company confront the other aliens, driving them away (although their technology appears greater than that of the Starfleet crew). Meanwhile, Archer develops feelings for a native woman named Riann. A good episode, although by this time the crew-disguises-themselves-to-observe-a-primitive-species has gotten pretty predictable. The story picks up a bit once it is revealed that another warp-capable species is involved behind the wings. One thing worthy of noting is that T'Pol's place in the chain of command is still under question as of this episode (according to T'Pol she outranks Trip, while Trip insists that her rank is not in Starfleet and therefore is not part of the chain of command). Trip questions her order to leave orbit (seemingly abandoning Archer), even threatening to "vent plasma" (immobilizing the ship) in the middle of a battle with a more powerful ship! The question is tabled, however, when T'Pol states that she has no intention of abandoning the captain.
"Fortunate Son" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Earliest chronological appearance of Nausicaans (first seen in "Tapestry" (TNG)). It is said in this episode that
three more NX-class starships are "on the drawing board." Also,
Admiral Forrest refers to pictures sent back by Archer of a comet, most likely a reference to the one in "Breaking the Ice" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/27/02):
Archer is ordered to turn the ship around and help out a deep space merchant ship that is under attack. Once there, they find the Fortunate recovering from a battle with the Nausicaans (alien space "pirates" according to Mayweather). Travis connects with the Fortunate’s first officer (who is in command while the captain is
unconscious in their sickbay) due to their common background as "boomers". However, once it is discovered that the first officer is holding a Nausicaan prisoner things soon come to a head. Before long Archer and company are trying to head off the Fortunate as they attempt to take the fight back to the Nausicaans. An enjoyable episode. I particularly like the special effects in this episode, some subtle (like the passing of a football in low gravity) to the spectacular (the cargo ship disengaging a module with Archer and company inside of it to float away and the same cargo ship warping away just seconds before an Enterprise torpedo can hit it). This is Mayweather's first big episode and it's all right. Nothing spectacular, but it does help flesh out his background some, and at this point in the series any focus for the helmsman is good (he hasn't had a lot to do so far this season). More interesting to me is the underlying theme of the episode. That change is coming to deep space travel, both for exploration and cargo purposes. The up until now autonomous "boomers" will have to adjust to faster engines and more ships invading their personal territory. Favorite line: "Any faster than that (warp 1.8) and there's no time to enjoy the trip."
"Silent Enemy" (ENT episode) - August 30-September 1
(September 1, Starlog date)
General Notes: Based on dates given in this episode and the time frame given in "Cold Front" (ENT), this episode takes place prior to "Cold Front", although it aired after that episode. As of this episode the ship's arsenal now includes phase cannons ("phase modulated energy weapons" according to Reed). (See comments on "laser guns" mentioned in "Remnant" (ENT) short story entry.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
The episode has one of those traditional a-b type structures. The main story deals with a mysterious alien race who shows up
and starts dogging Enterprise without responding to hails. On a repeat visit, they reveal their hostile intentions by attacking the ship and injuring a couple of crewmen (while temporarily boarding Enterprise). This (being just the latest of several hostile species they’ve run into with
much better technology and weapons) leads Archer to reevaluate their ability to continue on their mission as currently equipped. He decides to head back to Earth to have phase cannons installed. This drives Trip and Malcolm to prove that they can construct and install the cannons themselves first. Meanwhile, the b-story deals with it being Reed’s birthday. Archer wants to surprise Reed with his favorite food and appoints Hoshi to find out what it is. It is a
difficult assignment to say the least ("breaking a Vulcan encryption code
would be easier").
"Cold Front" (ENT episode) - September 9-10
General Notes: First revisiting of the "temporal cold war" sub-plot first seen in "Broken Bow" (ENT). Due to amount of time given by T'Pol as to how long they've been on their mission ("four months, three weeks, six days"), although it aired first, this episode takes place following "Silent Enemy" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/28/02):
The Enterprise becomes the staging ground for the next skirmish in the "temporal cold war" Archer first learned about months earlier ("Broken Bow" (ENT)). The Suliban, Silik, returns, this time saving the ship from a massive "anti-matter cascade" explosion. Archer is confronted by the fact that one of his crewman, a man named Daniels, has really been an agent of the forces opposing Selik’s superiors. Archer then has to decide who to trust, Daniels or Silik. Finally, the series creators give us more on the "temporal cold war," this time adding to the mystery by presenting the other side. Daniels could be lying to Archer just as much as Silik, and Silik's actions present the somewhat uncomfortable notion that perhaps Enterprise was supposed to be destroyed in that accident. His action could have either preserved the future (although how is hard to see since no one manipulated the Enterprise crew into that stellar nursery) or altered it. Doubtless, more info on this war and Archer and his crew's place in it will follow. Favorite line: Trip--"It's good to know that the Earth will still be around in nine hundred years." Daniels--"That depends on how you define the term 'Earth'." Trip--"I beg your pardon??" Another good scene is one where Mayweather is briefly in command of the bridge and at Hoshi's urging tries on the "big chair" to see how it fits.
"Dear Doctor" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
When the ship comes across a planet suffering from an epidemic, Dr. Phlox tries to discover a cure for the species’ illness. At the same time, he wrestles with the greater issues of interfering with the natural evolution of the two species indigenous there. When Phlox does discover a cure, he and Archer disagree on principle as to what the correct thing to do is. On a side note, Phlox believes that Ensign Cutler ("Strange New World" (ENT), By the Book (ENT), etc.) is developing romantic feelings for him. My feelings are a bit mixed about this episode. The pacing is a bit slow. True, the pace of the series should be well balanced between quick action shows and slower personal stories, but this one had me at times thinking about something else (perhaps it doesn't stand up to repeat viewing as well). Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the episode, and I especially like the parts with Dr. Phlox and Ensign Cutler and with Phlox and Hoshi. The greater issue of whether or not to heal the aliens is a difficult one. While this situation foreshadows the Prime Directive in Starfleet's future (Archer even speaks of how one may one day be necessary), this particular situation is clouded by the fact that these people are aware of more advanced species like the humans and of warp drive (which would not make it a Prime Directive matter, right?). I guess what it comes down to is that Archer can no more give them a cure (advanced medical technology) than he can give them warp drive. I'm sure it is a decision many fans may disagree with. The voiceover element (Dr. Phlox narrating a letter to a colleague) is very similar to that of Data's letter in "Data's Day" (TNG).
"Sleeping Dogs" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Klingons make their third appearance on "Enterprise". The ship seen here for the first time is a Raptor-class scout ship. At one point while on the ship, Hoshi and Reed see schematics of (or at least references to) photon torpedoes. Reed says he’s never seen or heard of anything like that before (unlike the Vulcan tractor beams in "Breaking the Ice" (ENT) which apparently humans are at least aware of). Also, the Klingon woman refers to "our Birds of Prey" arriving to destroy Enterprise (as opposed to the "Warbirds" mentioned in "Broken Bow" (ENT) (however T’Pol does say that there are many different classes of Klingon ships).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/29/02):
While investigating a class nine gas giant, Enterprise comes a cross a damaged vessel deep in the atmosphere. An away team (T’Pol, Reed, and Hoshi) travels to the ship to render aid. There they discover that the ship is Klingon. Soon, they find themselves trapped on the vessel as it drops closer and closer to being crushed by the atmospheric pressures. Meanwhile, Archer tries to get information out of a Klingon woman who has escaped the Klingon ship by stealing the away team’s shuttlepod. Some nice effects in this episode. The situation here is very reminiscent of a submarine drama (done earlier in Trek in "Starship Down" (DS9)). It is an interesting mix, focusing on T'Pol, Reed, and Hoshi. Without Archer or Trip present, there is no overwhelming personality present, allowing for a more equal focus. Archer finally begins to learn Klingon ways. (Why has he waited this long to study up on them? Surely he knows they will be a constant presence. Maybe there just isn't time to study various species until a specific situation arises.) Hoshi once again benefits from the spotlight. Her anxiety is diminishing and she is very strong in the scene where they are attempting to use photon torpedoes to keep the Klingon ship from sinking.
"Shadows of P’Jem" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
Following up on the events of "The Andorian Incident" (ENT), T’Pol is ordered to leave her position aboard Enterprise. Archer believes it is to punish her involvement in the loss of the Vulcan’s secret base observing the Andorians at the sanctuary at P'Jem. On one last mission together, Archer and T’Pol once again become entangled in Vulcan-Andorian politics as they are captured on a planet undergoing civil unrest. In the end, the Andorian from the previous episode returns to rescue them to clear his feelings of debt owed to Archer, and T’Pol regains her status in the eyes of her superiors and remains aboard the Enterprise. A good followed up to "The Andorian Incident" and further developing of the relationship between Archer and T'Pol, and in a larger sense between the humans and the Vulcans.
"Shuttlepod One" (ENT episode) - November 9-11 (November 9, Starlog date)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/25/02):
Trip and Reed are on a mission in a shuttlepod when they come across debris from the Enterprise. Believing their ship destroyed, they attempt to make it to a nearby star at impulse power despite knowing that they do not have enough air to get there. The two find themselves increasingly getting on each other’s nerves as they get progressively weaker and colder. Meanwhile, Archer and his crew (who only lost a docking bay door
during an accident with another ship that was trying to dock) are unaware of Trip and Reed’s distress. This is another good character-based episode
playing up the differences between Malcolm and Trip's characters. It really does more to develop Malcolm more than Trip which is good because up until now he's been pretty undeveloped (a mystery to both the characters and the fans). This episode also does a pretty good job of demonstrating the real dangers of traveling in space if anything goes wrong. While not a personal favorite, this episode has been acclaimed by many and should not be missed.
"Fusion" (ENT episode)
General Notes: T’Pol has been on Enterprise seven months, placing this episode about mid-November 2151. A major distinction created here (retroactively affecting Trek history) is that the mind meld as
late as 2151 was still an obscure Vulcan ritual known only to a very few. By the time of TOS and Spock (2266 and after) it seems something just about every
Vulcan seems to know how to do (although at first it is considered a very
intimate and therefore rare practice). It is revealed over one year later in "Stigma" (ENT) that T'Pol has contracted "Pa'nar
Syndrome" from her forced mind meld in this episode.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/29/02):
Enterprise crew comes into contact with a ship of very unusual Vulcans. This radical sect has decided to embrace their emotions just as much as the logic of Surak. Their ship in need of repairs, Archer’s crew volunteers to aid them. One particular Vulcan named Tolaris takes special interest in showing T’Pol the value of accepting her own emotions. This leads T’Pol to chaotic dreams and a dangerous mind meld experience with Tolaris. Meanwhile, another Vulcan named Kov must decide whether or not to break a self-imposed silence with his father (who rejected Kov because of his radical beliefs) because his father is now dying. An interesting episode. I really liked Kov, especially at the beginning when he had all kinds of misconceptions about humans. "Do you really eat six or seven meals a day?" (paraphrased). Tripp: "More like three." Kov's questions are both humorous and serve to show that many of the initial beliefs the human crewmembers have about the Vulcans might also be misconceptions. What I did not care for is the decision that the mind meld is not widely known by the average Vulcan just a century or so before the TOS era, making it a relative new thing to most Vulcans by Spock's time.
"Rogue Planet" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/29/02):
Enterprise comes upon a "rogue planet", a planet which has long ago broken away from its solar system and now floats solitarily in the emptiness of space. Investigating, Archer and company discover a group of aliens on the surface hunting prey (the planet’s geothermal vents allow for lush forests and other Earth-like environments in some places). At first befriending the hunting party, Archer is confronted by a mysterious humanoid woman. The woman appears only to him and tells him that she needs his help. Initially confused, Archer finally realizes that she is one of the shapeshifting native beings whom the hunters have been slaughtering from centuries in their traditional hunts. Not able to stop the hunters directly, Dr. Phlox creates a masking agent which again levels the field between the hunters and the hunted. Okay. They finally did it. For some reason, "Rogue Planet" was the first real "yawn" ENT episode for me. I just couldn't bring myself to care too much about what was happening. Archer and crew walk around in dark forests most of the episode. It's pretty obvious early on that the woman is plucked from Archer's head telepathically (from a poem he learned as a child it would turn out). I think my main problem with this episode is its woeful lack of imagination in terms of exploring a science-fiction element as rich in storytelling potential as a rogue planet. This story really could have been told just about anywhere.
"Acquisition" (ENT episode)
General Notes: First chronological appearance of Ferengi (not including the time traveling ones from the 24th century visiting Earth of 1947 in "Little Green Men" (DS9)) (Ferengi first seen in "The Last Outpost" (TNG)). It is presumed that either 1) Starfleet does not learn the true identity of the pirates, or 2) the records are later
lost because as of the "The Last Outpost" (which takes place 253 years after this story in 2364) the Ferengi are still a mysterious race Starfleet has only heard rumors about and not actually met yet.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/7/02):
A group of Ferengi pirates drugs the Enterprise crew in order to rob the ship of valuables. They miss Trip however who is in a decontamination chamber at the time. Before long, Archer (a prisoner of the pirates), Trip, and T’Pol are working to trick the Ferengi so they can take back control of the ship. An enjoyable enough episode (although pretty predictable). It's fun watching the Ferengi taking everything they can find, including Travis's chair, unbolting from the bulkhead. It's also fun watching a Ferengi trying to communicate with Porthos via universal translator, as is the "fight" between Archer and Trip put on for their captors' benefit.
"Oasis" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Refers to the crew’s earlier encounter with holographic technology in "Unexpected" (ENT). Also makes side remark to the possibility of a holographic doctor (as ultimately seen over two hundred years later in the "Star Trek: Voyager" series).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/7/02):
Enterprise crew investigates a crashed ship purported to being haunted in order to procure spare parts. They discover survivors of the crash living aboard and agree to aid them in repairing their systems. The mystery deepens however when they discover that there are holes in the survivors’ story. Ultimately it is revealed that there are only two real survivors and the rest at holographic recreations of the original crew. An average enough episode, although the holodeck/holograms disguised as reality story has been done many times before, making this one seem very been there, done that.
"Detained" (ENT episode)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
Archer and Mayweather are taken prisoner by a race of aliens at war with the Suliban because word of the Enterprise crew’s encounters with the Suliban have become well known in the area. While detained, Archer and Mayweather meet Suliban wrongfully imprisoned by the aliens and decide to engineer their release as well as their own escape. Another decent enough episode, particularly in how it continues to gradually progress the Suliban back story.
"Vox Sola" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Kreetassans return in "A Night in Sickbay" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
After a disastrous first contact meal with an alien race named the Kreetassans, the ship is boarded by a strange
web-like symbiotic creature. Soon, crewmembers (including Archer and Trip) are trapped in the alien’s cocoon like web, and Hoshi must find a way to communicate with the alien before the life is drained out them. I liked the way a simple thing like eating in public turned out to be a major breach of etiquette with the Kreestassans. The story of the alien symbiote (aside from spotlighting Hoshi's skills again) turned out to be less interesting (until the ending, when they showed the alien's homeworld and natural state).
What Price Honor? (ENT novel, 2002) - December 31, 2151-January 18, 2152
General Notes: First off, the dates given in the chapter headings, beginning with January 15, 2151, in chapter one, and as far back as December 31, 2150, in the flashbacks, are generally considered to be incorrect by most fans. The reason for this is that the Enterprise crew set out from Earth on their first mission in April 2151 ("Broken Bow" (ENT)). Therefore, most if not all dates given in What Price Honor? must be considered to be incorrect.
Ensign Alana Hart's service record states that she was first assigned to the Enterprise on January 30, 2151. Since it is stated that she was serving aboard ship during the "Broken Bow" mission (Archer supposedly first met Hart just three days after leaving Kronos in that episode, which, again, happened in April 2151), this January 2151 date must be disregarded. However, Hart's service record gives the date of her death as January 14, 2152. This date is one year after the 2151 dates given in all of the "present day" chapter headings, so it might just be the date the author had intended all along. (Either way, I've decided to use December 2151-January 2152 for this entry based on this particular reference.)
Further time notes: The fact that the author places this story around New Year's Day limits when this novel can possibly take place. Reed and Hart have served together on Enterprise for "a year now" as of the New Year's Eve flashbacks shown here (marked December 31, 2150). Correcting the date to 2151 would lessen that time spent serving together to about nine months.
And to cause further timeline headaches, references are made to the following episodes: "Silent Enemy" (ENT) (Trip and Reed are still working on refining the phase cannons which it is said that "the last time" overloaded the ship's systems in that episode; it will take a review of the episodes between "Silent Enemy" and What Price Honor? to see if this is a correct statement or if it should be disregarded; there are many episodes between the two, however, so I suspect that the comment will end up being incorrect.); "Detained" (ENT) (the Suliban refugees); and "Vox Sola" (ENT) (Archer and Trip's being "half-absorbed" by the alien creature). These references are all fine as they would have taken place prior to What Price Honor? on the timeline (assuming that those episodes, which contain no dates, actually took place in December 2151). A reference is also made, however, to Zobral in "Desert Crossing" (ENT). That episode takes place in mid-February (while this novel supposedly ends in mid-January). (I see one of two options: 1) ignoring the references to "Detained" and "Desert Crossing", or 2) pushing the events dated from January 13-18 in What Price Honor? [the mission down to the planet, Alana's death, the conflict with the Sarkassians, etc.] to late February, between "Two Days and Two Nights" and "Shockwave, Pt. I". This would require even further disregarding of the dates provided in What Price Honor?, however.)
Other notes: According to Reed, there are Starfleet regulations already in place preventing relationships between officers and their subordinates. It is stated that the ship was soon scheduled to rendezvous with a Vulcan ship, the Shi'ar (a nod to the alien race Shi'ar in Marvel's X-Men comics?), and that this rendezvous would mark the point where Enterprise would be passing beyond the farthest Vulcan exploration surveys in this region of space (an idea contradicted by following episodes?). Lt. Donna "D.O." O'Neil later appears in Stern's two "Enterprise" novels, Daedalus and Daedalus's Children. Hoshi Sato is referred to as "Ensign Hoshi" (instead of Ensign Sato). The Enterprise is mentioned as having photon torpedoes (incorrect for this time frame: Reed is unfamiliar with them in "Sleeping Dogs" (ENT), which takes places circa September-October 2151 [prior to What Price Honor?], and tells the Vissian Chief Armory Officer in "Cogenitor" (ENT) that they do not have "photonic warheads" [i.e., photon torpedoes] as late as that episode, which takes place in early 2153 [a year or more after the events of What Price Honor?]). This is perhaps chronologically the earliest case of an empty (photon) torpedo casing beings used as a casket? (First seen in Star Trek III: The Search for Spock (TOS).) Brief mention at end of novel of the discovery of parallel Minshara-class planets in a synchronous orbit, a pair of "mirror image planets". Enterprise sets out to investigate. (Never actually seen in an episode or novel?)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 5/28/05):
I first read What Price Honor? (Dave Stern, 2002) back in January 2004, so I've been quite derelict in adding to my entries here. It took basically rereading the book--skimming it, actually--for me to even attempt to make a legitimate entry about it here now. As you can see, the timeline "General Notes" are plentiful, so I think I'll be brief here. In this novel (only the second original "Enterprise" novel released, after By the Book), Reed briefly becomes involved with a young ensign in his department named Alana. Alana, however, is affected by a mission to the surface of a strange planet and subsequently dies. (The novel is actually broken down into "present day" and flashback segments, jumping back and forth. So, in the "present", Alana's already been dead for several days and Reed keeps remembering back to their time together and the events of her death.) Archer, Reed, and company discover that they have gotten themselves into the middle of a conflict over sacred grounds and monuments on this planet between the two alien races that reside there. While Archer tries to settle the conflict, Reed is concerned firstmost with discovering what exactly caused Alana's death.
My feelings about the book? While it has some problems--largely continuity ones and occasional confusion caused by the jumping back and forth between time frames--I enjoyed it more than By the Book. Stern seems the writer most capable of writing the "Enterprise" characters so far (see also Daedalus and Daedalus's Children).
2152
"Fallen Hero" (ENT episode) - February 9 (Starlog date)
General Notes: The shore leave on Risa first mentioned here won’t actually happen until two episodes later in "Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT). The Enterprise NX-01 reaches warp five velocity (its theoretical top speed) for the first time in this episode. The events of this episode are mentioned several months later briefly in a captain's log entry in "Catwalk" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
On their way to a much needed shore leave, Archer receives orders from Admiral Forrest to pick up a Vulcan ambassador and transport her to awaiting Vulcan ships. The ambassador turns out to be nothing like the Vulcans the crewmembers have seen before: friendly and cordial. However, she will not speak of her real mission. Soon, the ship is attacked by aliens seeking to capture her, aliens with a faster and better armed ship. (I liked the big build up to the crew reaching warp five only to discover that it still wasn't fast enough to outrun their attackers.)
"Desert Crossing" (ENT episode) - February 12-13 (February 12, Starlog date)
General Notes: The crew is again sidetracked from their trip to Risa ("Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
Archer and Trip visit a desert planet upon the urgings of a man named Zobral. Soon, they discover that Zobral’s people are terrorists at war with their neighbors, and Archer and Trip are forced to trek across the blistering desert in hopes of escaping their captives. Meanwhile, any efforts made by T’Pol aboard Enterprise to rescue them are to be considered an act of war by the participants. [No personal critique on this episode at this time.]
"Two Days and Two Nights" (ENT episode) - February 18-20 (February 18, Starlog date)
General Notes: First appearance chronologically of Risa (which was first seen in "Captain's Holiday" (TNG)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 01/14/03):
Finally arriving at Risa, Archer and his crewmates separate for shore leave. Archer encounters a mysterious woman seeking revenge on the Suliban. Hoshi has a romantic encounter of her own. Mayweather goes rock climbing, and Trip and Malcolm visit the local night clubs. Meanwhile, aboard ship Dr. Phlox undergoes his annual 48-hour hibernation while Ensign Cutler stands in for him. Pretty much an average episode. Again, the Suliban and the "temporal cold war" are addressed.
"Cabin E-14" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
Other Dates: 2151 (late April)
unknown future time period
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Read this one back September 5, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Cabin E-14" (by Shane Zeranski), we have] "A follow-up to the episode "Cold Front" (ENT). Dr. Phlox has the assignment of "decontaminating" the time-traveling agent Daniels' quarters. Upon finding a method of moving back and forth through time, Phlox must then fight the temptation to go back in time to save his beloved Xesophia."
"Shockwave, Pts. I & II" (ENT
episodes)/Shockwave (novelization, 2002)
See Also: 2151 - Archer is taken by Daniels back through time to just before events in "Broken Bow" (ENT).
"31st Century" - [alternate future] Archer is taken, again by Daniels, into future, causing change in timeline.
General Notes: Daniels makes cryptic comments concerning the Federation (not yet founded in 2152) and Archer sees a book in the future library titled The Romulan Star Empire (who Starfleet has not met yet at this time...they will finally meet for the first time in "Minefield" (ENT)). Novelization gives extensive flashbacks to previous episodes involving the "temporal cold war", "Cold Front" (ENT) and "Detained" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary: (written on 4/14/03):
While visiting an alien colony, a terrible accident occurs and it appears that the crew is responsible for the deaths of thirty-six hundred colonists. They are recalled home to Earth, their mission cancelled. However, on the way back, Archer is visited by Daniels, his supposed ally from the future. Daniels explains that this is all another part of the "temporal cold war". Learning that he and his crew were not actually the cause of the accident, Archer becomes determined to clear their names. Things become complicated however, when Daniels takes Archer into his future (the 31st Century) in hopes of preventing further damage to the timeline. Instead, he discovers that by taking Archer out of the 22nd Century, he has wiped out his own present, replacing it with a devastated, post-apocalyptic wasteland. To put things back the way they were, the two have to find a way to send Archer back (although none of the time portals function any longer). Meanwhile, back in the "present", the Enterprise crew is held hostage by Silik, who finds that his own connection with his allies in the future has been cut off.
Novelization includes more in depth look at various supporting characters, such as Admiral Forrest and Ensign Cutler, as well as extended flashbacks to previous episodes. I enjoyed these insights into secondary characters, particularly Admiral Forrest, who has to keep things from unraveling at home on Earth while Archer and company seek to clear their names. With little communication with Archer, Forrest has to stand up to increasing pressure from the Vulcans when Enterprise does not return as ordered. I also enjoyed how the author brought together the various episodes involving the "temporal cold war" through flashbacks, giving the reader an overall understanding of what has come before, and how he presented the anger and grief the characters felt while believing that they had unintentionally caused so many deaths in a much more personal way (through their thoughts as well as actions) than the television show actors could. In conclusion, an enjoyable enough novelization, with just enough additional detail and "extra" material (not seen in the TV episodes) to keep readers interested.
"Carbon Creek" (ENT episode) - April
2152
See Also: 1957 - [October 1957-January 1958?) Story of T'Pol's great-grandmother crash landing on Earth
General Notes: Frame story takes place one year after T'Pol became an official member of the Enterprise crew, presumably meaning at the end of the first mission in April 2151 ("Broken Bow" (ENT)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 04/15/03):
At a dinner celebrating the anniversary of T’Pol’s arrival on the Enterprise, T’Pol tells Archer and Trip the story of her great-grandmother, T’Mir, and how she and three other Vulcans crash landed on Earth in late 1957, living for three months among humans long before Zefram Cochrane’s history-making first contact with the Vulcans in 2063 (Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)). An enjoyable enough episode but one with quite a few plot holes and not particularly original. T'Mir is much like her great-granddaughter, constantly reigning in Mestral's curiosity about the humans. The choice of time (1957) is an interesting one, leading to some humorous lines ("'I Love Lucy' is on tonight"). T'Mir's giving the invention of velcro to 1957 humanity (in order to procure money to pay for a boy's college tuition, is both far fetched and out of character (not to mention historically incorrect).
"Minefield" (ENT episode)
General Notes: First encounter (chronologically) between humans and Romulans. Enterprise crew learns very little about the Romulans and does not see them, preserving the continuity established in "Balance of Terror" (TOS). T’Pol gives no indication of the relationship between the Vulcans and the Romulans, reporting that they have not yet had actual contact between the two. She is either lying or this contradicts information given in "Death Wish" (VOY) concerning a century-long Romulan-Vulcan war that would have occurred prior to 2072.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 04/15/03):
Enterprise accidentally enters a minefield surrounding a planet they have come across. One mine seriously damages the ship, while another latches onto its hull. Reed attempts to disarm the mine, but becomes injured. This requires Archer to do the disarming with Reed’s assistance. Meanwhile, two Romulan ships decloak and warn the ship to withdraw. Another enjoyable enough episode. In some ways similar to "Shuttlepod One" (ENT) in that again two crewmembers (this time Archer with Reed instead of Trip) learn about each other while isolated together in a very precarious dilemma. Also, an interesting way of introducing the Romulans to series without breaking established continuity (although now I'm curious exactly how much T'Pol knows about the Romulans and what she's keeping from them...it sure looks like interferes with the ship's universal translator, perhaps to keep the crew from learning too much about the Romulans). Also, there are at least two huge plot holes that I saw. One, Trip is right. It should be the chief engineer going out to assist Reed with disarming the mine, not the captain. Archer says he needs Trip onboard, but it makes more sense that Trip would be more capable of working with Reed in disarming the mine, and Archer would be the better person to deal with the hostile Romulans from the bridge. Two, no mention was given to the idea of beaming Reed inside the ship. True, the transporters of this time are not very accurate and might have taken part of the mine's "leg" with it (triggering the mine in the process), but c'mon, it should have been at least suggested and rejected!
"Dead Stop" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Picks up four days after the events in "Minefield" (ENT). The ship is in need of repairs and Reed is recovering from his leg wound. The Tellarites make their "Enterprise" debut (voice only). The Tellarites first appeared in "Journey to Babel" (TOS). (The Tellarites make their first "Enterprise" appearance in "Bounty".) Oh, and Trip has still not repainted that section of the hull he knocked a shuttlepod into in "Broken Bow" (ENT) as of this episode (one year later).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/16/03):
Still heavily damaged from the incident in the Romulan minefield, the Enterprise crew receives from passing Tellarites the coordinates of an automated repair station. Archer agrees to trade 2000 liters of warp plasma in return for the necessary repairs. Besides the advanced technology aboard the station used to repair the damage to the ship, other advances include high tech medical technology (healing Trip's leg much faster) and "molecular synthesizers", like the food replicators later used in later series (T'Pol is familiar with such "protein resequencers", having seen one on a Tarkelian vessel). The station even repairs the squeek that has been plaguing Archer in his ready room, however the station hides a sinister secret. Archer discovers that the station exacts an additional cost for its services, kidnapping Mayweather and replacing him with a corpse that is a nearly exact replica of him. Investigating, they find a room full of kidnapped unconscious aliens hooked up to machines. It is only after rescuing Mayweather that the crew deduces that the station was secretly
kidnapping people from each ship it repaired and reconfiguring their brains to
enhance the stations computing power. I really liked this episode.
While it was obvious that there was something wrong with this station, the
episode really held my interest. (Furthermore, I think pairing
"Minefield" and "Dead Stop" together would make a really
good "Enterprise" two hour special.)
"A Night in Sickbay" (ENT episode)
General Notes: This episode gives the time every so often (beginning with 8:47 p.m. and ending at 9:15 a.m., ship time). The Kreetassans first appeared in "Vox Sola" (ENT). Porthos was named after one of the Three Musketeers (one of "four musketeers" in this case). Humorous lines: Dr. Phlox refers to Porthos as a "bugle" (beagle), and T'Pol tells Archer that she "obviously can't keep up with you" (after clearly beating Archer in a little contest involving treadmills in the gym). Also, Archer makes two "Pillarian" (Freudian) slips within thirty seconds while talking with T'Pol ("doing the breast I can" and "send me you lips--lisp--list"). Details of Phlox's "extended family":
Phlox has three wives, each of them two other husbands ("a total of 720
relationships, 42 which have romantic possibilities"). He has five
children (31 in the total extended family), two daughters (one a surgeon, the
other a biochemist) and three sons. The eldest son is a potter, while his
estranged younger two sons Phlox "never saw eye to eye with" and
hasn't seen for sometime.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
Enterprise is in need of a replacement plasma injector (the ship routinely carries five, needing four to operate...Trip comments to Archer that he is not comfortable running with three. The turn to the Kreetassans, the alien race Archer and company had offended in by eating in front of "Vox Sola" (ENT). However, after waiting five days in orbit and then another twelve hours planetside, the landing party is sent back to the ship not knowing what they have done to offend the Kreetassans this time. Ultimately, they discover that their offense this time was committed by Porthos who urinated on a sacred set of trees. To make up for this offense, Archer is required to perform a bizarre ritual of contrition (involving a chain saw). Archer has little interest in the Kreetassan situation (who he sees as picky and overly sensitive), however, due to the fact that Porthos has contracted a pathogen while on the surface that causes his autoimmune system to collapse. Archer spends a restless night in sickbay not knowing whether his beloved pet will live or die. Dr. Phlox, recognizing Archer's unusually irritated behavior, especially with T'Pol, deduces that adding to Archer's dismay over Porthos are unresolved issues of "sexual tension" between himself and T'Pol. At first, Archer rejects this. He realizes though (especially after having a strange dream involving a funeral for Porthos and an extended "decon" session between him and T'Pol) that Phlox is correct. In the end, all is well: Archer performs the ritual for the Kreetassans (earning the needed plasma injector plus a couple spares), Porthos has a complete recovery (surprise, surprise), and Archer and T'Pol discuss issues of sexual tension, agreeing that it would be "problematic" for officers in their positions to act on
such feelings. Long summary, but as you can see there are really three
different related issues going on in this story: the Kreetassans, Porthos's
illness, and Archer's feelings for T'Pol. This episode has drawn critical
acclaim (and it is a very well acted episode), however I have to admit that I
have problems with it. I think my main objections are that I don't buy two
important elements, both dealing with Archer's character. One, while it
has been obvious from the beginning of the series that Archer has a very close
bond with his pet, I had trouble seeing him become so distraught over
Porthos that he would pretty much abandon his duties as captain (he acts very
similar here to how he does four episodes later in "Singularity" (ENT), however in that case the entire crew is being influenced by the spatial anomaly). T'Pol questions his priorities, and so did I. (I love Porthos as much as anybody, but there comes a point where Archer has to leave Porthos to the doctor so he can perform his duties as ship captain.) And Archer's distaste for the Kreetassans is no excuse. Trip says that Archer is a "trained diplomat" early in the episode. Can't tell that from Archer's behavior here. (It takes Dr. Phlox to show Archer that he
has let his pride get the better of him. Otherwise, he probably wouldn't
have ever performed the Kreetassan ritual. Second, this "sexual
tension" between Archer and T'Pol seemed to come out of nowhere to
me. Sure, in early episodes (particularly "Broken Bow" (ENT))
there was tension between then, however that tension was due to Archer's
problems with Vulcans in general, not just T'Pol. Over time, relations
actually started getting better between the two of them (Phlox observes that
things have been particularly tense between the two of them lately, but there is little evidence of this in previous episodes such as "Mindfield" (ENT) and "Dead Stop" (ENT)). So I just don't buy that the sexual tension has built up so high all of sudden as to impair Archer's judgment. (Besides, anyone who watched the early "Enterprise" episodes could see that the sexual tension was between Trip and T'Pol, not Archer.)
"Marauders" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The Enterprise crew learned of this deuterium mining colony from the Kreestassans (presumably at the end of the previous episode, "A Night in Sickbay" (ENT)). The shuttlepods are designed to travel up to one quarter impulse (although Trip says he has been able to get a bit more out of her). Hoshi has gotten much better are target practice than she was way back in "Fight or Flight" (ENT). T'Pol teaches her
trainees about the Klingon "bat'leth" and "mek'leth" bladed
weapons. Archer says that they left Earth "just over a year ago"
(April 16, 2151).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
The crew is in need of deuterium. They arrive at a mining colony the Kreetassans have told them about. When they get there, the colony members are very distant, initially refusing to do business with them. Ultimately, the miners agree to trade 200 liters of deuterium for four power cells, medical supplies, and aid in repairing their extraction pumps. They only have two days to repair the pumps however. No pumps, no deuterium. Soon, it is revealed that a ship of Klingons have been extorting the crew for much of
their deuterium for many years. The one time the miners stood up to them
ended in the deaths of many of the miners. Archer convinces the miners to
stand up to the Klingons with the aid of the Archer and his officers. In
the end, the Klingons are driven off and the miners reward the crew with 2000 liters of deuterium. An enjoyable episode. While not a very
"deep" episode, Starfleet vs. Klingons episodes are almost always fun
to watch. This is the first time Starfleet officers (Archer and company)
must really face Klingon warriors in battle. T'Pol however is familiar
with Klingon tactics ("they are slow to adapt to changing
circumstances"). On a side note, Trip has a pretty good line.
When T'Pol is able to hear a discussion far enough away that Archer and Trip can not hear, he responds, "Good ears."
"The Seventh" (ENT episode)
Other Dates: Sometime between 2135 and 2151 - T'Pol's mission to Risa (noted here but not placed elsewhere on timeline as no specific year given)
General Notes: T'Pol completed her reconnaissance/retrieval training "17 years ago" (2135). Nearly 30 years ago (2122) Vulcan agents infiltrated
Agaron society to overthrow factions there. Many agents refused to return
once the mission to Vulcan was completed. T'Pol's was one of several
agents sent to retrieve these fugitive agents. (No date given for T'Pol's
encounter with Menos on Risa.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
T'Pol receives a message from the Vulcan high command that they have located "Menos". The Enterprise is ordered by Starfleet to assist T'Pol in a "highly classified mission" (retrieving Menos). Archer and Mayweather accompany T'Pol in her mission to capture Menos, the last of six fugitive agents T'Pol had been pursuing years ago when she was an agent of the Vulcan Minister of Security. They catch up with Menos in a bar on an arctic planet. Detained there temporarily by maintenance being done on the landing pad, they hunker down in the bar until they are able to leave. Menos insists that he is innocent (not smuggling deadly biotoxins) and that the Vulcans are forcing him to return unwillingly. In the meantime, T'Pol starts having flashbacks to the last time she almost captured Menos, years ago on Risa. These flashbacks disturb her as she does not understand them. Discussions with Menos, however, make T'Pol realize that more went on that day on Risa than she remembered. There was a seventh agent that day that T'Pol was pursuing along with Menos. T'Pol had been forced to shoot him when he reached for his weapon. The experience had shaken T'Pol greatly, and the Vulcans at the temple at P'Jem (see "Shadows of P'Jem" (ENT)) had chosen to suppress her memory of the encounter, causing her to forget the incident and her subsequent guilt at having taken a life. Remembering it all now, T'Pol begins to doubt herself and whether or not bringing in Menos is the right thing. In the end, Menos is proven to indeed be smuggling biotoxins, and T'Pol is forced to come to grips with her past, stunning Menos before he can get away. A humorous secondary plot is Trip's standing in as temporary acting captain. I thought this episode was very well done. All of the characters all act very much in character, from T'Pol's struggling with her repressed memories to Archer's loyalty to T'Pol to Trip's eventual discomfort at having to make command decisions while Archer is gone. Side note: Archer must be a very good dog trainer (or Porthos is just a very smart dog). Archer says "Move over Porthos, let the lady sit down" and Porthos complies (as opposed to just "move Porthos" or
"down Porthos").
"The Communicator" (ENT episode)
General Notes: We see the return of the Suliban cell ship last seen in "Broken Bow" (ENT). Trip says he has been working on it in his spare time. He is able to get the cloaking device working again so that they can use the ship in their rescue mission in this episode. Cell ship will be seen next in Daedalus and Daedalus's Children (ENT) novels.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
Archer, Hoshi, and Reed return from a very interesting visit to a pre-warp planet. Once back on the ship, Reed realizes that he has lost his communicator. Archer and Reed return to the surface to retrieve it but instead are captured themselves. Rather than risking contaminating the pre-warp culture by telling their captors the truth, they pretend to be secret agents sent by their enemies. They are sentenced to be executed. Without knowing if their crewmates will be able to rescue them, Archer and Reed are willing to go to their deaths in order not to contaminate the culture. Obviously, they are saved in the end. However Archer and T'Pol later realize that despite their efforts, they have had an impact on this world
(making their captors believe that their enemies possess genetically enhanced
agents and invisible aircraft). While I didn't dislike this
episode, I did have a problem with how sloppy Archer and crew appeared to be
once again, not as much by the fact that Reed left his communicator behind, but
that Archer's retrieval plan led to him and Reed getting captured (giving the
pre-warp aliens two more communicators, phase pistols, and scanning
devices). It seems to me that once they had triangulated the location of
the communicator down to a back room in the tavern from their table, they should have simply left and come back (with backup) after the tavern had closed. Instead, they raised suspicion by poking around the back of the tavern.
Deciding to wait until the room where their scanners said the communicator was
located would be empty, they tried to return to their table. However, they
found their way blocked by a room full of burly men who captured them after a
very brief fistfight. (While I suppose I could see Kirk doing similar
things, I personally would expect them to be much more careful once they had
lost the initial communicator, taking a more deliberate, Picard-like
plan.) Archer gets points in this episode however for realizing the
dangers of contaminating alien cultures, bringing us one step closer to the
Prime Directive.
Surak's Soul (ENT novel, 2003)
Other Dates: 2093 - brief flashback to T’Pol as a child on Vulcan, age 5.
2098 - brief flashback to T’Pol as a child on Vulcan, age 10.
General Notes: None. (See comments under "Chronological reading notes/summary".)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Sorry, no detailed comments about Surak's Soul (J.M. Dillard, 2003) at this time. According to my notes, I finished reading this back on February 14, 2004. Unfortunately, I never got around to making an entry for it here and now, over two years later, I remember very little about the book. I'd have to pretty much reread it to be able to make any really worthwhile comments and I'd rather move onward to novels and short stories that I haven't already read. So, I'll have to reread this one at a later date. I do have these bare bone notes I made back when I finished reading it: "Third original "Enterprise" novel. An innocent race of aliens dies mysteriously. In investigating the tragedy, T'Pol accidentally kills one of them too weak to take the impact of a phaser at stun setting. This shakes pacifist T'Pol greatly, causing her to swear off wearing a weapon at all costs. This pledge is put to the test, however, when the crew starts being hunted aboard their ship by the creature that killed the alien species."
"Singularity" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Trip mentioned purging the impulse manifolds two episodes prior in "The Seventh" (ENT) but apparently never got around to it as he mentions doing so again at the beginning of this episode (he does not end up getting to it in this episode either...while he was certainly kept busy in these episodes and therefore can't be blamed here, he doesn't have a very good track record for getting around to routine maintenance jobs, for example his still not having repainted the hull damage caused in "Broken Bow" (ENT) a year later in "Dead Stop" (ENT)). Reed also toys with using "condition red" for his tactical alert (Trip calls it his "Reed alert". Get it? Reed alert-red alert.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
The crew investigates a rare black hole in a trinary solar system. Soon after setting a course for the system, each of the crew members (except for T'Pol) become increasingly obsessed with relatively minor matters (Archer writing a preface for a biography being written about his father, Hoshi taking over the galley in "Chef's" absence, Dr. Phlox over examining Mayweather's simple headache (nearly performing surgery), Trip "fixing" (redesigning) Archer's chair (a request of Archer's), and Reed implementing a new shipwide tactical alert system. T'Pol finally
realizes that the crew's increasingly erratic behavior is being caused by the
black hole. Too close to the singularity to be able to turn around and get
out of range before the rays will kill the crew, T'Pol has to chart a risky
course through the trinary system and out the other side, and a very
distracted Archer has to do the piloting. A pretty average episode all
around (the danger here seems much like a typical "Next Generation" or "Voyager" story). Most interesting is Reed's new alert.
Called "tactical alert" here, it is clear that this foreshadows the
"red alert" of Kirk's generation of Starfleet crews and beyond.
By the way, just of the record, we really know Archer has been affected by
whatever's causing the crew's problems when he yells "Quiet!" at
Porthos who barks while Archer is working on his father's biography's
preface. Based on his concern for Porthos in the earlier "A Night
in Sickbay" (ENT), this is clearly unusual behavior for Archer
(and elicits "boos!" from loyal Porthos fans).
"Vanishing Point" (ENT episode)
General Notes: The date of Sirus Ramsey's accident during early 100-meter transporter trials (a sort of "ghost story" told to Hoshi) is given as May, 2146. This is almost one hundred years after the first transporting of a human being (although seemingly not successfully as the subject, transporter
inventor Colin Blakeney, was not recovered until centuries later in 2375 by the
crew of the Enterprise-E) in 2052 in Forgiveness (TNG comic book graphic novel). Normally, a non-"canon" story such as Forgiveness would be overruled by a "canon" television episode. However, as described below, this story of "Sirus Ramsey" turns out to be false. Also worth noting are tidbits about Mayweather having spent his survival training in Death Valley, California, and Trip and Archer in Alice Springs, Australia. (Alas, these factoids are most likely also proven void by the episode's conclusion as well.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/17/03):
Long story short, this is a Hoshi episode. At the beginning of the episode, Hoshi and Trip are forced to beam up to the ship rather than take their shuttlepod up. Despite Hoshi's fear of the transporter, they seem fine upon their arrival. Soon, however, Hoshi starts feeling strange effects that she attributes to her beaming up. The others doubt her claims, but
soon she realizes that others sometimes don't notice she's in the room.
Too late, the crew realizes that there was a problem with her transport and that her molecules are indeed phasing out of existence. By then she has
completely gone "ghost" on her (much as La Forge and Ro did in "Phantasms" (TNG)). While in this state, Hoshi discovers that there were aliens who still lived on the planet below and who have snuck aboard Enterprise in order to blow her up. Only, Hoshi can't do anything to stop them. Just as they are detonating their devices to destroy the ship, the aliens take their own portable transporter pad away. Hoshi is drawn by unknown voices to follow them and steps onto the pad...and back aboard the Enterprise before any of this had happened. In reality, she had been temporarily stuck in the transporter's pattern buffer all along. While this episode has its moments (and I do like Hoshi and more or less how she handles herself in this story), the fact that it all turns out to be basically just another "dream sequence" kind of thing makes it all fall a bit flat (although the clues are there if you look for them).
"Precious Cargo" (ENT episode) - September 12, 2152 (Starlog date)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 8/16/03):
Enterprise comes into contact with a trader ship in need of technical assistance. The traders are carrying a passenger in a stasis field and the device is failing. Archer agrees to help them and sends Trip over to work on the problem. Soon, however, the woman in stasis field is awake and Trip is made aware of the fact that she is no passenger. Instead, she is a person of royalty on her planet and is a hostage (as is Trip at this point for as soon as she awoke, the aliens broke free from Enterprise and fled, Enterprise in pursuit). Trip engineers an escape in a life pod and the two land in a murky swamp on an alien planet. They must somehow get along long enough to be rescued (while evading their captors). An average enough episode although not very original. We've seen "odd couple" pairing fall in love many times before, some remarkably similar to this one (rough edged man paired with snooty aristocratic woman). Some scenes are interesting to watch, particularly the two of them squeezed into a very cramped life pod (nicely built set design there), but overall a pretty forgettable episode.
"The Catwalk" (ENT episode) - September 18, 2152 (Starlog date)
General Notes: A Vulcan ship (the T'Plana) encountered a class five neutronic wave front "over a century" prior to Enterprise's encounter and was lost, and Mayweather once rode out a class three storm while still onboard the Horizon with his parents. The catwalks are heavily shielded ("by some kind of osmium alloy" according to Archer). The first Vulcan ambassador to Earth was Solkar (at least, that's what the captain
"thinks" when asked by a crewmember for a crossword puzzle she is
trying to finish). Denobulan factoid: Twelve billion people share one
continent on Denobula. When perusing the Enterprise's computer
files (including Archer's captain's log entries) the Takret Milita commander
states that Archer and his crew have travelled over 100 light years from home at this point. The commander listens to part of one captain's log entry,
February 9, 2152, "the Vulcans have allowed the Mazzerites to leave;
Ambassador Valar says their--" (refers to events in an actual episode, "Fallen Hero" (ENT)). A second, briefer, entry states, "--2152; we've responded to a distress call from a vessel in the--". It takes twenty minutes for warp coils to charge (heating the catwalks to approximately three hundred degrees). "Movie night" is every Tuesday aboard Enterprise. The crew is forced to take shelter in a nacelle catwalk again soon in "The Crossing" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 8/31/03):
Archer and crew find themselves in the path of a class five neutronic wave front (or "storm"). Unable to survive the extremely high levels of radiation, the crew (all eighty-three of them plus Porthos and the doctor's animals) seeks shelter in the "catwalks", maintenance shafts running the lengths of the two warp nacelles. Also with them are a handful of aliens from the planet Takret who warned the crew about the approaching wave front to start with. Expecting to ride out the storm in the catwalks for approximately eight days, Archer has to send Trip down to engineering in an EVA suit when both the matter and anti-matter injectors unexpectedly activate, seemingly on their own (before entering the catwalks, Trip had to completely shut down the warp core because temperatures can reach up to three hundred degrees in the catwalks with the warp coils online). Trip discovers that aliens (later revealed to be member of the Takret Militia) are attempting to take over the ship. Archer and a small crew of officers have to find a way to drive off the aliens before the nacelles can completely warm up again, killing everybody in the catwalks.
I really like this episode. While we've seen the
aliens-try-to-take-over-the-ship story many times, the scenes showing the crew
squeezed into the relatively tight space of the catwalk are well done, as are
the ones aboard the darkened, powered down, standard Enterprise decks. One question, however, is what about the half of the crew stationed in the catwalk aboard the other nacelle? Every member of the ship's command staff (Archer, T'Pol, Trip, Reed, Mayweather, and Hoshi) are all aboard the same nacelle (the one with the makeshift command center), as is the doctor. Was
there an auxiliary command center aboard the other nacelle? Someone with
medical training? An officer in command to report to Archer? Once
the story shifts to the catwalk, no mention is made whatsoever to crewmembers in the other nacelle (although there had to be some people over there...yes, we only see Trip preparing the one catwalk, but why squeeze eighty-one people into one tight area when you could split them up into two?)
"Dawn" (ENT episode)
General Notes: According to T'Pol, "nearly a hundred years ago" Vulcans made first contact with the Arconians. The exchange went much less smoothly than the Vulcan-human meeting did, the Arconians "suspicious" of the Vulcans and "deceitful" (again, according to T'Pol's account). Not accepting the guidance and diplomatic and cultural exchanges of the Vulcans, the Vulcan High Command eventually removed their diplomatic ambassadors, cutting off relations. By the point of this story, there is "bad blood" between the two species. While babbling on, under the extreme heat, Trip mentions many of the experiences he has had up to this point, referring to many actual episodes (too many to mention by title here, but going from all the way back to his pregnancy in "Unexpected" (ENT) to his "spending the night with a princess" just recently in "Precious Cargo" (ENT)).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 8/31/03):
Well, here we have another Enemy Mine-type story. In much the same way that Geordi La Forge is stranded on a desolate planet with a Romulan enemy soldier in "The Enemy" (TNG), Trip is likewise stranded planet side with a hostile alien. This time, it happens when Trip's shuttlepod is shot down by an Arconian shuttle. While Enterprise and an Arconian military vessel search for the two officers, Trip and his "friend" (named Zho'Kaan) take turns capturing each other, all the while trying to repair their communications equipment so that they can alert their ships to their location. And unknown to them (at least at first), the moon they are stranded on can reach up to one hundred forty degrees during the "day". An average enough episode but not particularly memorable. I sometimes found myself more interested in the Vulcan-Arconian back story than in Trip's predicament. There were nice little touches here and there, such as human and Arconian physiology being so different (they can't stand each other's version of water and Zho'Kaan is much more vulnerable to the extreme heat) and the transporter not being an option in rescuing the Zho'Kaan (forcing the Enterprise and Arconian crews to collaborate on modifying an Arconian shuttle to retrieve Trip and Zho'Kaan).
"Stigma" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Refers to events in "Fusion" (ENT), events which happened "over a year ago." Since the "disruption of neuro-electric impulses in the midbrain" caused by mind melds is not mentioned in any Star Trek series taking place from 2265 (TOS) on (Spock practices the mind meld several times, as do other Vulcans in various TOS- and TNG-era Trek stories), it can be assumed that Pa'nar Syndrome is cured at some point between this point in Trek history (2152) and then. Also, according to this episode, only members of the Vulcan "telepathic minority" can initiate mind melds (although any Vulcan can be the recipient of one. One has to presume that (generations later) Spock, Sarek, and Tuvok are all among this
"minority".
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/29/03):
This episode begins with the arrival of Phlox's "second wife", Feezal, aboard ship to aid in the installation of a powerful neutron microscope. Feezal takes a liking to Trip, and Trip spends most of the episode squirming. The main plot of this episode, however, deals with Phlox attempting to attain medical information from Vulcans at an interspecies medical conference about a Vulcan disease called Pa'nar Syndrome. The Vulcans are suspicious of why a Denobulan doctor such as Phlox would need
information about a disease that only afflicts an "undesirable"
minority of Vulcans, namely Vulcans who practice mind melds ("we find their behavior unacceptable"). They soon realize that Phlox is looking for
information in order to treat T'Pol, who contracted the disease after her forced mind meld in "Fusion" (ENT). Archer then finds that he
must somehow prevent the Vulcans from reporting back to the high command that
T'Pol has contracted this disease for fear that they might recall her back to
Vulcan.
The "stigma" here is twofold. The "A" plot with T'Pol and Pa'nar Syndrome is obviously meant as a parallel to the trials of homosexuals in America and the "gay" disease of HIV/AIDS. (There is even an HIV/AIDS service ad at the end of the episode.) The general Vulcan population treats their telepathic, mind melding, minority with disdain and contempt, so much so that they do not give the treatment of this deadly disease much priority. Of course, there are real life parallels with the history of the AIDS epidemic in America, and they are compelling. Also, the writing and acting in this "A" plot are both top-notch. However, I personally kept feeling myself drifting away from the story because the parallel was presented so obviously. I mean, this is not quite as blatant as the anti-racism message in "Let That Be Your Last Battlefield" (TOS), but it's pretty close. (Star Trek always
takes a very tolerant stance when it comes to the issue of homosexuality.
I suppose this makes sense considering how the series predicts a future where
there is very little conflict between humans of any kind anymore, and all types
of prejudice have been overcome. This stance, however, puts fans who feel
homosexuality is wrong for religious reasons (and perhaps other reasons) in a
rather uncomfortable position. Not because it makes them questions their
own beliefs (which is good), but because Trek rarely presents their point of view on the matter in anything resembling a positive manner. See also "The Outcast" (TNG) and Perchance to Dream (TNG, comic book series) for others Trek stories with pro-homosexual parallels/themes.) Oh, and the "B" story's "stigma" is Trip's discomfort with the rather loose feelings Demobulans have concerning intimate extramarital relationships. (One should note that Trip remains a believer of his "limited human morality". As one can hardly fault Trip for not embracing Denobulan customs he finds uncomfortable, I suppose he could represent the "conservative" side of the homosexual issue. In this way, Trip does manage to represent the "conservative" side of the homosexual issue relatively well, although his role is peripheral to the "A" plot.)
"Cease Fire" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Shran first appeared in "The Andorian Incident" (ENT), as did the Andorians (first "Enterprise" appearance that is, and earliest chronological appearance on the Trek reading timeline). Ambassador Soval first appeared in "Broken Bow" (ENT) and has appeared semi-regularly since. The planet Paan Mokar (or "Weytahn" as the Andorians call it) is Class D and was claimed by the Vulcans in 2097. (Class D planets are uninhabitable according to Trip. "Minshara" class planets have been referred to before on "Enterprise" ("Minshara" the "M" in Class M, perhaps), but this is the first time a "D" class planet has been referred to I believe.) Soval was part of the occupation force at this time as an intelligence officer. Events in "The Andorian Incident", "Shadows of P'Jem" (ENT), and "Shockwave" (ENT) are referred to in this episode. Denobulan tidbit: Phlox served as a medic in the Denobulan military.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/29/03):
Shran and the Andorians return. Because Shran has requested it, Archer finds himself ordered to mediate a dispute between Ambassador Soval and the Vulcans, and Shran and the Andorians. Shran finds himself in an uncomfortable position as his fellow Andorians are willing to fight the Vulcans over their disputed planet. Shran, however, trusts Archer to deal with the issue fairly. Archer agrees to arrange for a face-to-face meeting between Shran and Soval. However, Archer's shuttlepod is shot down, placing Archer, T'Pol, and Soval in the combat zone between the two species. The Andorian episodes are some of the better "Enterprise" episodes, and this one is another good one. The danger of the already hostile relations
breaking down into all out war is convincingly portrayed, from the battleground
on the planet's surface to the standoff between Andorian and Vulcan ships and
Enterprise in orbit above. This episode also makes Soval interesting for
the first time. (Cool quote: Archer, "No offense, but my ears are
less likely to draw fire than yours." Soval, "What is
their fixation with our ears?" T'Pol, "I believe they are
envious.")
"Future
Tense" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Next episode in the overall "temporal cold war" story arc. (Daniels does not appear in this episode, however.) First chronological appearance of the Tholians (whose first actual appearance was in "The Tholian Web" (TOS)), although only their ships are seen, not the aliens themselves by either Archer and crew nor the viewers. (T'Pol is familiar with them, however, saying that the Vulcan and Tholians have had little contact with each other due to the Tholians' being a very xenophobic race). The future possibility of human-Vulcan mixed breed offspring is first suggested here (foreshadowing Spock) as the corpse the crew discovers in the time ship is of a mixed heritage (many races, including human and Vulcan). Archer speculates (before details of the corpse's genetic structure are known) if it might be Zefram Cochrane. As explained in his first actual appearance in "Metamorphosis" (TOS), Cochrane disappeared in the year 2117, fifty-four years after his famous first warp flight in 2063 (Star Trek: First Contact (TNG)). Since this episode occurs in 2152, it has been thirty-five years since his disappearance. (For more on Cochrane, see also Federation (TOS/TNG), year 2065 entry.) Finally, Archer and Reed work to disassemble a torpedo warhead. This is reminiscent of the "surgery" Spock and McCoy perform on a photon torpedo in Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/15/04):
Archer and crew discover a derelict ship floating in space. Upon review, they discover that it and its sole passenger (a corpse) seem to be from nine hundred years in the future. Archer and T'Pol use the future database Daniels left behind in his quarters to identify the craft and its era of origin. The time ship is apparently a very valuable commodity as both the Suliban and the Tholians show up separately demanding Archer to turn the ship over to them. Archer refuses and makes a run for safety at a prearranged rendezvous point where a Vulcan defense ship is awaiting them to retrieve the time ship and transport it to Earth for further study. Upon arriving at the rendezvous point, however, they discover that the Tholians have already disabled the Vulcan ship. Archer is then forced to attempt to destroy the time ship while the Suliban and Tholians fight each other. This is doomed to fail though, and only the last minute activation of a beacon aboard the time ship by Trip, which causes whoever in the future who had sent the time ship back in time to start with to suddenly retrieve it, prevents the Tholians from claiming their prize.
"Canamar" (ENT episode)
General Notes: One of the escaped prisoners is a Nausicaan. Nausicaans were last seen in "Fortunate Son" (ENT). Also, this is the earliest reference chronologically to the Orion slave women. An Orion slave girl is first seen (actually, the human woman Vina altered to look as an Orion slave girl) in "The Menagerie, Part II" (TOS) (which is a flashback, of course, to the previously filmed but much later released first "Star Trek" pilot episode, "The Cage" (TOS)). The first time an actual Orion slave girl is seen is Marta in "Whom Gods Destroy" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/16/04):
Archer and Trip are mistaken as smugglers while leaving an alien planet. Captured, they find themselves aboard a prison transport ship on the way to the penal colony on the planet Canamar. T'Pol convinces a local official that they have made a mistake and arranges for Archer and Trip's release. Before this can happen, however, two prisoners take control of the prisoner transport ship. Archer finds himself at the helm of the transport, aiding the escaped prisoners while secretly looking for an opportunity to diable them and/or alert help to their location.
"The
Crossing" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Archer states that they are 150 lightyears from Earth in this episode (of course, that might be an estimate). Trip says he's been to Tarpon Springs, Florida, and snowsailing in New Zealand, both with his girlfriend, Lisa, during his out-of-body experiences. He says he was also both with his dad and riding alongside Hopalong Cassidy. The ship's complement is given in this episode as eighty-three, including T'Pol and Dr. Phlox. Also, a good portion of the crew is forced to hide out in a nacelle catwalk again, as then did previously in "The Catwalk" (ENT). It is said that the catwalk is shielded by an osmium alloy.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/17/04):
Enterprise is pursued and captured (swallowed into a hugh bay) by an enormous unknown alien ship. Soon, starting with Trip, members of the crew are replaced in their own bodies by non-corporeal beings. The beings say they are explorers, but they continue to take over crewmembers despite Archer's protests. Discovering that the catwalk gives them protection from the aliens, the non-possessed crew retreats to its safety. T'Pol discovers the aliens true intentions, and Dr. Phlox (who the aliens can not possess due to his Denobulan physiology) is a key player in the risky plan to kill all of the possessed members with gas, wait for the aliens to evacuate their bodies, and then revive them. An okay enough episode. The opening sequence with the huge alien ship swallowing Enterprise is pretty impressive (although it's not long, since it's the episode's "teaser"). Overall, the plot is pretty unremarkable. Seems a whole lot like a TNG-type plot. Matter a fact, I can't think of any reason this story couldn't be done just as well with that cast of characters (and, while not exactly the same, was done in "Lonely Among Us" (TNG) and "Power Play" (TNG), among others).
"Savior" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VI, 2003)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Read this one back on September 1, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Savior" (by Julie Hyzy)], "Archer attempts to prevent time-traveling manipulation that would prevent a Christ-like figure on an alien world from being martyred and therefore sowing the seeds for a Christian-like religion to form, as history says it should have. I recall not caring for this story very much. Probably due to its religious implications. (No time frame given in story.)" (Placement here based on timeline given in Star Trek: Voyages of the Imagination book (2006).)
2153
"Judgment" (ENT episode)
General Notes: First chronological appearances of a Klingon tribunal chamber and Rura Penthe (both first seen in Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS)). The Duras seen here as commander of the D-5 Klingon battlecruiser Bortas in the flashback scenes (he has been demoted to "second weapons officer" by the time of the trial due to his disgrace at losing to Archer and company in combat) is most likely an ancestor of the powerful House of Duras first scene in "Sins of the Father" (TNG). This Duras is seen next in "The Expanse" (ENT). Other Klingon elements first seen here chronologically: the delicacies of targ (first seen as a live animal in "Where No One Has Gone Before" (TNG) and as a source of food in "A Matter of Honor" (TNG)) and blood wine (first seen, and mentioned by name, in "Gambit, Pt. II" (TNG)?), and the use of Klingon pain sticks (first seen in "The Icarus Factor" (TNG)). Finally, during his defense of Archer, Kolos refers to Archer's previous encounters with the Klingons in "Broken Bow" (ENT) and "Sleeping Dogs" (ENT). (Note: No date is given in this episode. However, the following episode, "Horizon" (ENT) reports a date of January 10, 2153. I'm therefore conjecturing that "Judgment" takes place just after the start of the year 2153, although it could have just as easily taken place in late December 2152.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/18/04):
Episode begins with Archer standing trial in a Klingon tribunal for allegedly aiding the escape of rebels fleeing the Klingon Empire. Archer gets a crash course in the Klingon justice system when his "advocate", Kolos, does not even try to defend him in court. He convinces Kolos, who remembers the days when the Klingon courts were about justice, to make a strong case for Archer's innocence upon their return to the tribunal for Archer's sentencing. The result of Kolos's eloquent defense is that Archer is still found guilty but his death sentence is commuted to banishment at the penal colony on Rura Penthe for life. Kolos objects and is likewise sent to Rura Penthe for one year. T'Pol dissuades her crewmates from attempting a rescue attempt while Archer (and Kolos) are being transferred to Rura Penthe, using instead her connections with certain Klingon officials (from T'Pol's time as Vulcan Minister of Security) to stage a rescue after Archer and Kolos arrive at Rura Penthe. Kolos, however, chooses to remain and stay out his sentenced time, even though many do not survive a full year there. An enjoyable enough episode but not particularly noteworthy. Not a whole lot new here as this is a case mainly of Archer discovering things already revealed to Star Trek viewers in earlier stories (particularly Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS)). Confrontations with Klingons almost always make for at least somewhat enjoyable episodes, however, and I liked the way the actual confrontation was shown (two different ways) in flashback, making yet another Starfleet ship vs. Klingon ship battle a side element to the story rather than a primary one. Archer does learn a bit about the Klingon caste system from Kolo, that there are types other than the warrior caste. Kolos, obviously, works in the legal system, and he tells Archer that his father was a teacher and his mother a biologist.
"Horizon" (ENT episode) - January 10, 2153 (Starlog date)
General Notes: It is stated again in this episode that Enterprise has traveled over 150 lightyears. Mayweather says they have also discovered twenty-two inhabited worlds in this time, which he says has been eighteen months. The episode opens with Mayweather once again relaxing in Enterprise's "sweet spot", an area of the ship where the artificial gravity does not cover, allowing for zero gravity (first seen in "Broken Bow" (ENT)). Archer says that he hasn't been to the "sweet spot" since they launched. Archer tells Mayweather that, prior to joining Starfleet, he considered joining the merchant marine and signing on aboard a cargo ship. He also tells Mayweather that one year prior to their launch he was looking at helm officer applicants and having trouble deciding. A recommendation from Mayweather's father was quite convincing. Mayweather actually discussed leaving the Horizon and applying for Starfleet with his mother "four years ago" (or two and one half years prior to launch). As of this episode, Tuesday is Enterprise's regular "movie night". While talking with his mother, Mayweather refers to events that occured in "Catwalk" (ENT) and "Minefield" (ENT). T'Pol compares the reactions of the villagers in the movie Frankenstein to those of the humans after making first contact with Vulcans in Star Trek: First Contact (TNG).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/25/04):
When Enterprise's course happens to pass close to that of his old ship's, the Horizon, Mayweather asks for a short leave to visit. Sadly, he discovers that his father has died a few months prior to his visit. Travis's brother, Paul, is now acting captain. There is tension between Mayweather and his brother, partially because Paul has always felt that Travis abandoned them when he joined Starfleet. This tension causes Paul to refuse any aid Travis offers, even when they are confronted by a group of pirates who have been attacking fellow cargo ships. When Paul's plans to escape or offer to surrender their cargo fail (the pirates insist on seizing their ship as well), Paul assents to accepting Travis's help in overcoming the pirates. Meanwhile, back aboard Enterprise, T'Pol is reluctant to join the others in a viewing of the movie Frankenstein. She finally gives in. To her surprise, she finds several parallels between the film and the humans' behavior when they first made contact with the Vulcans. She remarks that she might show this film to Soval to help him understand humans better. This makes Archer speculate that maybe his and Trip's pressuring T'Pol to see Frankenstein perhaps wasn't such a good idea. I liked this episode, particularly the Travis-Paul scenes. I felt the actors played this relationship very well, and the actor who played Paul was convincing in the role. I felt, on the other hand, that Archer had no particular business pressuring T'Pol to see the movie. (Trip, who generally likes to hassle T'Pol, I can see, but not Archer, at least not at this point in the series.)
"The
Breach" (ENT episode)
General Notes: A tribble is seen here for the first time chronologically (Tribbles were first seen, of course, in "The Trouble with Tribbles" (TOS). It has been over three hundred years since the last actual conflict between the Denobulans and Antarans, yet this Antaran says he is the first to see a Denobulan in six generations. The rift between Phlox and his youngest son, Metis, was initiated by Metis's anti-Antaran sentiments. The two haven't spoken to each other for ten years at the time of this episode. Oh, and Mayweather is somehow quite skilled at rock climbing. Pretty impressive for a man raised as a "space boomer" aboard a deep space cargo ship. He did get himself injured rock climbing earlier on Risa in the episode, "Two Days and Two Nights".
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/25/04):
Archer is asked to aid in the retrieval of several Denobulan geologists studying caverns deep underground on a planet undergoing a very violent civil war. While Trip, Reed, and Mayweather make their way down to the scientists with climbing gear, Enterprise comes to the aid of a ship fleeing the planet that has taken on serious damage. Among the injured is an Antaran. As Archer finds out, there are a few hundred years of "bad blood" between the Denobulans and the Antarans. The Antaran refuses to allow Phlox to treat him. Archer orders Phlox to treat him against his wishes, but Phlox's Denobulan medical ethics do not allow him to do so (the will of the patient is of chief importance and "Hippocritus was not Denobulan" he tells Archer). Archer convinces Phlox that he must at the very least try to convince the Antaran to change his mind, leading to a gradual yet eventual agreement between the two to put their hostility for each other aside for moment. A rather classic Star Trek episode in many ways. One, it has the familiar (yet effective) element of a character having to confront his or her prejudiced feelings. Also, this episode has a conventional A-B plot structure, although (granted) in this case both plots center around Denobulans.
"Cogenitor" (ENT episode)
General Notes: Archer says that no Earth ship has ever gotten any closer than ten lightyears to a hypergiant star before. Trip tells the congenitor that he's managed to get Enterprise up to warp 5.1. The Vissian chief armory officer asks Reed if the Enterprise torpedoes have photonic warheads (i.e., "photon torpedoes") and Reed is unfamiliar with those. When asked by the Vissian captain about a particular manuever, Archer says he learned it bodysurfing off the north shore of Oahu (Hawaii).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/25/04):
Archer and crew make first contact with a ship of Vissian scientists while studying a rare hypergiant star. While Archer and the Vissian captain take a small vessel deep into the star's troposphere (out of communication with the ship), Trip becomes quite interested in a Vissian couple's "cogenitor". Vissians are tri-gendered, and cogenitors are needed to reproduce. Trip feels that the cogenitor is being mistreated, however. Secretly, he teaches the cogenitor to read and shows the cogenitor around Enterprise. He is found out, and told he is no longer welcome aboard the Vissian ship. The cogenitor smuggles aboard Enterprise and informs Trip that "she'd" like to stay on Enterprise. Archer returns to face a difficult decision, whether or not to grant the cogenitor asylum. Reluctantly, he agrees to return the congenitor to "her" people. After parting ways, Archer and Trip learn the true consequences of Trip's meddling in the Vissians' affairs. Archer receives a communique from the Vissian ship informing him that the cogenitor has committed suicide. A very strong episode in that it is one of those that assuredly provokes conversation among fans, on both sides of the issue. While Trip felt he was doing the right thing, he was interfering in another culture and using his own conceptions of right and wrong to judge the Vissians. Obviously, he saw the cogenitor being treated much as black slaves were in the pre-Civil War United States, as property. He even goes as far as to teach "her" to read, just as some slaves were secretly taught. However, he should have realized that there was no way the congenitor would be able to escape the restrictions upon "her" by Vissian society, and that convincing the cogenitor otherwise was setting "her" up for a fall. Nonetheless, while his anger is genuine, I think Archer goes a bit too far in his dressing Trip down in the end of the episode. Yes, Archer was very upset with Trip, and he probably felt that Trip needed the harsh words. In the end, however, Archer and Trip are friends as well as officers, and Archer should have been able to see the pain Trip was going through even without the added insult of Archer's words. (Of course, all is forgotten by the next episode, or at least, not mentioned again.)
"Regeneration"
(ENT episode) - March 1, 2153 (Starlog date)
General Notes: Follow-up story to the 2063 sequences in Star Trek: First Contact
(TNG). Archer refers to a commencement speech given by Zefram Cochrane at Princeton where
Cochrane revealed the involvement of cybernetic beings from the future attempting to prevent
his historic first warp flight, and the future humans who came to his aid. Archer said that
he later recanted his story, and T'Pol said that Cochrane was known for telling fanciful
stories and frequently "being intoxicated" (which he was in Star
Trek: First Contact). Dr. Phlox makes reference to the Bynars, who are first seen
in "1100101" (TNG). In the end, T'Pol tells Archer that the
"cybernetic beings" (Archer and crew never hear the name, "The Borg")
were successful in transmitting the location of Earth to a place "deep in the Delta
Quadrant". They say that it would take a signal two hundred years to reach there.
Archer muses that they may have merely delayed the problem until "the 24th
century" (which is later proven correct). This sequence is interesting for a couple
reasons. One, it makes for a sort of temporal causality loop. The Borg first met the
humans and Starfleet in "Q Who?" (TNG) in the year 2365. They went back
in time in 2373 in Star Trek: First Contact to the year 2063. Now, we find
out that these Borg from Star Trek: First Contact sent a message in 2153 to
the Borg of that period, telling them about the humans. So, had the Borg received the
signal by the time Q introduced them to the humans in 2365? It is uncertain. The signal
should have been received by the Borg in the Delta Quadrant by then. Guinan, however,
reported that the humans should not have encountered the Borg until much later. So I
guess, until more details are revealed in future stories, the effects of the signal sent
in 2153 are speculative at best. Second, this discussion reveals that the names first used
in the "Star Trek: The Next Generation" for the four "quadrants" of
the universe (Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta), were being used as far back as the time of
the "Enterprise" series (here, 2153).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/18/04):
A team of arctic researchers discovers two Borg drones frozen in the ice along with the wreckage of their crashed ship. The two drones soon awake, assimilate the researchers, and take off in the reseach team's transport craft towards Borg space. Their path crosses that of Enterprise's, so Archer and crew are sent to stop the "cybernetic beings" (the Borg) and rescue the researchers. When they confront the Borg, however, they find that the Borg have upgraded the capablities of the stolen transport. Still, the Enterprise crew is able to drive off the Borg, rescuing two Tarkellians the Borg were in the midst of attacking. The Tarkellians, however, have already been injected with Borg nanites, beginning the assimilation process. They inject Dr. Phlox with Borg nanites, and sabotage the ship's warp relays before Archer finally orders them ejected into space. This sabotage puts Enterprise in a very vulnerable position when confonted once again by the Borg. Archer and Reed transport over to the Borg ship and do a bit of sabotaging of their own, setting explosives which destroy the Borg ship. And Phlox is finally able to destroy the Borg nanites in his system with a high dosage of radiation. In the end, T'Pol reveals that the Borg were successful in relaying a message to their people far in the Delta Quadrant, however: the location of Earth.
This episode had continuity train wreck written all over it, what with the fact that Starfleet did not "meet" the Borg until "Q Who?" (TNG), over two hundred years after this episode takes place! However, it turns out that "Regeneration" is a pretty good episode, and tying the Borg that appear in this episode to Star Trek: First Contact (TNG) addresses most of the continuity questions. I mean, it follows that these Borg drones could have survived crash landing on Earth in Star Trek: First Contact and remained active at some level in suspended animation all those years in the arctic ice. Once active again, they behave just as Borg should, assimilating and seeking out the other Borg of this time period. The Enterprise crew is able to defeat the Borg here because we're talking about only a small handful of Borg in a Borg-modified human transport ship. There's no way Archer and crew could take on an actual Borg ship, but this scenario is realistic. Ok, here are my questions/concerns, however. One, aren't some sort of files from this encounter still available in Picard's era? I mean, granted, the "cybernetic beings" never say they are the Borg by name in this episode, but their appearance and vitals are on file, scanned by the arctic research team, as would be some tactical information about their technology, one would think, gathered from their encounter with the Enterprise. And two, about that not saying they are the Borg thing. What's up with that? I mean, I know why it was written that way. To keep the "Next Generation" "first" encounter with the Borg continuity valid. However, the Borg always say, "We are the Borg," before going on to the "you will be assimilated, resistence is futile" stuff. So it seems kind of weird that they don't say it here. Shoot, this entry is getting too long. One other thing I wanted to point out: Really cool, cinematic, shot of Enterprise approaching the Borg transport for the first confrontation. Enterprise flies in low over the "camera", forboding orchestral music swells. A really cool shot.
"First
Flight" (ENT episode)
See Also: 2143 - flashbacks to Archer's time in NX program
2150 - Archer is chosen as captain of the Enterprise
General Notes: Present day (2153) portions of episode. Archer learns that A.G. Robinson was killed climbing Mount McKinley. According to T'Pol, Starfleet regulations prohibit the captain from leaving the ship unaccompanied. In the end, it is suggested that the dark matter nebula Archer and T'Pol discovered by named the Robinson Nebula (after A.G. Robinson). Starship Enterprise history: Archer and Robinson were grounded for three months following their unapproved test in 2143; the Vulcans insisted that they run simulations for "over a year" after that; "eight months later" (2145?) Commander Duvall broke warp three in the NX-Delta; "five years later" (2150?) they "laid the keel for Enterprise".
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/19/04):
Archer's excitement over possibly discovering a large "dark matter nebula" is severely diminished when he gets a message from Admiral Forrest that his old friend, Captain A.G. Robinson, has been tragically killed in an mountain climbing accident. Hoping to get off by himself in the shuttlepod investigating the possible dark matter nebula, Archer reluctantly allows T'Pol to accompany him. On the mission inside the shuttlepod, Archer tells T'Pol how he and Robinson had both been in the NX program years ago, trying to be the first to "break the warp two barrior".
Most of this episode takes place in 2143, flashbacks relaying the story Archer is telling T'Pol in the present (2153). A very good episode. By the end of this season, "Enterprise" had finally strung together several pretty enjoyable episodes ("Regeneration", "First Flight", "Bounty", and "The Expanse"). The relationship between Archer and Robinson is particularly well played by the actors, as is the sense of frustration and urgency Archer feels when it seems the program might be put on hiatus by Starfleet (at the urging of the Vulcans) and his father's engine design rejected.
Daedalus (ENT novel, 2003)
Other Dates: 2139 - flashbacks to Tucker's time working on the Daedalus Project.
2140 (October 5) - flashbacks to Tucker's time working on the Daedalus Project.
General Notes: Part one of two. According to note given at start of book takes place immediately prior to "Bounty" (ENT). Continues in Daedalus’s Children (ENT) (Stern, 2004).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Sorry, no detailed comments about Daedalus (Dave Stern, 2003) at this time. According to my notes, I finished reading this back on February 25, 2004. Unfortunately, I never got around to making an entry for it here and now, over two years later, I remember very little about the book. Here's what I recall. The book focuses primarily on Trip (Commander Tucker). Matter a fact, aside from Hoshi, I don't think we see the rest of the Enterprise crew for the entire book past chapter three (book two of this "duology", Daedalus's Children, brings Archer and the rest of the crew back into the story). The story deals with warring alien factions in an alternate universe that Tucker and Hoshi find themselves thrust into and the surprising reappearance of one of Tucker's early mentors, one whom Tucker had presumed dead for many years. I recall that I enjoyed both Daedalus and Daedalus's Children quite a bit (easily my favorite "Enterprise" novels written up to this point). Stern quickly proved himself to be the primary "Enterprise" novelist, at least in my own eyes. Further, here are the bare bone notes I made back when I finished reading Daedalus: "Fourth original "Enterprise" novel. Book one of two (continues in Daedalus's Children). While investigating an anomaly, the ship and its entire crew except for Trip and Hoshi are captured by the Denari. Trip and Hoshi manage to escape in the Suliban cell ship (captured previously in an episode of the television series ["Broken Bow" and "The Communicator"]). They soon find themselves, however, in the midst of a long running rebel uprising against the tyranical dictator and his government who have taken their ship and comrades captive. Trip is hesitant to help the rebels until he discovers a long thought dead mentor of his has been another long time captive of the Denari government, and that captured Starfleet technology led to the desparate situation the Denari are now in."
Daedalus's Children (ENT novel, 2004)
General Notes: Part two of two. Continued from Daedalus (ENT) (Stern, 2003). According to note given at start of book takes place immediately prior to "Bounty" (ENT).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Sorry, no detailed comments about Daedalus's Children (Dave Stern, 2004) at this time. According to my notes, I finished reading this back on January 23, 2005. Unfortunately, I never got around to making an entry for it here and now, over two years later, I remember very little about the book. Here's what I recall. The book picks up where Daedalus leaves off. Furthermore, it goes back and fills readers in on what's been happening to Archer and the rest of the Enterprise crew since being separated from Trip and Hoshi and being taken captive by the Denari. I recall that I enjoyed both Daedalus and Daedalus's Children quite a bit (easily my favorite "Enterprise" novels written up to this point). Stern quickly proved himself to be the primary "Enterprise" novelist, at least in my own eyes. Further, here are the bare bone notes I made back when I finished reading Daedalus's Children : "Fifth original "Enterprise" novel (series logo becomes "Star Trek: Enterprise", following change made to television series title). Book two of two (continues from 2003's Daedalus). The crew of the Enterprise is trapped in an alternate dimension and divided. Their ship is captured, and most of the crew is in an alien prison. Archer must find a way for he and his crew to escape, retake their ship, and return to their own dimension before dying (they are unable to eat the food in this parallel universe without getting sick). While doing so, Archer hopes to avert a bloody civil war."
"Bounty" (ENT episode) - March 21, 2153 (Starlog date)
General Notes: First appearance chronologically of the Tellarites (the voice of a Tellarite freighter captain was heard earlier on "Enterprise" in "Dead Stop".) The Tellarites first appeared in "Journey to Babel" (TOS). This episode refers to events which occured in "Judgment" (ENT), and is the first instance where someone attempts to cash in on the bounty on Archer's head for escaping from the Klingon prison on Rura Penthe (it will happen again in "The Expanse" (ENT)). There is another reference to "Orion slave girls" in this episode (they were referred to earlier in "Canamar" (ENT).) An Orion slave girl is first seen (actually, the human woman Vina altered to look as an Orion slave girl) in "The Menagerie, Part II" (TOS) (which is a flashback, of course, to the previously filmed but much later released first "Star Trek" pilot episode, "The Cage" (TOS)). The first time an actual Orion slave girl is seen is Marta in "Whom Gods Destroy" (TOS). Dr. Phlox refers again to the tenant of Denobulan medical ethics which prohibits him from treating a patient against his or her will (first mentioned in "The Breach" (ENT). And, of course, the first time we see pon farr (which is triggered prematurely in T'Pol in this episode by the alien microbe) was in the classic "Amok Time" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 10/19/04):
Another fun episode. Archer is kidnapped by a Tellarite who plans to turn Archer in to the Klingons (Archer now has a bounty on him for escaping from the prison on Rura Penthe). Archer ultimately is able to convince the Tellarite to not turn him in. An escape plan is then set in motion which will allow Archer's crewmates to rescue him from the Klingons without the Klingons suspecting the Tellarite of whelching on their deal. The "B" story of this episode is completely unrelated to the Archer-Tellarite one, and deals with Dr. Phlox and T'Pol being quarantined in decon due to their contracting a contagious alien microbe while on shore leave. The microbe sets off T'Pol's pon farr (mating cycle) early, making for a rather uncomfortable situation for Phlox. While the T'Pol-pon farr sub-plot could have possibly been handled in an interesting way under other circumstances, in this instance it was rather cumbersome and not all that interesting because it kept interrupting the Archer-Tellarite main plot.
"The Expanse" & "The Xindi" (ENT
episodes)/The Expanse (novelization, 2003) - ("The Expanse" - April 24, 2153)
General Notes: Novelization adapts both episodes. Beginning of the Xindi War story arc that ran for all of "Enterprise's" third season.
Chronological reading notes/summary: (written on 7/22/06):
Sorry, no detailed comments about The Expanse novelization (J.M. Dillard, 2003) at this time. According to my notes, I finished reading this back on January 30, 2005. Unfortunately, I never got around to making an entry for it here and now, over two years later, I remember very little about the book. What I do recall is that it is a pretty straight adaptation of the two episodes. It does that job reasonably well but isn't particularly memorable otherwise. Further, here are the bare bone notes I made back when I finished reading The Expanse : "Earth is savagely attacked by an alien probe which burns a huge trench from Florida to Mexico, killing millions. The Enterprise is recalled home because of the attack. Trip learns that his sister is most likely dead (her death is shown in the prologue here). Archer learns from the Suliban's leader from the future that an alien race named the Xindi are behind the attack and are preparing a weapon capable of destroying the Earth entirely. Soon, the ship has been refitted and the crew is off on their new mission: to locate and prevent the Xindi from attacking the Earth again. Their destination: a dangerous area of space called the Delphic Expanse, a place even the Vulcans and Klingons are wary of entering. Other story elements: the Klingon, Duras, continues to hound Archer, confronting the Enterprise crew twice (seen in "The Expanse" episode), and Archer and company risk dealing with a shady mining foreman to discover the location of the Xindi homeworld from one of the foreman's workers who happens to be Xindi (seen in "The Xindi" episode)."
"Anomaly" (ENT episode)
"Earthquake Weather" (ENT short story, Strange New Worlds VII, 2004)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/22/06):
Read this one back September 5, 2004, so my memories are going to be a bit fuzzy about this one. Here are some notes I jotted down write after reading it, however: [In "Earthquake Weather" (by Louisa M. Swann)], "Soon after entering the Delphic Expanse (at the start of the television series' Xindi war arc), Trip is still having trouble sleeping. He ascribes his feelings to how animals often act just before an earthquake, detecting an immenent chaotic event. Suddenly, everyone on board except Trip falls asleep and he must what has caused it and how to wake his crewmates." (Placement here based on timeline given in Star Trek: Voyages of the Imagination book (2006).)
"Extinction" (ENT episode)
"Rajiim" (ENT episode)
2159
"Dead Man's Hand" (DS9 short story, Legends
of Dax, 1999)
General Notes: Story is set during the third year of the Romulan Wars, first mentioned in "Balance of Terror" (TOS). This story
presents Tobin Dax as the first humanoid ever to be transported. This is contradicted however by later stories which make use of the transporter prior to this, notably Forgiveness (TNG comic book graphic novel) (2052) and the "Enterprise" television series (2151- ). The Romulans
at this time do not have warp technology, although they have been at war with
Earth for two years. This is also apparently contradicted in Starfleet:
Year One (released as a serial novel just after "Dead Man's
Hand" in 1999-2000 and taking place in 2161). The Earth Command
(see notes in Starfleet: Year One entry as to why not
"Starfleet" and the Year One/"Enterprise" continuity problems) ships in that novel are capable of warp, making one presume that the Romulan ships are as well or else the war would be over pretty quickly. Also, the Romulans seen in "Enterprise" (first in "Minefield" (ENT), which takes place in 2152) seem to be warp capable as well.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/16/01):
"Dead Man's Hand" (Jeffrey Lang). 2159, Star Trek time. This one deals with Tobin Dax (second host for the Dax symbiote). It is in the third year of the Federation-Romulan war, and Tobin and Skon (future father of Sarek, grandfather of Spock) find themselves on a Federation research vessel attacked by Romulans. Interestingly enough, two pieces of Federation technology (both of which the Romulans do not have at this time) play important roles in this story: warp drive and transporters.
2161
Starfleet: Year One (serial novel, 1999-2000; single novel/collected edition, 2002)
General Notes: This novel begins in the final year of the Earth-Romulan War (a.k.a. "The Romulan Wars"), first mentioned in "Balance of
Terror" (TOS). It presents the end of the war and the birth of the Federation and Starfleet. The following are details which seemingly contradict those later established by the television series "Enterprise" (see reading notes below for more on this). (1) The primary starships used by "Earth Command" and Starfleet's initial fleet are Christopher 2000 class warships. Their top speed is given as warp two. The brand new Daedalus (first of the new line of vessels designed specifically for Starfleet use)* boasts speeds of up to warp three. Enterprise NX-01 (in "Enterprise") is a warp five starship. Since "Enterprise" begins ten years earlier (2151) than Year One, the top speeds given in Year One seem incorrect by comparison. (2) The very fact of when "Starfleet" was founded is contradictory. For many years, it has been conjecture (based on what little had been previously established in the various Star Trek series) that the Federation and Starfleet had been founded at the same time. Year One follows this assumption, using the events of the Earth-Romulan War as the impetus for the Federation (to attempt to prevent such a war from happening again) and Starfleet (to be prepared to defend Earth and the Federation if it does). Then "Enterprise" came along and established that a purely Earth-based Starfleet had been established a decade prior to the Federation's founding in 2161. Now, one can assume that these are in reality two different "Starfleets", however to do so one must gloss over many seemingly inconsistent details (no mention of a previous Starfleet in Year One, using "Earth Command" instead during the
Earth-Romulan War, the differing levels of technology, and the contrasts between
the decidedly military tone of Earth Command vs. the more balanced
military/science-exploration mission of earlier Starfleet in "Enterprise", among others). Year One also seemingly
contradicts a detail from "Dead Man's Hand" (DS9 short
story). In that story, which takes place in the third year of the "Romulan
Wars" in 2159, it is stated that Romulans do not possess warp
technology. While not outright contradicted by anything said in Year
One (that I can recall), it seems unlikely that the events described
in Year One concerning the role of the Romulans in the war could have been performed by a pre-warp society (how would they have been able to encroach upon Federation space if not able to travel faster than the speed of
light?). Other details: The President of Earth in 2161 is Lydia Littlejohn. The first director of Starfleet is Chinua Abute. T'Pau is the highest ranking official in the Vulcan planetary government (an older T'Pau is later seen in 2267 in "Amok Time" (TOS)). It is announced that Vulcans Skon and T'Lara have given birth in 2161 to a son named Sarek. (Sarek of course will sire Spock. Sarek was first seen in "Journey to Babel" (TOS), and Skon is seen prior to this chronologically in the aforementioned short story, "Dead Man's Hand" (DS9). The Stiles brothers here (Jake and Aaron) are ancestors of the Lt. Stiles serving aboard the Enterprise NCC 1701 in 2266 in "Balance of Terror" (TOS). The "Underwood's Theory of Parallel Development" is similar to the "Hodgkins Law of Parallel Planet Development" first seen in "Bread and Circuses" (TOS). Tractor beams, theoretical at this time, are first proposed for Starfleet vessels. (Note: While initially not available on Earth Starfleet vessels on "Enterprise", they are not considered as purely theoretical on that series as Archer and company early on encountered alien races that already utilized said technology). * Notes about the Daedelus-class ship: class first
mentioned by name and some historical details given in "Power Play" (TNG); model (based on early Enterprise 1701 design sketches by Matt Jefferies) seen on monitor display on "Deep Space Nine". (That's enough details I think...if you want more, read the book!)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 7/18/03):
It is important to first note that this novel by Michael Jan Friedman was written and released prior to the start of the "Enterprise" television series in the fall of 2001. It and "Enterprise" both take place in the until then largely unexplored area of the early years of Starfleet and the Federation ("Enterprise" starting in 2151 and Starfleet: Year One taking place in 2161). Since Friedman was unaware of the direction "Enterprise" would be taking, much of Year One (especially technical details such as starship specs) is contradicted by "Enterprise". According to the "canon" vs. "non-canon" rule, "Enterprise" (a live action television series and therefore "canon") supersedes contradictory details in Year One (a licensed Star Trek novel, therefore "non-canon"). That does not mean that one should skip reading Year One because it does not jive with "Enterprise", just that he/she should be aware going in
that this is more or less another view of Star Trek's early years, just
as one might see Federation (TOS/TNG) and Strangers from the Sky (TOS). (There is a disclaimer on the first page of the collected edition reading "STARFLEET: YEAR ONE is unrelated to the events depicted in the television series ENTERPRISE."). This novel was first released in serial form in the back of Pocket's paperback Star Trek novels, from August 1999 through July 2000. It was then collected as a single paperback novel in early 2002. The collected edition is slightly expanded from the original serialized version. Friedman has said that he added a known character (although quite a bit younger than we last saw her) in the updated version, presumably meaning T'Pau in chapter nine (I don't know for certain as I did not read the serialized version).
Now, on to the story! In a nutshell, after the defeat of the Romulans, a new "Federation" of planets is created between Earth and her closest allies (Vulcan, Andor, and Tellar among others) in hopes of preventing another such war from occurring (and if so, to ensure defense for member worlds). An outgrowth of the Federation is a new space force known as "Starfleet". Two factions wage an internal war over the future direction of the Starfleet. One faction is the military establishment, while on the other is made up of the researchers and scientists who wish Starfleet to be more of a research-based organization. Six captains are
chosen to lead the first Starfleet vessels (former Earth Command Christopher
2000 ships), three representing each side. One of these captains will
ultimately be chosen to command the first of a new class of starship designed
specifically for Starfleet--the Daedalus. It is felt that whoever wins
this prize will determine what direction the fledgling Starfleet will ultimately
take, military or science/research.
I really liked this book, particularly the way Friedman spread things out between many characters. The captains (Hagedorn, Matsura, Aaron Stiles, Shumar, Cobaryn, and Dane) are of course the focal characters, and Friedman makes each one interesting and different. In the background are the "movers and shakers", each with his or her own agendas, planting the seeds for the organizations that will one day develop into the Federation and Starfleet that future officers such as James Kirk and Jean-Luc Picard will serve centuries later. I definitely recommend this book to all Trek fans (just don't allow the discrepancies with "Enterprise" to ruin your enjoyment of it).
2237
"Yesteryear" (TAS episode, 1973)/"Yesteryear" (TAS adaptation, 1974)
See Also: 2269 - [frame story with Guardian of Forever - Stardate 5373.4].
General Notes: Spock travels back in time via Guardian of Forever and interacts with himself at age seven.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not viewed/read yet. Currently positioned with other 2269 stories (which is when the frame story of "Yesteryear" occurs).]
2245
"Old Souls" (DS9/TOS short story, Legends
of Dax, 1999)
General Notes: Story takes place at Old Miss (Oxford, Mississippi). Story takes place nearly 85 years after the founding of the Federation. At this time, Trills kept their symbiotic nature secret from other races. Emony
Dax is described as a "three-time latinum medallist"
from the ‘24 (2224) Olympics on Aldebaran. Although son of a doctor, McCoy at
this time had not decided to be the same. Aiding treatment of a wounded Trill has an impact on him. It was first revealed that the two had met later in "Trials and Tribble-ations" (DS9).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/16/01):
"Old Souls" (Michael Jan Friedman). (Interestingly enough, I skipped over for the moment one MJF entry, Starfleet: Year One, and the very next thing to come up
on my chronological list was another story by Friedman.) Trek year: 2245. This one shows us how Emony Dax (third Dax host) met a young (almost eighteen-year-old) Leonard McCoy, as mentioned by Jadzia Dax in "Trials and Tribble-ations." An interesting thing about this story is that it tries to patch up a bit of Trek continuity by stating that (at this time) Trills kept their symbiotic relationship hidden from other races (I assume aside from the Vulcans, who they had met first according to the earlier story, but that's just a guess on my part). This would explain why no one knows about the Trill symbiotes when they first showed up TNG's "The Host".
Of the three ["First Steps", "Dead Man's Hand", and "Old Souls"], I think I like MJF's "Old Souls" best (but I liked all three). One thing, I'm a sucker for writers who throw in Trek aliens and other Trek elements in the background as MJF does (a good portion of this story
takes place at a multi-alien gymnastics competition...the humans don't do so
well, by the way). [Personally, I also thought it was cool that the story took
place at Old Miss (Oxford, Mississippi) because I've actually been there! My
grandmother lives just an hour away in a very small town named Bruce,
Mississippi. I think this is the first time I've read a Trek story that takes
place somewhere I've actually been before.]
Of the other two, it's a bit of a balance. I like the
plot of "Dead Man's Hand" a bit better than "First Steps." However, I like the characters a bit better in "First Steps". Rusch gives us an interesting look into the (early) politics of Trill concerning alien contact.
Well, I'm excited now. "Old Souls" (with a young McCoy) brings me officially into TOS territory!
Final Frontier (TOS novel ("Giant" novel),
1988)
See Also: 2267 - [Framing story] Takes place immediately after "City on the Edge of Forever" (TOS).
General Notes: Captain April back story. Takes place prior to the Enterprise’s first five-year mission.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Currently positioned with other 2267 stories (which is when the frame story of Final Frontier occurs).]
2246
"Though Hell Should Bar the Way" (short story, Enterprise Logs, 2000)
General Notes: Captain’s log at beginning of story gives date of October 10, 2246. Story ties in with incident at Tarsus IV (Governor Kodos, see "The Conscience of the King" (TOS)). The Enterprise’s
maximum safe cruising speed is warp seven (breaking Starfleet speed records of the time). It is "slightly more than a year" into the Enterprise’s first five year mission. April contemplates the creation of a new system of "stardates." Kor commands a D-6 Klingon battle cruiser (the Kut’luch). Starfleet had first encountered the Klingons "a few decades" prior to this story. Enterprise weapons: lasers and fusion torpedoes. Kruge is from Star Trek III: The Search for Spock (TOS). (April's crew in this story: Lorna Simon, Dr. Sarah Poole April, Carlos Florida, Dr. Laurence Marvick, Michelle Roberts, Spirit Claw Sanaway, and Issac Soulian.)
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/20/01):
"Though Hell Should Bar the Way" (Greg Cox, Enterprise Logs, 2000). Trek year: 2246 (log actually gives date of October 10, 2246). This is a fun little story giving us look at April and his crew. They are racing towards Tarsus IV to relieve the famine there (tying the story in with the "Conscience of the King" TOS episode). On the way they are confronted by a Klingon ship commanded by Captain Kor. Also aboard the Klingon ship is a young officer named Kruge (Star Trek III: The Search for Spock).
I don't have much to say about this one aside from that I enjoyed it. One interesting thing is that Captain April considers suggesting some system of "stardates" to Starfleet Command since traditional time-keeping has problems in space.
2248
Starfleet Academy: Crisis on
Vulcan (TOSya novel #1, 1996)
General Notes: Story is set prior to Spock entering Starfleet Academy in 2249. April's crew here contradicts the Diane Carey crew featured in "Though Hell Should Bar the Way", which takes place two years prior to this novel, and in the back story portions of Best Destiny (TOS), which takes place one year following it. The crew here: Christopher Pike (first officer), Ledrick Bann, Ricard Cheyney, Michael Daron, Selena Niles, Chief Engineer Powell, and Asst. Engineer Welborne. It is shown in this novel for the first time (chronologically) that there is some dissent on Vulcan to their relations with humans and/or the Federation (explored in more detail in Spock’s World (TOS)), and (more importantly) that Spock is the first Vulcan accepted to Starfleet Academy. Pike states that the Intrepid
(the Starfleet vessel with an entirely Vulcan crew, introduced in "The
Immunity Syndrome" (TOS)) was contributed by Vulcan to the Federation. At this time, no Vulcan had every mind melded with an alien. Spock decides to join Starfleet Academy instead of Vulcan Science Academy.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on ???):
Crisis on Vulcan (Star Trek: Starfleet Academy #1, young adult series) (Brad and Barbara Strickland, 1996) Trek year: 2248.
This short novel has some problems. The story is fine,
and the authors handle the character interaction (especially between Spock and
his parents) quite well.
The problematic thing is that they ignore the
Enterprise crew (under Captain April) established earlier by Diane Carey (in 1988's Final Frontier and 1992's Best Destiny), choosing to create characters of their own.
Taking this book by itself, this isn't too much of a
problem. However, tying it together with the other books/stories (as I am here)
makes it a discrepancy. If there were no other Captain April stories after this
one chronologically, one could assume that April simply has a new crew. However,
the April portions of Best Destiny occur one year after this one, and back on board are all of the Carey characters.
Skipping this problem for the moment, one interesting
choice is in making Christopher Pike Captain April's first officer in this
story. This presents the first meeting of Spock and Pike, and Pike encourages
Spock to join Starfleet Academy. (By the way, it is conceivable that April
switched first officers. In "Though Hell Should Bar the Way", First Officer Lorna Simon is described as an aging officer who might retire soon. In Prime Directive, she's back as first officer, but April tells George Kirk that "she's been out policing missions between Federation colonies". So Pike's presence here is not out of the question continuity-wise, although the rest of April's crew is.)
Another interesting thing is that this may be
chronologically the first instance of the "Spock is the first Vulcan in
Starfleet" idea (more specifically "the first Vulcan in Starfleet
Academy" in this book). Of course, this book was released in 1996, so it
was simply following on earlier accounts, none of which seem to have originated
on screen.
The plot is a pretty standard one. Sarek finishes up
negotiations on a troublesome peace treaty in a system wanting to join the
Federation. He and Spock are transported aboard the Enterprise back home, giving Spock the opportunity to see non-Vulcans in action. The ship is attacked and Spock saves the day with his alien computer skills (almost a Wesley Crusher-kind of situation except for with Spock it's not quite as annoying).
Back on Vulcan Sarek decides to send Spock off to the
Vulcan Science Academy early to try to set him back on the proper Vulcan track.
Soon, however, Spock is recalled to Vulcan when his mother is attacked and it
becomes apparent that someone is out to get Sarek out of vengeance.
It all ties back of course to the factions involved in
the peace treaty Sarek oversaw. And Spock's future enters into things again when
Captain April (communicated through Pike) informs Spock that he thought so
highly of how the Vulcan handled himself on the Enterprise that he submitted Spock for admittance at Starfleet Academy. (One other nitpick: Captain
April is not depicted here as he is in the Carey books. Here he comes
across as something of a old grouch, not as the more kindly professor type of
personality more or less created by Carey.)
2249
Best Destiny (TOS hardcover novel, 1992)
See Also: 2293 - [framing story, takes place soon after Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (TOS)].
General Notes: Captain April/George Kirk back story.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Currently positioned with other 2293 stories (which is when the frame story of Best Destiny occurs).]
2250
"Starfleet Academy!" (Star Trek Annual #2) (DC Comics, 1991)
General Notes: Kirk first enrolls at Starfleet Academy. Kirk first meets in this story Gary Mitchell, Carol Marcus, Matthew Decker (as Kirk’s instructor), Ben Finney (Dean of Students) Kyle, and Uhura. Chronologically our first look at the Kobayashi Maru test (Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan (TOS)). Other cross-references: Ruth and Finnegan are from "Shore Leave" (TOS), Ben Finney from "Court Martial" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/01):
Star Trek Annual #2 ("Starfleet Academy!") (DC Comics, 1991) (Peter David-writer, James W. Fry, Curt Swan and Arne Starr-artists) Trek date: 2250.
This is, I suppose, the first real attempt to show the
academy days of Kirk (or any other TOS character). It comes in a period where
David was no longer writing the monthly DC Trek comics (Howard Weinstein was)
but was still contributing occasional projects (advertised in this issue as
upcoming is Star Trek: The Next Generation: The Modala Imperative; it also states that Vendetta (TNG) would be hitting the shelves in one month).
I'm sure some of this stuff has been contradicted since
but it is still interesting. Kirk first meets several people here: Gary
Mitchell, Carol Marcus, Matthew Decker (his instructor), Ben Finney (Dean of
Students at the Academy), Finnegan, and (most importantly perhaps to fans) Uhura
(although she does not play a major role in the story).
When Kirk arrives (after a brief scene with his brother
Sam in Iowa), he is committed to doing well at the academy. As a result, he
comes across as stiff and a bit of a know-it-all to his fellow cadets. In
contrast, Mitchell (who has a photographic memory) has a very casual attitude
about everything. Of course, Kirk and Mitchell end up as roommates.
Other elements of the story include Kirk meeting Carol
Marcus at a party and a subplot of someone apparently having cheated on an exam.
When this starts to pull the class apart, Kirk takes it upon himself to
investigate who could have done it.
It is an enjoyable story. Both artists do a fine job,
although their styles do not exactly mesh (Fry had to drop out part way through
due to other commitments, doing only twenty pages). Fry has a nice fresh comics
style, while seasoned professional Swan (the Superman artist for many
fans) brings has a clean style of his own.
The only thing that bothered me was that David's take
on Carol Marcus seems a bit off at times. I guess I'm just not accustomed (from
her later appearance chronologically in Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan) to seeing her flirting so much and so blatantly with Kirk. Kirk also comes across as a bit *too* stiff and serious here compared with his more impulsive portrayal in books such as Carey's Best Destiny and the very next entry below.
Still, I would recommend this as one of the few
single-issue comics which fans should definitely search out due to it's subject
matter (along with the annuals in DC's previous Star Trek (TOS) series which present the stories behind the beginning and end of Kirk's first five year mission, and the excellent Star Trek: Debt of Honor graphic novel).
(Oh, we also get to see Kirk's girlfriend Ruth here.
She was introduced in "Shore Leave".)
Starfleet Academy: Aftershock (TOSya novel #2, 1996)
General Notes: Story is set soon before Starfleet Academy’s winter break in 2250 (Kirk’s freshman year, McCoy and Spock’s sophomore). McCoy is a transfer student, therefore a bit older than his classmates. McCoy first meets Kirk and Spock (separately) in this novel. Chronologically earliest reference to McCoy’s fear of transporters. Mentions that most Vulcans in Starfleet serve aboard the
Intrepid. Discrepancy between story and accompanying art show the Nightingale (a Starfleet medical) ship both as a Miranda- and Daedalus-class starship (a problem either way since the Star Trek Encyclopedia states that Daedalus-class ships were retired from service in 2196 and a
Miranda-class one is not seen until 2285 in Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan (TOS). One minor character is named Berthold, perhaps an intended connection with the "berthold rays" seen in "This Side of Paradise" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 6/23/01):
Aftershock (Star Trek: Starfleet Academy #2, young adult series) (John Vornholt, 1996). Trek year: 2250.
I enjoyed this one a bit better than Crisis on Vulcan, probably because I always enjoy reading McCoy-Spock stories.
This story takes place just before the winter break of
McCoy and Spock's second year at the academy and Kirk's first (meaning it must
take place soon or immediately after the DC comics Star Trek Annual #2 above since that story deals with Kirk taking an exam, assumedly his semester one; on the other hand Kirk could have been taking a mid-term type exam halfway through his first term, but that still would have been prior to this story).
We see McCoy first meet both Kirk and Spock here,
although separately. McCoy meets Kirk while playing a late night game of
football with other cadets. The two end up in hot water with the superintendent
after they crash into a secure area.
As punishment they are told to join service clubs. Kirk
is assigned to kitchen duty (after which we do not see Kirk again), while McCoy
joins the Disaster Relief Service Club. This forces him to miss going home
during the semester break which upsets him greatly.
He is teamed with a Vulcan cadet named Spock and a
human named Lisa Donald. Right from the start McCoy and Spock are at it, Spock's
logical and literal style infuriating McCoy.
After training, they are hastily called to a planet
undergoing massive earthquakes. While rescuing victims, Spock begins to suspect
that the "aftershocks" are not natural. Once it is discovered that
they are being artificially induced, the three are off to solve that mystery as
well.
A fun read. The only thing which really took me out of
the story for a moment was a discrepancy between the story and the accompanying
illustrations. The text states that the ship they travel in is a Miranda-class one, but the illustration on the facing page (and on the cover) shows a Daedalus-class one. Apparently the writer and artists were not on the
same page here. (I checked the Star Trek Encyclopedia and either choice is problematic. The Daedalus-class was retired from service in 2196, and of course the Miranda class did not show up for the first time until 2285 in Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan.)
2251
Starfleet Academy: Cadet Kirk (TOSya novel #3, 1996)
General Notes: Story takes place one year after Aftershock (TOS) and Spock mentions meeting Christopher Pike "a few years ago" (in Crisis on Vulcan (TOS)). Chronologically, it is the first time Kirk, Spock, and McCoy are all three together at the same time, and the first time Kirk and Spock meet (McCoy met both Kirk and Spock separately in Aftershock). Dr. Richard Daystrom ("The Ultimate Computer" (TOS)) is spoken of but does not appear in this story.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/26/01):
Cadet Kirk (Star Trek: Starfleet Academy #3, young adult series) (Diane Carey, 1996). Trek year: 2251.
Well, the classic triumvirate is finally united in this
story--although McCoy met both Spock and Kirk separately in Aftershock, all three come together for the first time here. Ensigns Spock and McCoy report to a shuttle heading to a science conference at Colony Cambria. In command of said shuttle is Cadet James T. Kirk on his first solo space mission. Kirk is a real stickler for regulations, coming immediately into conflict with McCoy (who only later recalls his earlier incident with James Kirk in Aftershock, the late night football game which cost him his winter break that year).
On the way, the shuttle is ambushed and the three find
themselves fighting off would be kidnappers. You see, a very important person, Dr. Richard Daystrom ("The Ultimate Computer" (TOS)), was supposed to have been on that shuttle but had to take another one instead (much to Cadet Kirk's disappointment) due to altered orders.
This is an interesting little story which allows us to
view how these very different characters would naturally feel about each other
initially, and for us to start to see their emerging respect for each other by
the story's end. They are not quite friends yet, but the seeds are definitely sown here. And Kirk first starts to realize that to succeed in Starfleet he will need to balance his adherence to regulations with what his instincts tell him to do.
My Brother's Keeper #1: Republic (TOS novel #85) - Stardate unknown
See Also: 2265 - [Chapters 1-5, plus last chapter] Stardate 1313.8, immediately after "Where No Man Has Gone Before" (TOS).
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[None. Have not yet read. Currently positioned
with other 2265 stories (which is when the frame story of Republic
occurs).]
2252
Vulcan's Glory (TOS novel #44, 1989)
General Notes: No other name is given for Number One, but she is said to be from Ilyria, and that she is a "genetically perfect being." Dr. Boyce had served with Pike for four years at the time of this story. The book does not state exactly when Pike first took command of the Enterprise (2251 according to the Star Trek Chronology), but it does state that it had been four years since he had last been to Areta, and two and a half years since he met Janeese on Earth (between Enterprise missions, another reason why this story should probably take place later than 2252). Janeese and Pike ended their relationship during another of Pike's leaves just prior to this book.
Chronological reading notes/summary (written on 9/26/01):
Vulcan's Glory (Star Trek #44) (D.C. Fontana, 1989). Trek year: 2252.
Vulcan's Glory is a wonderful story for Spock and/or general Vulcan fans. Fontana does a wonderful job with the early scenes on Vulcan, particularly those between Spock and his parents and Spock and T'Pring. From there the novel breaks into a rather typical three-prong tale but remains a very good read.
The book starts out with Spock on a brief leave before
being assigned to the Enterprise. During this leave, Spock is called by
his father to return home to settle things with his betrothed, T'Pring.
Spock does so, but continues to delay marrying T'Pring due to his Starfleet
commitments.
He then reports to the Enterprise, meeting Captain Christopher Pike and his fellow crewmates. Their first mission is to return to a planet Pike had visited earlier named Areta and to check on
diplomatic developments there between the three primary factions (desert nomads,
townspeople, and radiation-altered mutants). They are briefly taken off of this course however by clues to the location of a long-lost Vulcan artifact called the "Vulcan's Glory" (a large emerald). Ironically enough, the gem is found at Areta, and soon after Pike beams down on his diplomatic mission.
From there the story breaks into three directions: Pike
dealing with trouble among the clans originated by a Romeo and Juliet style
pairing of the son of a prominent townsman and the daughter of a nomad
chieftain, Spock's romantic feelings for a fellow Vulcan science officer, and
the presence of a murderer aboard the Enterprise who steals the Glory.
I would recommend this book to any TOS fan, especially
those of the pre-Kirk crew (there aren't too many Pike novels out there as you
know, and this is one of the first ones written).
However, I feel I should mention the inevitable
inconsistencies with the other books which were later released yet which take
place in this same time period. At the beginning of Vulcan's Glory, Spock has just completed a tour aboard the Artemis, where he served as third officer under a Captain Daniels. Later in the book, Number One tells Pike more about Spock from his service record. She says that Spock applied to Starfleet Academy himself (later contradicted by Crisis on Vulcan (TOS), which indicats that Captain April submitted Spock's application without Spock's knowledge).
Here's where things get a bit dicey. Number One says that Spock entered the Academy at the age of sixteen, majored in science and computer technology, and graduated at age nineteen. "He did the two years in the accelerated Vulcan course and one year in the required cadet working cruises aboard various ships. Once commissioned, he served for three years as
assistant science officer on a space cutter in Sol system. Two years ago,
he was promoted to lieutenant (j.g.) and has been serving as third officer and
science officer on the Artemis --long-range cruises" (37-38).
Obviously, this does not jive with the timeline
presented in the "Starfleet Academy" young adult books, which
themselves are based on the official (if not "canon") Star Trek
Chronology. According to the Chronology, Spock entered the Academy in 2249 (Crisis on Vulcan occurs just prior to this in 2248). The Chronology then states that Spock started serving (as an Academy cadet) under Pike on the Enterprise in 2252, three years later. The "Starfleet Academy" books work within this framework (although Spock is already an ensign in Cadet Kirk). Fontana, however presents a picture of Spock serving three years at the Academy and then five more years in space before being assigned to Enterprise, pushing this story back to 2257.
On the one hand, Fontana's version of events makes more
sense practically. It would be odd for even Spock to make third officer of
the Artemis virtually immediately after graduating from the Academy and second officer of the Enterprise one year later. On the other hand, sorting out continuity is not my purpose here. Rather, making my way chronologically through the Star Trek saga is, noting these little inconsistencies as I go for others to ponder.
Other interesting notes: No other name is given
for Number One, but she is said to be from Ilyria, and that she is a
"genetically perfect being" (apparently the Federation's laws against
genetic engineering do not extend to Ilyria). Dr. Boyce had served with
Pike for four years at the time of this story. I don't recall the book
stating when Pike first took command of the Enterprise (2251 according to
the Chronology), but it does state that it had been four years since he had last been to Areta, and two and a years since he met Janeese on Earth (between Enterprise missions, another reason why this story should probably take place later than 2252). Janeese and Pike ended their relationship during another of Pike's leaves just prior to this book.
The issue of couples aboard starships is addressed a
couple times in this book. On page eighty-six, Chief Engineer Caitlin
Barry tells Number One, "There are married couples in command posts on
other ships," and when Number One discovers that Spock and T'Pris were
romantically involved she reflects upon how Starfleet had "no strong rules on fraternization between officers" (157).
On other thing I found interesting was that in this
book it is said outright that starships carry extra dilithium crystals while I
know for a fact that other books have stated otherwise. I can't recall
which book at the moment (possibly Federation, since I read that not too long ago?), but at one point Kirk was thinking about how he always requested a back-up supply of crystals but Starfleet informed him that one set should be enough for standard voyages (obviously they hadn't been keeping up with Kirk's "standard" missions).
Oh, I almost forgot to mention that Lieutenant (j.g.)
Montgomery Scott first arrives aboard the Enterprise in this story as well (starting some turmoil himself with his "engine-room hooch").
"31st Century"
"Shockwave, Pts. I & II" (ENT
episode)/Shockwave (novelization, 2002)
See Also: 2152 - Main portion of story.
General Notes: Portion of story in which Archer is taken forward in time by
"Daniels", creating an alternate, desolate future. Timeline
presumably returns to normal upon Archer's return to 2152.
Chronological reading notes/summary:
[See main entry under 2152.]